Very creepy. Story was only spoilt for me because if the dad was so concerned about her going down to the cellar, he would have just gone home. You wouldn't put your child through something you knew was going to scare them senseless.
But it was still original and I have to admit I didn't guess the ending.
Having moved very recently into our new house, my mother took a box from the car and told me to put it in the basement. I took the box and headed to the basement door. Well, there was a door. But there was no basement. LOL just kidding XD i guess i just wanted to say "wow this story's awesome o_o"
i will forever be afraid to go to my basement and if my power ever goes out and the breaker box is in the basement....id run from my house screeming like a 5 year old girl...im an 18 year old dude...it wouldnt be a pretty site...great job on the video good scare!!!
"six-hundread and fourthy-seven... dad? who build that house? he's an idiot.. six-hundread and fourthy-eight... Just a good thing I didn't fell at the begining.. six-hundread and fourthy-nine.."
whoa !!!... Whoa!!!.... im half way in so far very good.. ok i left fo a while then came back ... and ive read some comments ... and im guessin she doesnt even make it down the staircase...... which would fking suck for her.... HOLY SHIT ! 4th step cold breeze, AND shes still going ?!?!?!? 8:29 < is she possed or did the ghost take the call? still watching...... credits ??? wtf .... shes still counting.... WHAT HAPPENED ?!?!?
Great ending! I made the foolish mistake of writing this off as tat and I was going to stop watching, but gosh; that ending sent shivers down my spine. Very good, and thanks for the upload.
How did she die? If that's the case. Odd, very odd. Well, won't be going to down to my cellars ever again, even though I haven't even got a cellar, still not going down!
There was a story by Marghanita Laski called "The Tower" which has a similar plot. The woman in the story climbs to the top of a tower, counting the steps as she goes. When she starts down again, she counts to the bottom...and keeps counting...worth checking out, if you haven't read it.
I SHAT myself watching this! All alone in the middle of the night! in my bed, Bloody Hell. I could not watch her going down those stairs... I had to look away. Shit! My heart!
Watched this in class :D
LittleMakii 1 month ago
She should had went to bed.
DiploVash 1 month ago
katie
fity1100 1 month ago
weird that she didnt use the phone as a torch
MrBadboy145 1 month ago 2
Can anybody read what it says on the father's cellphone right at the end?
MrsNorris55 1 month ago
@MrsNorris55 It just says Katie
whateveridkyeah 1 day ago
Very creepy. Story was only spoilt for me because if the dad was so concerned about her going down to the cellar, he would have just gone home. You wouldn't put your child through something you knew was going to scare them senseless.
But it was still original and I have to admit I didn't guess the ending.
jabberwocky88 2 months ago
maybe katie go to bed?
bubblesdew6 2 months ago
bloody hell, im not being funny, but if my dad was acting all concerned and scared on the phone i wuld be like fuck it im outta here
xCazxful 2 months ago
I totally expected that there would be more steps but it was still creepy as hell, and the dad's reaction!
redwolffclaw 2 months ago
I didn't expect that.. but it's defiantly original and creepy as hell~
meowmeth 2 months ago
1 step per minute
Saikz16 3 months ago
I'd just leave the house :/ screw the basement
0ThatCostsMoney0 3 months ago 2
the ending was kind of predictable for me, but it's still good :)
peppo2022 3 months ago
Why did it take less time to go down steps 11-50 than it took to go down 1-10?
Bloody drama queen!
quazz79 3 months ago 5
@quazz79 maybe because she was now dead and descending to hell?
VinnyMonster1 2 months ago
46... 47... 48... *Calls phone*
Yes, Darling?
Daddy, I was just playing!
JackOfBlades434 3 months ago 10
@JackOfBlades434 she should said: Dad, I think I go wrong stair . . . . .
HikaruMatsuoka1 2 months ago
Ahh, 240p... we meet again. En Garde!
CrucifyTheBastard 3 months ago 5
i live in ireland! thank god i dont have a basement, though...
clubpenguin1212100 3 months ago
Having moved very recently into our new house, my mother took a box from the car and told me to put it in the basement. I took the box and headed to the basement door. Well, there was a door. But there was no basement. LOL just kidding XD i guess i just wanted to say "wow this story's awesome o_o"
Justdontaskmewhat 3 months ago
if i were her after reaching the 4th step i would say to hell with this!and run out the house and stay at my friend's place
brendanjoke 3 months ago
Ha! I live in Florida. we don't have basements.
hinata8pamela 3 months ago
i thought it would be longer, but now i don't know how im gonna sleep now.
13doctorwho 3 months ago
awww. poor baby!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MrAnthony78666 3 months ago
i will forever be afraid to go to my basement and if my power ever goes out and the breaker box is in the basement....id run from my house screeming like a 5 year old girl...im an 18 year old dude...it wouldnt be a pretty site...great job on the video good scare!!!
flippythechipmunk 3 months ago
short but creepy, tnkx:)
Suppressingfire 4 months ago
Phenomenally effective and scary as hell.
Either the thing that haunted the basement -- if there was one -- got her, or she just literally died of fright.
MrsNorris55 4 months ago
brilliant, and super creepy ,i love those creepy short storys
dhron4444 4 months ago 3
What does it write on the dad's phone's screen?
fulyai 5 months ago
@fulyai I tried enlarging the screen but everything got too fuzzy for me to read it. :-(
MrsNorris55 4 months ago
wow excellent cell phone converage
joebro5548 5 months ago
@joebro5548 Lol.
CinamorrolCutie99 3 months ago
She was out side walking on the waterwheel...4832,4833.4834...
watnee46474 5 months ago 7
I like the part where you counted stairs.
lordtalon69 5 months ago
brilliant!
theoriginalwordup 5 months ago
That was horrible, lol.
Wyrdnews 6 months ago
One of the best shorty films ever made in Ireland.
dublinbarterclub 7 months ago
what was the ending?
alyannaaa13 7 months ago
The whole time the dad was holding the phone a good inch from his ear. What the hell? Turn your phone down if you can't even hold it to your ear. :\
GEhotpants101 8 months ago
shes on a escalator
Arkenjiel 8 months ago
"six-hundread and fourthy-seven... dad? who build that house? he's an idiot.. six-hundread and fourthy-eight... Just a good thing I didn't fell at the begining.. six-hundread and fourthy-nine.."
oly355 10 months ago 16
THIS IS SCARY SHIT :O GO BAKC UP :(
JessILYJ123 11 months ago
THIS IS SCARY SHIT :O
JessILYJ123 11 months ago
I wonder if she met Dante?
rayblack2004 1 year ago 8
Yea that was awesome! I have to go to bed in like an hour too, = ( Hope i can sleep lol.
liv2scuba 1 year ago
I'm still wondering what on earth she'd find at the bottom of those steps. LOL.
rachelchunter 1 year ago
She should have taken the elevator.
herbaliser555 1 year ago 57
@herbaliser555 13th floor elevator.
Cerpth 1 month ago
Not bad, for something so short.
Offshoreorganbuilder 1 year ago
whoa !!!... Whoa!!!.... im half way in so far very good.. ok i left fo a while then came back ... and ive read some comments ... and im guessin she doesnt even make it down the staircase...... which would fking suck for her.... HOLY SHIT ! 4th step cold breeze, AND shes still going ?!?!?!? 8:29 < is she possed or did the ghost take the call? still watching...... credits ??? wtf .... shes still counting.... WHAT HAPPENED ?!?!?
titanium352 1 year ago
Wow! At first I thought it was gonna be a typical ghost story...Girl reached the tenth step then the ghost pops out.
This is refreshing ^_^ Great Story!
Tarmacpunk 1 year ago
poor girl though =/ I don't think she clearly don't deserves that
oly355 1 year ago
That ending took me by surprise. Subtle, but really creepy...
ellydeiadrete 1 year ago
@ellydeiadrete haha yeah. and you know what? after the 4rth step, I would have just said ''you know what? f*k the fuses. I go to bed'' xD
oly355 1 year ago 3
Superb story!
MosaicMaiden 1 year ago
Great ending! I made the foolish mistake of writing this off as tat and I was going to stop watching, but gosh; that ending sent shivers down my spine. Very good, and thanks for the upload.
Krangojolly 1 year ago
I like that she kept counting through the credits.
tourniquette1988 1 year ago
Oh, that's clever. And disturbing.
thesanantoniokid 1 year ago 6
I like this kind of drama horror i also watched a video like it called the French Doors and theirs a kids show called Freaky which is good
tristram24 2 years ago
so she was never found again?
knoa123 2 years ago
@knoa123 No, because she's a hundred miles down.
CinamorrolCutie99 3 months ago
WHEREVER she went, this was very good! Thanks for the upload.
wrght9185 2 years ago
That was really good. I wasn't expecting that
grinners18 2 years ago
Oh very very good indeed, I wasnt expecting that!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
Woah. She must've found a stairway to hell. Freaky. =oS
rachelchunter 2 years ago 3
crazyyyyyy it does leaves a lot to the imagination
laylowtech 2 years ago
Creeped me out, leaves a lot to the imagination, I agree with the other comment I think she went to hell for some unexplained reason!
Thank you.
MosaicMaiden 3 years ago 4
really spooky
dhron4444 3 years ago
How did she die? If that's the case. Odd, very odd. Well, won't be going to down to my cellars ever again, even though I haven't even got a cellar, still not going down!
bigbadreddog 3 years ago 8
There was a story by Marghanita Laski called "The Tower" which has a similar plot. The woman in the story climbs to the top of a tower, counting the steps as she goes. When she starts down again, she counts to the bottom...and keeps counting...worth checking out, if you haven't read it.
jkeats52 3 years ago 2
thank you
Lucas7Claus 2 years ago
i don't get it.
babeyui0 3 years ago 2
i seen this story when i was 14 it was so cool and still is
eileengoth 3 years ago
i thought it was very effective. i think the ending meant that she was slowly walking down to hell - that she was dead.
1979394 3 years ago 43
Wasn't scary but I dont get the ending at all she is frozen at 9 then she makes 10 and then she was supposed to open the powerbox. My guess is:
1. She was possessed.
2. She was dead and went threw the walls.
3. A different room???
scottuchiha 3 years ago
I SHAT myself watching this! All alone in the middle of the night! in my bed, Bloody Hell. I could not watch her going down those stairs... I had to look away. Shit! My heart!
Tessietots 3 years ago
i didnt get it either
spirituallysensative 3 years ago
Did'nt quite get this one but it sure was terrifying!
creolelady182 3 years ago