Can't have you ( a Jonas love story) - Chapter 11

[kyraredwall]

can I just say - Yeah, but that's 2 days away, theoretically we're arriving tomorrow, i said as i rolled on top of her. - Right now, you and me, we're completely invisible to the world.., and I kissed her.

- that part was really romantic :)

Awesome chapter :D

[27secondstolove]

thanks...

i love to see new readers..cuz i get to come back to the first chapters and read them again to see what was so nice about them.... i forgot about that part....yeah...very romantic..and i'm glad you liked it :)

[nickjonasloverrr24]

i really do like your stories, its just that, i think its weird for them to kiss and tickle each other and act like that if they are just meeting each other in person for the first time. just saying. other than that, great chapter! (: ♥♥♥♥

[27secondstolove]

sorry if it seems out of place to you...but i don't see my characters as little kids...i know it's unlikely for the real joe jonas to be acting this way...but this is the type of relationship that i am familiar with,that i consider normal. I dont see anything weird in kissing and tickling a guy you feel you like and that likes you back.Don't worry...they're still good kids ;) they won't have sex or anything,but i think they're mature enough to show some affection, without losing their innocence

[OXlive4kevinjonasXo]

Awesome!