If We Kiss... A Jonas Brothers Story. Chapter 12

[okeydokey22]

I luv this series, sorry havent commented on early chapters but ive just been wanting to get to the next chapter as quickly as possible. its great, ill say it again i luv it :) and i have over 100 to read

If you have time between amazing writing can you check out my story "Still Hiding"

emmzxx:)

[Jobrosarehott21]

Awwa. They didn't get to kiss... :[ Darn. Still a good chapter though! :]

[charlie0777]

bronest??????? BRONEST johnson!?!?!

[misshoneyem]

I LOVE NICK JONAS..!!

[NickJonasFansite101]

Oh my god that part so0o0o0o confused me

[InTheLandofLove44]

lol thinking was repeated so many times! i had trouble controlling my laughter b/c im in panera bread and u no how they have wi-fi..well i laughed out loud like REALLY loud..like Demi Lovato laugh loud in the beginning and everyone stared at me like i was high...lol AMAZING STORY!!

[raindown1321]

SWOON.

haha i love it!

[DemiDuhh]

why are your episodes so good, i have no idea but i swear im hooked, damn you, i wanna sleep hahaa jokes,

well i do want to sleep but i aint im reading these ...

may i ask are you in this?

like are you brooke or summer?

if you are im gonna guess your summer?

comment backk :D x

[AllyandFroggy]

oh yeah that happen to my friend once i caght it right away she didnt haha

[AllyandFroggy]

wat is less then three things?

[AllyandFroggy]

love it adn i would help but im a little late haha

[TheTwilightTwins232]

Hahahaha!!! I started laughing so hard when Kevin said "Wait! No,nevermind...Carry on!! I almost died of laughter!! Your such an awesome writer!!! :D

[zefronbleu101]

Wait! No, never mind Carry on! Kevin grins and closes the door.

lolll i love kevin

[Jobrosarehott21]

Hmm. I wonder what they're thinking! Haha. This is soooo good! I can't get over it. :]

[aprilangel94]

I love all of these so very much<3 But this one confuses me a bit...

[coeyjbfan93]

i like it in just summer's POV, but a little change couldn't hurt. and lets say their in new york, they do a lot of show there so it only makes sense that they would stay there another day. lol

[xoxogg77]

i think u should deffinaly change POV's. and a for location preferences, i say CALI BABY!!! wat's more romantic than a sunset on the beach. and wats better that a veiw of the beach from your bed room!?! California is awesome! and i also think that they should b home. or maybe they could switch off. like a little bit of both.

[jadealexmorgan]

I'm home sick today too :(

but at least I got to read these!

you should check out my story: Moving Back Into Your Heart...

if you have time that is and want to read some! :)

and I think that switching POV's would be cool! :D

[cutierose1234]

haha i so loved this chapter! Same as stacy down there BUT you don't really wanna know what I'm thinking oooooh! haha

Yes, you should change POV's, like when Nick and Summer were about to kiss...his POV would be awesome then!...If you know what I mean....lol

I think they should be in New Jersey because if they are staying one more day then they can stay in their house or something like that lol :D

[StacyLuvzNickJonas]

ooohhh this is so awesome!!!

if they are thinking what im thinking they want nick covered in chocolate sauce, whipped cream and strawberries ....

fruit fondant with a twist ;D

haha im joking lol...or am I???

POST MORE!!