Twist of Evil- A Vocaloid Fan-Fan Story

[MsZeroHarpuia]

nice lol rin got pwnt. I like Len over Rin. Maybe cause I like the left more.. L:

[Narutoandothermanga]

DA FUQ?

[sofitssofi]

LEN, NOW I'M GONNA KILL YOU!!

[Sasukefan2750]

sorry to say but len would NEVER EVER kill rin in the daughter of evil saga :P ><

[Narutoandothermanga]

@Sasukefan2750 I think that's one of the things that bothered me when I made this, and I think that's one of the reasons why I was so set on an alternate ending. Derp, I'm so lame. XD

This is more of a "what if" scenario I suppose.

In the saga, Len kind of has this...I guess you can say intense need to protect and serve his sister so I kind of took away that aspect, so it's kind of a "if he wasn't like that" scenario. That is, the personality they gave him is a "fan personality" in itself.

[Narutoandothermanga]

@Sasukefan2750 Continuing due to lack of characters. XD

As it is, Len doesn't have an actual personality unless you want to go with the manga personality. But actually, with that face on that cover art, it doesn't look like he'd do anything and it doesn't look like Rin would do anything. -derp-

Within the Daughter of Evil Series, no I don't think he'd kill Rin either. 8B

But in this little alternate world, he would...and did. The end. XD -brick'd-

[Sasukefan2750]

@Narutoandothermanga  XD okies! : 3

[HiraiHirata]

What the frick

[Narutoandothermanga]

@HiraiHirata XD Yeah just...disregard.

[LastOfAkatsuki]

weird

[Narutoandothermanga]

@LastOfAkatsuki Driew.

Frick yeah. XD

[LastOfAkatsuki]

@Narutoandothermanga lol

[ChibiFiFi101]

im sorry but this is gay

[Narutoandothermanga]

I'm sorry that it's homosexual to you. o:

Though I don't recall putting any KaitoLen in here or anything, like I totally would have. -looks over it again- Hm...?

[SheriiKitty]

GAHH LEN YOU DUMBASS ;_; RIN YOU EVEN DUMBER ASS *rolls on the floor*

[Narutoandothermanga]

o__o You okay there?

[SheriiKitty]

I don't really know. :D I think I'm fine now lolll

[karinbeanpoker]

but but rins not suppost to be a bitch *tears up* rin kills her but bu-....*faints*

[Narutoandothermanga]

I tried so hard not to make her seem that way. XD But I ended up making her seem that way because~

1. Why would Len kill her if she wasn't? (Plot)

2. I thought her dress was more bitch-like that cute lil' Rin. XD (Design)

You can still... disregard this. :D

[wTARTZAw]

in her life she had others always obey her. they never teached the right and wrong. in many parts of the story they talk about "minister" "evil ppl" who didnt care about her and made her act the way she did. at least some parts of her actions were caused by that.

[Narutoandothermanga]

@wTARTZAw Oh man, I never saw this post.

But yeah, I kind of left that out for the sake of... this crap. XD

And that's um...one of the twists I guess. >>;

S-So fail. OTL

[Megsaku]

Ummmzzzz.... O..K? ^^ That was really a bad ending T.T Lol! It was ok I guess...Besides that.

[Narutoandothermanga]

Yeah I know. Disregard you ever saw this or you might destroy your love for anything forever. Or maybe don't forget about it and think, "Hmmm... that was really bad! o: " And you'll grow to appreciate the original more than you did before. XD

[Megsaku]

Lol your probably right I might like the other one better lol! ^^

[Narutoandothermanga]

I know you will.

[winternoeast]

I like the old ending...

I know all are fan-made but...

[Narutoandothermanga]

You're supposed to like the other one more. XD