Ya know for this being on a college field, this is pretty darn cool guys! I would've felt sooo jipped if I was the guy who got stuck with the blaster, lol.
that was very very good, well im mexican so sorry about my english, this are my tips: When some guys used the force, it seems to be a reverse scene, and when those two guys hit.. (hitted? lol I know it is wrong, you know.. the verb hit in past xD) well they "hited" the grass... the lightsabers... bounced, so, there are some changes u can try, but it was awesome really, congratulations.
I just realized how silly it looks to do the whole Move-slow-and-speed-up-the-film-later-trick looks on a small time camera. I've seena few people do this and I suggesting using it with caution and only when the camera is moving around more.
Wow, very well put together except sometimes a sound was off here and there and, as Zypheres stated, the force effects/sounds would be off a lot as well. I think the lightsabers, though, were done very well and think you definately have the potential to be a professional.
Very impressive, very excellent work. Does need a bit of improvement however. More realist death-blows and a bit more work on the lightsaber/force effects. I'm really looking forward to see another one of your works.
The blaster FX is a little off, but I'm not going to hold that against you, as you did some how manage to add it into an otherwise 'saber rich' battle. I give you a 4 out of 5
That's impressive...a lot of rotoscoping there. To bad you could see shadows of the sabers, that's because you filmed in a bright location. But it's ok, that even occasionally happend in the first star wars films.
Funny how they give the poor fat kid the blaster. Excellent video though, thechnical problems aside this must have been a shit ton of work! I'm impressed!
Hey, don't be too strict here. This was a good Star Wars movie. The only bug was that the sabers were too clear. In SW some of the white shape is left behind when the saber is moving fast. The other thing is that in some of the last shots you can see the shadow of the stick you used when you were shooting. The lightsabers is shining. That's why it's called a LIGHTsaber. Try to not get the shadow into the picture next time. Except of these two things, this was a great Star Wars parody.
it was ok. the effects werent that great (flashes u could barely see, no motion effect) and the choreography was ok. the end was bad. rolling around like that? and the saber would of left a burnt mark on his shirt after u stabbed him, and since u had to takes of the same shot one with the blade in the hilt and one without ( i could tell this by the bad editing) u could have put a burnt mark! But other than these things it was ok. oh, and bad camera ( director ).
hey shut up lets see you do that then if your so good that must have taken hours to edit when u ahve done summat like or better then u can comment on it u dumass
why is everyone getting mad at me? evryone else has said the same things as i did guys, did u read the other posts? oh an xanatos 125 u quoted :when u ahve done summat like or better then u can comment on it u dumass, well click on my name and check out my star wars lightsaber duel before u go out calling people dumbasses.
continuation....and ya it is a ton of work but i'm not trying to be mean i'm telling them how to improve. and the vid was not gosh awful but it just could have been better and i was telling them how to make it better.
i did, so where r the burn marks on ur dead guy? and pitting summat cool like rebel battle agenst "chipmonk speed lightsabre fight" aint ur best arguement, oh and theres helpful critazism from a SUPERIOR director, and then there is wa uve sed. "oh, and bad camera ( director )." not helpful
if u would have whatched carefully the saber did not go all the way through the guy so therefore there would be no burn mark on his back. and thank u for calling it chipmunk speed, they are actually very fast creatures, have u ever seen one run?
kinda cool. the choreography wasn't too impressive but nice work on the rotoscope. the fight over the saber at the very end was gay though - u guys touch each other too much ;)
As above... some fanning on the blades would've made that almost perfect. And costumes - but lets not be picky. That must have taken some serious time!! I've tried a couple myself and 20 seconds of film took me about 1.5 hours to rotoscope!
fantastic, IT would have been great if you managed to add the saber motion effect. Otherwise the stunts and other effects are above 7~8 out of 10. Great work
Well there were missing sound queues. As for my other issue with the piece, the editing was a bit loose. Tighten up the cuts, cut when the blade is in motion, not at the begining of ther shot, while everyone is standing around looking at one another and you've just yelled "ACTION!"
Overall, not too bad on the choreography... creative and interesting! I can't say I like all the saber bashing, but at least it was mostly creative for the dynamics. Good job, looks like you guys worked hard and had fun too!
Have a look at my login ID and view "Balance of Power"... 100% *LIVE* saber combat... :)
eh.....
Darthkippy12 1 month ago
good work on the saber glow, but the timing for the sound effects is a bit off
364dragonrider 8 months ago
what guy has a pistol and the force ?
TheShadowRage 9 months ago
i love how the lightsabers just bounced off the ground.
DGMRV 11 months ago
Why does the guy with the gun have th force?
AZ7083 1 year ago
was that gay sex at the end?
johpafoora 2 years ago
well done!
natewoehler 2 years ago
Rudy! XD
Chosenstudios 2 years ago
2:04 looks like some homo ufc! But tighten it up and u got hope.
unjedi7 2 years ago
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TwoMoreTheNone 2 years ago
nice!
naektpov 2 years ago
crap
secretjedi01 2 years ago
2:04 looks like bad porn scene
welshguitarhero 3 years ago
haha xD
Pepsi1max 2 years ago
lol, the lightsaber didnt burn is shirt XD
dakoata121212 3 years ago
the gun was a nerf gun and it was the nerf nite finder but maybe they modded it
OptimusPrime726 3 years ago
genial ese cañvito si save mover nwn
alkaedas666 3 years ago
Ya know for this being on a college field, this is pretty darn cool guys! I would've felt sooo jipped if I was the guy who got stuck with the blaster, lol.
KryptonianSpade 3 years ago
Never bring a blaster to a lightsaber fight.
sonar357 3 years ago 2
i think that video take a week or a month to make
SYIMBIOTE 3 years ago
That was so cool!
HoopsAndDinoMan 3 years ago
nice
cutexlittlexkolopper 3 years ago
danny nooooo!
claymanrocker 3 years ago
You no get saber, you get PISTOL! HAHAHA!
3fd49z 3 years ago
how did you build your lightsaber props
hotdog4682 3 years ago
can you sayme how making this efect??the sound of the sword and all??
sorry for my bad english
=P
but i´m from chile :D
zeusycronos 3 years ago
loco, usa el fx home effectslab pro, ese es la raja ;)
aah y tambien soy chileno XD!!!!
urbanmech 3 years ago
oie pero esa kustion ta en ingles pos
y mas encima parece ke se kompra,
komo lo hago pa ke sea de mas facil acceso??
si keri te doy mi mail pa ke me explikes mejor pos...
y vale por la pagina men
xau
zeusycronos 3 years ago
dale, manda el msn, te agrego y hablamos
saludos
urbanmech 3 years ago
Funny how the fat kid has the blaster lol
Ballowall 3 years ago
how did you make this
2013lokken 3 years ago
this video was awesome!!!! Jake kicked their butts!
allaroundmoviemaker 3 years ago
GO JAKE!
StickPeopleAssassin 3 years ago
Nice. I liked how you used the blaster
starwarsgeek8 3 years ago
tro bien !!
alexia95230 3 years ago
I like the part where they try and mount each other. THAT was funny. In a weird sorta way.
jordancg 4 years ago
its kind of disturbing...
Yambag345 3 years ago
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....poor.....
Gywieboy 4 years ago
yes u r poor
JonAmBal 4 years ago
i mean the lightsaber fencing...
Gywieboy 4 years ago
its always the same lightsaber sound
FreakingVermillion 4 years ago
THE GYM TEACHER WINS LOL
mesay123 4 years ago
that was very very good, well im mexican so sorry about my english, this are my tips: When some guys used the force, it seems to be a reverse scene, and when those two guys hit.. (hitted? lol I know it is wrong, you know.. the verb hit in past xD) well they "hited" the grass... the lightsabers... bounced, so, there are some changes u can try, but it was awesome really, congratulations.
guaponxo 4 years ago
nice... i lkie how the white shirt on the last dude dosent even get burned a bit when its stabbed XD
WyykamiWolf 4 years ago
saweet!
unbrokenjack 4 years ago
lets do a rebel battle 3.
onice67 4 years ago
jake abrams make my sound effects please
Persandrama 4 years ago
good job guys, did you use adobe potoshop for when you did the force and what after effects did you use?
JennayyyCx3 4 years ago
I just realized how silly it looks to do the whole Move-slow-and-speed-up-the-film-later-trick looks on a small time camera. I've seena few people do this and I suggesting using it with caution and only when the camera is moving around more.
Mequellios 4 years ago
we never used this technique.... lol but thanks for the input we will keep that in mind for the future.
viper92664 4 years ago
ya it looks like a lightstick, but still good, i like the purple sword dude, hes pretty good
Church96 4 years ago
q monces siquiera alquilense trajes,no???
jachape1 4 years ago
wow ... look real ... loll ... awesome guys
tiben666 4 years ago
nice
Euro717 4 years ago
must have spent a long time on this and it was very well done except for some terrible acting in some parts.
Anzuo 4 years ago
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fucking dorks. this way gay as hell
lordraidis 4 years ago
sabers look more real if you fan the blade out a little more when its moving
if its just a straight all the time it looks like a lightstick =p
gotaclimb540 4 years ago
I can just imagine the last guy saying at the end, damn it feels good to be a gangsta... Loved it, good job.
Malathos 4 years ago
okay this was alright but you need to work on your choreography down better but tis a GREAT start guys...peace
cisslayer 4 years ago
+nice try but much to learn you still have
JumpDaFuuckUp 4 years ago
food job guys
AinokeA365 4 years ago
when u do these u should try 2 git fake blood
mali329 4 years ago
when you hit the people, there were no sounds.
GeniePix 4 years ago
the sound effects for the lightsabers were terrible
kieran530 5 years ago
Very very much plus in goodly.
I love how you reversed the footage to recieve the whole force pull with the pistol.
Paramud 5 years ago
did you use photoshop to rotoscope this?
awsman892 5 years ago
brilliant
scofieldpaladin 5 years ago
Nice work. Can't wait to see your next one.
darthmauler 5 years ago
The sound effects were from JEdi Knight Dark Forces. WEll done for being creative =)
Hajilee32 5 years ago
Wow, very well put together except sometimes a sound was off here and there and, as Zypheres stated, the force effects/sounds would be off a lot as well. I think the lightsabers, though, were done very well and think you definately have the potential to be a professional.
starwarsvideos 5 years ago
Very impressive, very excellent work. Does need a bit of improvement however. More realist death-blows and a bit more work on the lightsaber/force effects. I'm really looking forward to see another one of your works.
Zypheres 5 years ago
Next time you might want to lower your shutter speed on the camera, That way the sabers blur when you move them quickly.
Zogeta 5 years ago
Excellent video, must have taken a while to put together
yammy98r1 5 years ago
The blaster FX is a little off, but I'm not going to hold that against you, as you did some how manage to add it into an otherwise 'saber rich' battle. I give you a 4 out of 5
Beaversarecoolalways 5 years ago
That was great!
scofieldpaladin 5 years ago
Awesome !! Very Pro !!
Blastercombo 5 years ago
where did you get the sound effects?
Donaldfossedal 5 years ago
Well, It was okay, but I've seen much better.
m1k3z0r2 5 years ago
wow, well done...great effects!
GerryGerry 5 years ago
That's impressive...a lot of rotoscoping there. To bad you could see shadows of the sabers, that's because you filmed in a bright location. But it's ok, that even occasionally happend in the first star wars films.
DanceswithOrcs 5 years ago
I bet that took f***ing ages
link123456 5 years ago
good stuff
Gozchev 5 years ago
Not bad at all. But I'm missing a Star Wars feeling. The effects are average.
Bundeskaiser 5 years ago
Freeze it at 00:52. The lightsaber effect is actually drawn on the top wide screen bar. lol. wha?
JMLutsch 5 years ago
yea, rushed to the finish, saw that after upload, o well
Beachbuny144 5 years ago
Good video
cstfhl 5 years ago
I loved that. Very cool.
jet9696 5 years ago
you know how i know you're gay?
insideout 5 years ago
I wanted the bald guy to win anway
Mugen123456789 5 years ago
sound was a little off but i really liked it
Jordito33 5 years ago
this was cool
faboulousf 5 years ago
this is really good work, entertained me the whole way thru
Donaldfossedal 5 years ago
poor rudy
Blindboy1210 5 years ago
Funny how they give the poor fat kid the blaster. Excellent video though, thechnical problems aside this must have been a shit ton of work! I'm impressed!
Ballowall 5 years ago
Wow, this is really cool. I hope you get an award for innovation, i've never seen a jedi with a blaster.
Gaaraguy13 5 years ago
Nice, but it could use some sabertrails.
Torren12 5 years ago
i like the gay wrestling at the end.... NOT
twindizzle2009 5 years ago
WOAH!
LuigiMario11 5 years ago
Hey, don't be too strict here. This was a good Star Wars movie. The only bug was that the sabers were too clear. In SW some of the white shape is left behind when the saber is moving fast. The other thing is that in some of the last shots you can see the shadow of the stick you used when you were shooting. The lightsabers is shining. That's why it's called a LIGHTsaber. Try to not get the shadow into the picture next time. Except of these two things, this was a great Star Wars parody.
eivindmn 5 years ago
the muzzle flashes could use a little bit of work.
abyss00 5 years ago
could 1 min 55 sec onward by more gay sex :?
sean92k 5 years ago
it was ok. the effects werent that great (flashes u could barely see, no motion effect) and the choreography was ok. the end was bad. rolling around like that? and the saber would of left a burnt mark on his shirt after u stabbed him, and since u had to takes of the same shot one with the blade in the hilt and one without ( i could tell this by the bad editing) u could have put a burnt mark! But other than these things it was ok. oh, and bad camera ( director ).
r1ng077 5 years ago
lighten up this had to have been a shit ton of work!
Ballowall 5 years ago
hey shut up lets see you do that then if your so good that must have taken hours to edit when u ahve done summat like or better then u can comment on it u dumass
xanatos125 5 years ago
why is everyone getting mad at me? evryone else has said the same things as i did guys, did u read the other posts? oh an xanatos 125 u quoted :when u ahve done summat like or better then u can comment on it u dumass, well click on my name and check out my star wars lightsaber duel before u go out calling people dumbasses.
r1ng077 5 years ago
continuation....and ya it is a ton of work but i'm not trying to be mean i'm telling them how to improve. and the vid was not gosh awful but it just could have been better and i was telling them how to make it better.
r1ng077 5 years ago
i did, so where r the burn marks on ur dead guy? and pitting summat cool like rebel battle agenst "chipmonk speed lightsabre fight" aint ur best arguement, oh and theres helpful critazism from a SUPERIOR director, and then there is wa uve sed. "oh, and bad camera ( director )." not helpful
xanatos125 5 years ago
if u would have whatched carefully the saber did not go all the way through the guy so therefore there would be no burn mark on his back. and thank u for calling it chipmunk speed, they are actually very fast creatures, have u ever seen one run?
r1ng077 5 years ago
No burn mark or sound at the end? Shame on you...
Petyamester 5 years ago
if u cud make da video faster it wud look cooler
600awatp 5 years ago
kinda cool. the choreography wasn't too impressive but nice work on the rotoscope. the fight over the saber at the very end was gay though - u guys touch each other too much ;)
GermanNightTrain 5 years ago
the end is like darth maul fight
avatar2401 5 years ago
As above... some fanning on the blades would've made that almost perfect. And costumes - but lets not be picky. That must have taken some serious time!! I've tried a couple myself and 20 seconds of film took me about 1.5 hours to rotoscope!
IRMoon 5 years ago
lol, the blaster guy was obviously a jedi because of the force pull, he should have used a lightsaber, then he would have had a fighting chance, 5
Jaweze 5 years ago
what program did you used
electro5 5 years ago
pretty good, needs some contact flashes though
exselsior 5 years ago
Shite
matnally 5 years ago
fantastic, IT would have been great if you managed to add the saber motion effect. Otherwise the stunts and other effects are above 7~8 out of 10. Great work
kwansaky 5 years ago
Not bad. I give you kudos for using editing tricks for the force pulls.
WeirdEarBoy 5 years ago
pretty cool. i suggest getting some contact flashes at ryan-w.com. they really add to the fight. but great job on the rotoscoping!
Damonstration 5 years ago
This was awesome , it realy deserves the name of SW fan film.
As about the Filmm , the Bald guy is the best , hehe.
But I didn't understood why the other Force-Sensitive used a Blaser , was he just a Apprentice?
Kharak 5 years ago
Nice....best ive seen
but the moves ....yall lackin
swimdevil 5 years ago
Interesting idea although you know from the begining the blaster dude was toast when he didnt whip out any crazy gun-fu from jump.
TheRealAlpha2 5 years ago
great job...
it's fantastic!!!
akrylpaint 5 years ago
Well there were missing sound queues. As for my other issue with the piece, the editing was a bit loose. Tighten up the cuts, cut when the blade is in motion, not at the begining of ther shot, while everyone is standing around looking at one another and you've just yelled "ACTION!"
Crosis101 5 years ago
I give it an 8 out of 10. :D
LannyOnasis 5 years ago
oh look, the bitch is back.
arm66860 5 years ago
amazing, you're realizing one of my child's dreams, have a "real" lightsaber in your hands, keep on doing this vids and uploading them!;) =D
ritu182 5 years ago
he needs to get a life?
skorpi0n 5 years ago
This movie is underrated. Deserves more views.
butoden 5 years ago
the next one is going to be even better i know it.
onice67 5 years ago
Overall, not too bad on the choreography... creative and interesting! I can't say I like all the saber bashing, but at least it was mostly creative for the dynamics. Good job, looks like you guys worked hard and had fun too!
Have a look at my login ID and view "Balance of Power"... 100% *LIVE* saber combat... :)
greytale 5 years ago
you were all over eachother. Which is good
xxstaggerxx 5 years ago
Sounds were off a bit at times, but otherwise very well done!
starwarsvideos 5 years ago
That was soo cool!!!
kate6832 5 years ago
damn good.
arm66860 5 years ago
What a fight that was
onice67 5 years ago
LoL thats pretty funny actually thats pretty good!! :O I always liked lightsabers T_T
butoden 5 years ago