@Utopor -ok thank ya!I will site and listen to the whole thing this time. I usually do listen to enitre vidz but for some reason I just couldn't sit still! Take two!
he looks like perterpan and his last name sounds and looks like neverland.... just remember the directions to neverland ........ "third star to the right and straight on till morning!
The first part of the poem made me was to puncture my own eardrums. It was grating and cartoonish and annoying. He does a good shaggy impression. The second half was okay. Much better than the first.
granted this guy has an off-putting style sometimes, its not indicative of his entire body of work. Im very impressed with the way he conducts his professional career visiting obscure schools, churches, pubs in US and UK. he's been to my remote town twice and does extensive tours with not the largest of audiences. There's a lot too be said for his perseverance even if he doesnt have the strongest material.
Stop dissing this guy, geez, it was a well written poem with a plain-to-see message. Are you preforming in front of a crowd? do you have a youtube vid with over 35,000 views? No? I didnt think so, so STFU.
I remember when i 1st saw this, i thought it was the most painful and embarrasing thing ive almost ever seen. But now when i watch it again, i see the contrast he uses from his dorky/nerdy, to his powerful emotional ending. Not sure that the dorky part is absolutely necessary, but the ending was really good. I don't see how the ending was too "simple". I really loved th concept of putting his dying grandmother in the light of the greatest slam poet ever.
But that's the nature of slam poetry... it's about conveying emotion... and though other poems may elicit more thought and demand more analysis... slam poetry is supposed to convey strong messages because the mode of delivery combines words with gesticulation and acting.
That was...gosh...just awful. Open mic bad. The first five minutes were painful, but I kept watching, based on some comments here. The poem itself was trite and manipulative and pretentious. This will appeal to a lot of people, though, because a lot of people are pretty simple.
If you really want to experience slam poetry that will make you think, check out Rives.
I agree with the dude below who said that it's corny beyond belief. Maybe when I was 13 I would have thought the 'microphone of life' was cool, but now I just think its really trite. Slam seems like a great way of introducing kids to the power of language but if you want non-literary stand-up spoken word performance go to Bob Dylan, Allen Ginsburg and Lord Buckley. I can't see how this is poetry. It might be poetic.
This is GREAT. I didn't know what slam poetry was til I asked daughter tonite, after reading of a teacher who imported "slam poets" to her title 1 class....FIRST one I watched, (search for youtube, /brentweinbach was a CONSERVATIVE slammer, which I now believe MUST be rare after watching another "slamming" the Walmart cashier who cared about her soul as she checked out, etc...And now this one, only my 3rd or 4th, standing up for sanctity of all life, in a "death book" post Kavorkian (sp?) era!
To be completely honest I couldn't stand the way he delivered this until he stopped being quirky and nerdy or whatever you want to call it. I guess it's his thing haha..good stuff though.
i don't get it ... it's corny beyond belief - Hammed up bigger than a fat pig !! It's not poetry it's hysterical linguistic gymnastics shaken not stirred with mediocrity.
Pete MENTIONED in slam that he looked like Shaggy! This was so great, and a breath of fresh air after hearing the current president tell a questioner that the shear spunk, joy of life and vivacity of her 100-year-old (grand?) mother would NOT be enough, under "Obama-Care" (if "O" HAD an actual bill with his name on it!) to guarantee her a PACEMAKER- "O" said maybe a pain pill would be best. As someone who, early as '79 saw MD's with fingers in wind, deciding my fave Grandma's fate, BLESS PETE!
i really could barely stand his Dorky/Nerdy Deamenor and voice, but WOW am i glad i watched the end of it. He really should stick to the serious uplifting motivational type ish. He sent gave me chills at the end through his emotional delivery. I really cant respect his first 7 and half minutes, but BRAVO for that last part.
i'm pretty sure he did that on purpose. the dorkiness contrasts so much with the ending, that's why the ending is so great. especially how he transitions to the end part so abruptly. it gave me chills too.
I love Peter Nevland. My dad got to go to a conference in Texas for his work of Radio Ads and he worked with them for a whole week and i wanted to go soooo bad
I didn't like the voice he put on for the first half of the poem, but I really liked what he had to say about his grandmama. I also liked the shift from audience to guy, it was interesting.
O.o Intro is far too long. While what he says about his grandmother (when he finally gets to it) is valid, he has no need to hate on popular slam poets. They worked their way there with what they wrote and have devoted themselves to. In the slam poetry world it isn't looks and popularity it's about what you bring to the microphone and the sincerity of the performance.
godamn. This guy needs to shut the fuck up and just say his poem, A good poet doesnt need an intro. The poem is all that is needed to explain yourself.
A hypocritical critique of slam. His ending was just as self-indulgent and "soul-baring" as what he seems to dislike. Also his performance is incredibly awkward (none of his jokes hit home) and I just get a major vibe of overconfidence from him. Odd to put down Taylor Mali as it's quite evident he's ten times the poet Mr. Nevland is.
I think it's refreshing to see a poet have fun with what he's doing, anger and discontentment only get you so far. He managed to convey a LOT of emotion, and was able to do it with a pretty unique style.
UR SO HYPER AND UGLY U MOVE TO MUCH !U! KEEP ON SAYING UR THE BEST AND UR A SHOW OFF POETRY IS NOT U CLOWN IS MORE SUITABLE FOR U!!!!!hhhhhh listening makes me feel nerdy!! uuh STOP!
I didnt like his crazyness got in the way of me seeing the beauty of the poetry. I understand why he choose how to present his poetry like that but im not a fan. Also he tries to hard to make jokes and when the audience doesn't laugh it adds an awkward element to the performance.
hahahaa i would much rather watch this than actual "slam poetry"
republican328 2 days ago
I can click one minute and seven seconds forever
HoorayforOranges 1 week ago
gingers what can u honestly xpect
esmith4646 2 weeks ago
SCOOBY DOO WHERE ARE YOU!!
BSTheMadman1 3 weeks ago
Shaggy
Ntaryamira 1 month ago
It's Shaggy!!!
lizvega40 1 month ago
Where's scooby? :O
Gadgetgal14 1 month ago
such a nice guy, was a please to talk to.
clottoyup 1 month ago
Bullshit.
roahbiesinger 2 months ago
Is this a rant ?
AGee671 2 months ago
Is there a poem somewhere in here? Or is it just that he wrote a poem?Maybe I stopped watching too soon
MegLuvzLife 2 months ago 2
@MegLuvzLife Not until about 5 minutes in.... the poem is called "The most amazing slam poet" ...
Utopor 2 months ago 2
@Utopor -ok thank ya!I will site and listen to the whole thing this time. I usually do listen to enitre vidz but for some reason I just couldn't sit still! Take two!
MegLuvzLife 2 months ago
I tried saying to myself "This isn't shagy...this isn't shagy...this isn't shagy..." Til he started losing himself. It's Shagy.
AysoPVP 2 months ago 3
Can I plz have my 8 minutes of my night back...
ZeCrossJointa 2 months ago
My Life will say... DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYUM
Prizazzle1990 3 months ago
SHAGGY!! what happened to scooby?:)
Man, you got older
evilgenuis13 3 months ago
hes great and it takes balls to lose yourself and talk to a less than breathing crowde. they better give it up!
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TruePoetryShockz 3 months ago
OMFG!!! IT IS SHAGGY!!!!
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gbellavable 5 months ago
Wow! i thought I wasn't gonna like it,because it got kinda boring for me.But the last line just made it for me.Great!!
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tiecethepoet 5 months ago
he looks like perterpan and his last name sounds and looks like neverland.... just remember the directions to neverland ........ "third star to the right and straight on till morning!
twilightfan321123 5 months ago
@twilightfan321123 That's SECOND star to the right. Trust me. I know my Peter Pan.
yesiampsycho 3 months ago
Dude Shaggy can slam
AmandaFlowz 5 months ago
Does he ever get to the poem?
Ianhoulihan 5 months ago
This slam made me cry! Great stuff, just beautiful. It really opened my eyes after a long day... Thank you. :)
lostcause525 6 months ago
oh myy...
ccreacy818 7 months ago
poem starts at 5:00, and ends at 8:05
MCJIGGYCHEESE 7 months ago 3
When does the poem actually start?
oomanitsamanda 8 months ago
I see what u did there,
Graiskye 8 months ago
There was a poem?
tulip2111 9 months ago
sad all you guys can say, o hey look shaggy.....grate poem respect
BraceForSilence 9 months ago 2
scoooby dooby doooo!
mattthebacklash360 10 months ago 2
ruh roe
GraphicAbility 10 months ago
Shane Koyczab is better
timhachkowski 10 months ago 9
like whoooaaah scoob !
gangeschunk 11 months ago 3
Raggy? You ate too many scooby snacks! And it's awesome.
RayRyusuke 11 months ago
The first part of the poem made me was to puncture my own eardrums. It was grating and cartoonish and annoying. He does a good shaggy impression. The second half was okay. Much better than the first.
pegtalay 11 months ago
It took me til 1:37 to realize there was actually an audience.
DesmonJones 1 year ago 4
granted this guy has an off-putting style sometimes, its not indicative of his entire body of work. Im very impressed with the way he conducts his professional career visiting obscure schools, churches, pubs in US and UK. he's been to my remote town twice and does extensive tours with not the largest of audiences. There's a lot too be said for his perseverance even if he doesnt have the strongest material.
goldbloom91 1 year ago
hes kinda crazy
erinnnnnnnnnbabyyxD 1 year ago
5:26... pause it there. hilarious
destructopuppy 1 year ago
"I wrote a poem"
ras3199 1 year ago
thats terrible, you wish you had his skills
beaturwings 1 year ago
He needs to be a Voice Actor. Like, seriously.
PrettyAbigail 1 year ago
man, that crowd should of been way bigger for you man, that was AWESOME!
wollymann 1 year ago
Very nice gift to your grandmother... Good Man!
AmericanCitizenship 1 year ago
Skip to 7:13 and turn it to mute, you will not be sorry
jesseshulman 1 year ago 4
@jesseshulman your a jerk ! just cause u dont feel that way doesn't mean u gotta ruin it for everyone else.
1821angel 1 year ago
no intro
dudewhyfi 1 year ago
wen he stopped bein so goofy nd kalmed down
the poem got a whole lot better
flash829 1 year ago
This was unusually bad. Exceptionally bad. If you're about to watch this, skip to 6:50.
HippiePowered 1 year ago
i want to beat you with a tire iron.
odensmeadhorn 1 year ago 3
pretty good haha
cheeseit126 1 year ago
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sketchyandshifty 1 year ago
Stop dissing this guy, geez, it was a well written poem with a plain-to-see message. Are you preforming in front of a crowd? do you have a youtube vid with over 35,000 views? No? I didnt think so, so STFU.
sketchyandshifty 1 year ago
this fool is an idiot!!!
Mratking1 1 year ago
Im not with that slam shit just poetry thats it
thepolodon21 1 year ago
@thepolodon21 this aint really that great man, but check out bnv and things like that they are pretty nice
snakekilla 1 year ago
I love this we all need to let out our inner nerd :P
fmoloney 2 years ago
Shaggy?
battleroyaleveteran 2 years ago 135
@battleroyaleveteran green shirt, red hair.... shaggy from scooby and shaggy
just clearing that up
mikejbott 1 year ago
I remember when i 1st saw this, i thought it was the most painful and embarrasing thing ive almost ever seen. But now when i watch it again, i see the contrast he uses from his dorky/nerdy, to his powerful emotional ending. Not sure that the dorky part is absolutely necessary, but the ending was really good. I don't see how the ending was too "simple". I really loved th concept of putting his dying grandmother in the light of the greatest slam poet ever.
Warren2TheG 2 years ago
But that's the nature of slam poetry... it's about conveying emotion... and though other poems may elicit more thought and demand more analysis... slam poetry is supposed to convey strong messages because the mode of delivery combines words with gesticulation and acting.
DemonSlayer88 2 years ago
That was...gosh...just awful. Open mic bad. The first five minutes were painful, but I kept watching, based on some comments here. The poem itself was trite and manipulative and pretentious. This will appeal to a lot of people, though, because a lot of people are pretty simple.
If you really want to experience slam poetry that will make you think, check out Rives.
davidgeorge11 2 years ago 3
I agree with the dude below who said that it's corny beyond belief. Maybe when I was 13 I would have thought the 'microphone of life' was cool, but now I just think its really trite. Slam seems like a great way of introducing kids to the power of language but if you want non-literary stand-up spoken word performance go to Bob Dylan, Allen Ginsburg and Lord Buckley. I can't see how this is poetry. It might be poetic.
auggieanddaddy 2 years ago
this was jsut a really bad story
nickjkno 2 years ago
This is GREAT. I didn't know what slam poetry was til I asked daughter tonite, after reading of a teacher who imported "slam poets" to her title 1 class....FIRST one I watched, (search for youtube, /brentweinbach was a CONSERVATIVE slammer, which I now believe MUST be rare after watching another "slamming" the Walmart cashier who cared about her soul as she checked out, etc...And now this one, only my 3rd or 4th, standing up for sanctity of all life, in a "death book" post Kavorkian (sp?) era!
ednorandrewrowe 2 years ago
To be completely honest I couldn't stand the way he delivered this until he stopped being quirky and nerdy or whatever you want to call it. I guess it's his thing haha..good stuff though.
BlackThoughtTB 2 years ago 2
i don't get it ... it's corny beyond belief - Hammed up bigger than a fat pig !! It's not poetry it's hysterical linguistic gymnastics shaken not stirred with mediocrity.
paulpritchard 2 years ago
Kinda looks like Shaggy.
jholt89 2 years ago 40
dude that is shaggy
wordupwhitey 2 years ago 2
Pete MENTIONED in slam that he looked like Shaggy! This was so great, and a breath of fresh air after hearing the current president tell a questioner that the shear spunk, joy of life and vivacity of her 100-year-old (grand?) mother would NOT be enough, under "Obama-Care" (if "O" HAD an actual bill with his name on it!) to guarantee her a PACEMAKER- "O" said maybe a pain pill would be best. As someone who, early as '79 saw MD's with fingers in wind, deciding my fave Grandma's fate, BLESS PETE!
ednorandrewrowe 2 years ago
@jholt89 he looks A LOT like Shaggy... not to mention the reference to shaggy near the end.
rawithers179 1 year ago
@jholt89 Kinda sounds like him too when he begins his poem.
DoodleTaffy 4 months ago
@jholt89 Kinda sounds like him too when he begins his poem. Nevermind, I think, he does it on purpose. lol. And this just got sad --> bittersweet!
DoodleTaffy 4 months ago
i really could barely stand his Dorky/Nerdy Deamenor and voice, but WOW am i glad i watched the end of it. He really should stick to the serious uplifting motivational type ish. He sent gave me chills at the end through his emotional delivery. I really cant respect his first 7 and half minutes, but BRAVO for that last part.
Warren2TheG 2 years ago
i'm pretty sure he did that on purpose. the dorkiness contrasts so much with the ending, that's why the ending is so great. especially how he transitions to the end part so abruptly. it gave me chills too.
brightonlaurel 2 years ago 2
4:55
BicycleRider09 2 years ago 3
thanks for doing that...
EmceeGray 2 years ago
I love Peter Nevland. My dad got to go to a conference in Texas for his work of Radio Ads and he worked with them for a whole week and i wanted to go soooo bad
jorypants 2 years ago
I loved it although the intro wasn't nesessary it's good for peeps just getting into slam
AmbiixROX 2 years ago
If you really want to hear a wicked slam poet watch Shane Koyczan.
saoirse56 2 years ago
Yeah, Shane is pretty neat. He's definitely one of my faves. Krystle Mullin is also nifty, as well as White Noise Machine.
vgirl250 2 years ago
I didn't like the voice he put on for the first half of the poem, but I really liked what he had to say about his grandmama. I also liked the shift from audience to guy, it was interesting.
sadbrwneyes989 2 years ago
There`s only 3 people in the audience clapping at the end. Guaranteed self promo schlock.
rhesuspieces81 2 years ago
ZZZZ.... TOTally unnecessary intro dude.
Sorry - i didn't make it to whatever it was you were introducing - lost interest
williamstdog9 2 years ago
Wow... I thought his intro was annoying. It doesn't even compare to how ridiculously stupid he sounds when he actually starts.
drumcapt0708 2 years ago
i agree !!
paulpritchard 2 years ago
O.o Intro is far too long. While what he says about his grandmother (when he finally gets to it) is valid, he has no need to hate on popular slam poets. They worked their way there with what they wrote and have devoted themselves to. In the slam poetry world it isn't looks and popularity it's about what you bring to the microphone and the sincerity of the performance.
vgirl250 2 years ago
did fu..ing get on with it spring to mind
arrghgarry 2 years ago
Actually, yes it did xD
vgirl250 2 years ago
hey guys i dont know what yalls probs r but i love this guy!!!
ummmmmable 2 years ago
4:55 for anyone who doesn't want to watch the pre-poem preamble.
mqnwbevrctxuzi 2 years ago 4
thank you
musickween312 2 years ago
thanks so much
pixie453 2 years ago
You rock.
noaruto 2 years ago
@mqnwbevrctxuzi thnx dude. the best comment
generatorium 1 year ago
STFU NOOBS.
Lvl5Paladin 2 years ago
He was really awkward.
And the intro was far too long.
And the poem wasn't really that good.
peebzzz 2 years ago
He looks like Shaggy, and isn't very funny
EpicFailMan 2 years ago
godamn. This guy needs to shut the fuck up and just say his poem, A good poet doesnt need an intro. The poem is all that is needed to explain yourself.
Padooshka 2 years ago 4
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minilik99 2 years ago
Not funny enough for comedy =[
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florav 2 years ago
Too much intro and too much shitty comedy for a serious poem.
kywhitne 2 years ago
No good. How does this have 4 stars right now?
kywhitne 2 years ago
A hypocritical critique of slam. His ending was just as self-indulgent and "soul-baring" as what he seems to dislike. Also his performance is incredibly awkward (none of his jokes hit home) and I just get a major vibe of overconfidence from him. Odd to put down Taylor Mali as it's quite evident he's ten times the poet Mr. Nevland is.
NoGoodNamesAvailible 2 years ago
no... not for me... hes like one of hte comedians who do the open mic night and fall flat on his face...
HFIL666 2 years ago
I think it's refreshing to see a poet have fun with what he's doing, anger and discontentment only get you so far. He managed to convey a LOT of emotion, and was able to do it with a pretty unique style.
MrGrunge88 2 years ago
MEH, he does looks like shaggy and the voice, nor the shirt helps
triptiko 2 years ago
nice performance, powerful speaker... he has a different style... lots of arm waving... i guess can go with that.
twil9ght 2 years ago
The ending was awesome. great job.
BLONDIE6208 2 years ago
kinda painfull to watch
colinandphil 2 years ago
You have never been more right.
flattilre 2 years ago
He felt really awkward, but the poem held alot of weight and resonated well.
Eppe360 2 years ago
This is remarkably annoying.
TheOopsGirl 2 years ago 2
thats the dumbest shit ive ever seen.
figliodigiacomo 2 years ago
haha, i like the poem.
He's like Shaggy from Scooby Doo!
qwerasdfzcv12 2 years ago
Hahahah he does look like shaggy.
motorguitarist 2 years ago
i think he has brain damage or somthingg
Deathhgrimm 2 years ago
UR SO HYPER AND UGLY U MOVE TO MUCH !U! KEEP ON SAYING UR THE BEST AND UR A SHOW OFF POETRY IS NOT U CLOWN IS MORE SUITABLE FOR U!!!!!hhhhhh listening makes me feel nerdy!! uuh STOP!
Deathhgrimm 2 years ago
I had lunch with Tali Mali and had a debate on what defines "holy moment". lol
Jinijojo 2 years ago
I didnt like his crazyness got in the way of me seeing the beauty of the poetry. I understand why he choose how to present his poetry like that but im not a fan. Also he tries to hard to make jokes and when the audience doesn't laugh it adds an awkward element to the performance.
JaminDamon 3 years ago
he is a bit hyper
Jinijojo 2 years ago
nothing amazing about this
cubanmodel123 3 years ago
He goes to my church
yewtoober18 3 years ago
sounds like eric foreman from 'that 70's show'
fili44 3 years ago
This guy sounds like Scooby Doo :-) Keep up the good work.
Jdamnitok 3 years ago
Shaggy? anyone? the voice, the look
dukenukem001 3 years ago
mmmmmmm yeah
nemo528 3 years ago
He's pretty good.
That was a great tribute, for sure.
bummercucumber 3 years ago
INCONCEIVABLE!
ByteSmasher 3 years ago
I totally agree... Incredible! Inconceivable!
From me - just two words: Exploding Emotions!!!
Kamengo 3 years ago
he doesn't compare to Shane Koyczan in any way at all.
Ro55iter 3 years ago 2
yeah i totally agree
travi360 3 years ago
anis mojgani is way better than all these fags
bigdee18joemama18 3 years ago
I think he talked a bit too much. This IS for the poetry after all.
Which, was alright, but I couldn't really get the whole first half. From a listener's aspect. The voices and all.
Just my opinion though, I'm not trying to bash.
heartb34tx 3 years ago
He talks a little too much.
jenikyula 3 years ago 2
great job shaggy-what's scooby doing these days?
crusadekid 3 years ago 48
hilarious. absolutely perfect.
Ro55iter 3 years ago
eh.
sandnessmj 3 years ago
He's okay.
mmkayumm 4 years ago
nice
esta411 4 years ago
very good.
Philmd 4 years ago
i like the metaphor of alzheimer's bullets
FearTheClwns272 4 years ago
Totally awesome!
19Donna55 4 years ago
Jesus, did we have to get his whole life story?
philemoncrowley 4 years ago
bad
afrohead 4 years ago