Guys have done a gr8 job on this. Everyone one of you should be personally proud of this but One thing that I really need to stress about the series is to really fix the audio. It's almost as important as the video and the audio really makes the video experience tonnes better! But AGAIN your DOING AWESOME
First off, I did thoroughly enjoy the video. The camera work was superb. The only critique I would offer is audio. I'm working on a few ideas myself, trying to pick up tips along the way, and I would say the #1 area all of us up and comers need to work on is audio. You could almost shoot a feature length film with a 10 year old handy cam and poor dialogue and people would still sit through it if it had quality sound. But put audio in Avatar and even it wouldn't sell
@profyucub I definitely hear you (no pun intended XD). though I would like to add as a possibility that you could just be like me. one of those people who love sound (music, anything really). what comes with that is that one pays more attention to it thus one becomes more adept at hearing the finer nuances and amplifying any poor quality sounds so that we can tell the difference between 192 kbps and 128 kbps, where most ppl cant even tell when an audio track is poor unless it's like 56kbps lol
@profyucub plus I also wanted to mention that the audio quality could've been fine... before they uploaded it to youtube. the compression usually tanks audio/video qualities in favour of better buffering rates for slower internet connections. I usually avoid listening to music on youtube unless I have to or I just want to sample an artist/don't have any of their music yet/while it's downloading.
If this were a tv series, people would describe it as a story told from a "standpoint of realism"...as far as the filming and acting goes. For a series made by regular people, who don't do this sort of thing for a living, this is beyond amazingly good.
very impressive! good camera work, good use of sound and music, good effects, even the acting was good! very refressing for a web production! well done!
All good points, but I'm finding that there are quite a few very well done web series out there. If any fall below par it doesn't seem to be because of the look, or technical aspects it seems to be due to acting, or just poor writing. Acting just takes work, but the writing I think stems from a generation that didn't watch a lot of "great" movies, but videos, and stuff made by ppl who didn't watch a lot of the classics.
where are the zombies?!! the content!! lol. no, i'm kidding, but i was dissapointed ONLY because the shows were only 5 or so minutes long. i could conjure up plenty of panic in an equally lower number of castmates using any number of end of world scenarios.
Very interesting.. I'll have to keep an eye on this. I must agree with gurnles though: the acting isn't great. In fact, I feel like the man who dies in the first 2 minutes is a better actor than the one who lives. Oh, well. It is free, and, from the little I've seen, the writing isn't bad. The music, though, is what sticks out in my mind. It is absolutely excellent.
Actually I do, Ive put in a good word for them on a few different videos, and youre right. this is better than whats on TV, Im just saying that the good things about this series is the music and the writing.
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instead of promoting death...you should promote LIFE! This is just as bad as regular T.V. or hollywood. There was already a movie like this and Im sick of people who think they know the truth.-like most its easier to tell a lie and destroy, rather than tell the truth and build...serve the MOST HIGH and preach his kingdom only.
Congrats to the coming generation of filmmakers. You're off to an excellent start. I like how you've used documentary cam movements but have kept them to a minimal. Excellent special effects and powerful storyline.
Guys have done a gr8 job on this. Everyone one of you should be personally proud of this but One thing that I really need to stress about the series is to really fix the audio. It's almost as important as the video and the audio really makes the video experience tonnes better! But AGAIN your DOING AWESOME
matthewisallen 10 months ago
Good Job
positivity29 10 months ago
Good serial.
Subtitles please in spanish.
Thanks
geniodevilna 10 months ago
I love Black Dawn! Check out my new super hero web series! Search "Jayden Frost The Believers" and keep watching Black Dawn!
jaydenfrost 1 year ago
great atmosphere and planting the seed with a haunting score.
elgatonegro13 1 year ago
The acting is PHENOMENAL!!!
mulioctaveman 1 year ago
**put POOR audio in Avatar
profyucub 1 year ago
First off, I did thoroughly enjoy the video. The camera work was superb. The only critique I would offer is audio. I'm working on a few ideas myself, trying to pick up tips along the way, and I would say the #1 area all of us up and comers need to work on is audio. You could almost shoot a feature length film with a 10 year old handy cam and poor dialogue and people would still sit through it if it had quality sound. But put audio in Avatar and even it wouldn't sell
profyucub 1 year ago
@profyucub I definitely hear you (no pun intended XD). though I would like to add as a possibility that you could just be like me. one of those people who love sound (music, anything really). what comes with that is that one pays more attention to it thus one becomes more adept at hearing the finer nuances and amplifying any poor quality sounds so that we can tell the difference between 192 kbps and 128 kbps, where most ppl cant even tell when an audio track is poor unless it's like 56kbps lol
Dillon02003 1 year ago
@profyucub plus I also wanted to mention that the audio quality could've been fine... before they uploaded it to youtube. the compression usually tanks audio/video qualities in favour of better buffering rates for slower internet connections. I usually avoid listening to music on youtube unless I have to or I just want to sample an artist/don't have any of their music yet/while it's downloading.
Dillon02003 1 year ago
wow great! really professional looking!
TangledWebSeries 1 year ago
I'm hooked
MadMidgetPro 1 year ago
Wow awesome song through out the awesome movie...
waritgreen 1 year ago
If this were a tv series, people would describe it as a story told from a "standpoint of realism"...as far as the filming and acting goes. For a series made by regular people, who don't do this sort of thing for a living, this is beyond amazingly good.
xXxWritersWingsxXx 1 year ago
very well done. just a solid effort, good job.
leviwalton1 1 year ago
This has been flagged as spam show
ugly people .... ok acting... great story
Disket99 1 year ago
you guys need to pat yourselves on the back! awesome pilot!
magiclover19 1 year ago
wow, ive found my new web series love.
DeMiiiiii12 1 year ago
Awesome XD
Emochello 1 year ago
Great scene at 2:48 where he looks out the window to see the ppl dying all over. Really well done.
Lfdjake91 1 year ago
Great work!
montecitoheightsTV 1 year ago
very impressive! good camera work, good use of sound and music, good effects, even the acting was good! very refressing for a web production! well done!
onebigthought 1 year ago
@onebigthought
All good points, but I'm finding that there are quite a few very well done web series out there. If any fall below par it doesn't seem to be because of the look, or technical aspects it seems to be due to acting, or just poor writing. Acting just takes work, but the writing I think stems from a generation that didn't watch a lot of "great" movies, but videos, and stuff made by ppl who didn't watch a lot of the classics.
NelsonStJames 1 year ago
Wow , I really wanna see this film!!! Really cool :)
matti1804 1 year ago
gmt...very good..
dimoeo 2 years ago
good job
monkeyfuz 2 years ago
Very cool web series! come and watch ours as well!
RubicsCubeProduction 2 years ago
Very captivating. Intense and totally interesting. I'm inspired. Great work.
mulioctaveman 2 years ago
This is good, its better then most of what they show on television shows these days. 2 bad a network couldn't pick this series up, I'd tune in.
Scene68 2 years ago
I love the suspense. Be sure to check out our new web series "Lucidity". It's about lucid dreaming.
ThirdProductions 2 years ago
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Great Series.. Nice work... check my Web Series out some time.. we shot with the canon 7d..
BloodBr0thers 2 years ago
great job!
Picachki 2 years ago
What's the equipment to rec? I mean videocam and ect...
imjustthesexmacine 2 years ago
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oneshot555 2 years ago
Good I like it :)
markythemurloc 2 years ago
where are the zombies?!! the content!! lol. no, i'm kidding, but i was dissapointed ONLY because the shows were only 5 or so minutes long. i could conjure up plenty of panic in an equally lower number of castmates using any number of end of world scenarios.
frnnk 2 years ago
i watch the first few minutes and was like wow this is pretty good
Sims3101lover 2 years ago
Great webseries!! Addicted! to it!
summertimedong 2 years ago
for far my fav. web serie so far!
and i watch lot's of them, so that should mean something!
tobby6700 2 years ago
awsome Job, Got my interest i look forward to next weeks...
Vigilanteradio 2 years ago
the effect at 1:03 is ill
Youngkillacarlos 2 years ago
is that the new SICK?.....lol
RDPproject 2 years ago
It's been urban vernacular for about two decades now...
DigitalTransfer 2 years ago
I love this. You music was way too loud though.
Empire28Productions 2 years ago
No..
This.
IS.
SPARTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
Doomessenger4654 2 years ago
this deserves way more views. this is great :P
linzlohmeyer 2 years ago 14
ROFL
TheKillerW0lf 2 years ago 2
don't you think LA would have fallen off the map if it was true???
gandrewlee2 2 years ago
this serie is so addictive =D
Maurisits94 2 years ago
Between 2:50 and 3:05 that was an awesome shot!
bluematter08 2 years ago 11
Could you possibly mean a short story or something like that? Or a "true" story?
bluematter08 2 years ago
of course not people are still alive arent they
BBPhobia 2 years ago 2
its fucking awesome.... love it!
inrowllings 2 years ago
Thats some fuckin epicness right there.
testing88534 2 years ago 2
immunity is a bitch aint it?
exdas2213 2 years ago
what music is this?
TheKillerW0lf 2 years ago
i like it, very idealistic, maybi a big hit??
luke105 2 years ago
Very interesting.. I'll have to keep an eye on this. I must agree with gurnles though: the acting isn't great. In fact, I feel like the man who dies in the first 2 minutes is a better actor than the one who lives. Oh, well. It is free, and, from the little I've seen, the writing isn't bad. The music, though, is what sticks out in my mind. It is absolutely excellent.
mrsdawnaway 2 years ago 5
i totally agree about the guy who dies... (i think he was cuter too :P but aint that just the way, all the good men are gay or dead from plague).
usesomeone 2 years ago 2
i was thinking exactly the same that the 1 who died is better then who lives...
askerchikasker 2 years ago
I think the rawness of it really adds to the story, gives it a desperate and lonesome feel
Astaroth267 2 years ago
it remind me 28 week later
omen42507 2 years ago 3
this reminds me of a comic book called black smoke.
JasonM113 2 years ago 2
Really good ...
Monstro971 2 years ago 2
Really!!!!
mycheesesteak 2 years ago
This acting is the most horrible overacting I have ever seen.
gurnles 2 years ago
the only thing good about this series is the music.......and........maybe the writing....
morgan5154 2 years ago
hey giv em a break I mean it is for free and is much better than the paid dribble you get on tv
weresic 2 years ago 3
Actually I do, Ive put in a good word for them on a few different videos, and youre right. this is better than whats on TV, Im just saying that the good things about this series is the music and the writing.
morgan5154 2 years ago
This is a chemtrail believer's wet dream.
smaakjeks 2 years ago
more like swine flu lol dude the guy at :37 is freaky his face is all FUCKED UP
omgcahley 2 years ago
This guy looks like the lead singer from the band Thursday. lol.
KINSHASAA19sankru89 2 years ago
great story, good acting, AWESOME music... u have a subscriber
morgan5154 2 years ago
Wow I'm really impressed with the acting, the music score is fantastic as well.
sugaddikt 2 years ago
awesome
joneagle29 2 years ago
Subscribing! Well done.
ArcherJoeJoe 2 years ago
Fuckin' INCREDIBLE!!!!!!!!!
samsevern 2 years ago
Looks like a normal dorm at dawn, with all the bodies strewn around.
Great job.
AnotherCuppaCoffee 2 years ago
cool show good job guys
vicmacke 2 years ago
the music is REDONKulous.
In the best way possible.
:D
cuttoothom 2 years ago
Great CGI btw XD
LaNoturna 2 years ago
HAHA UPSIDE DOWN APRIL FOOLS JOKE
rabbitofdeth 2 years ago
This was entertaining. Although, you couldn't understand the lines when they were in the echo-y hallway. But still, you have a new viewer.
Wizard488 2 years ago
very interesting show
jaggermorrison2009 2 years ago
That wide shot at the end was fantastic. Good job on this!
cheeseleader09 3 years ago 2
that was sick.
cheeseman4444 3 years ago
*****
Nice work.
IAGuy06 3 years ago 2
main character looks like Michael C. Hall from the show "Dexter"
xXfrost05Xx 3 years ago
I LOVE that show XD
LaNoturna 2 years ago
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instead of promoting death...you should promote LIFE! This is just as bad as regular T.V. or hollywood. There was already a movie like this and Im sick of people who think they know the truth.-like most its easier to tell a lie and destroy, rather than tell the truth and build...serve the MOST HIGH and preach his kingdom only.
DjChozn1 3 years ago
Maybe I'm jumping the gun here...but you are cool.
NJdevil1013 3 years ago
How does one get involved in doing WebSerials? I'm interested.
Kelnosha 3 years ago
If they turn into Zombies, I will feel so let down
MasterClipEditor 3 years ago
Congrats to the coming generation of filmmakers. You're off to an excellent start. I like how you've used documentary cam movements but have kept them to a minimal. Excellent special effects and powerful storyline.
Rikotistic 3 years ago
The Stand by Stephen King ... Its legend and its here
crowbarred 3 years ago
Hard core opening, folks!
robtran 3 years ago
Nice jobs guys! Looking forward to the series...Thks
moulec 3 years ago
Nicely done! This series is starting out awesome!
Gold3n3y3 3 years ago 2
wow, amazing first episode!
great acting and awesome fx, very professional!! Can't wait for episode 2!!
richieneddie 3 years ago
I want the song!!!!!!
Theocpr534 3 years ago
So well done, great acting. Amazing project guys! This is outstanding work and the hand over end fantastic. 5/5 ☆☆☆☆☆
Miguel9kb 3 years ago 4
Guy's , that was pretty damn good!! One episode and you got me hooked already!! Later.
PavelZajec 3 years ago 4
Outstanding. I'll wait for next week.
denkar1891 3 years ago 4
You don't have to wait--the second episode is available now at our website! Click the link over in the video description.
webserials 3 years ago
Wow, I wasn't sure how this one was going to work, but once again you've blown my mind. Awesome job, guys!
alcon835 3 years ago 5
Awesome. I am hooked. Can't wait!! :)
1789K 3 years ago 4
great acting and I love the sound track
okamichamploo 3 years ago 4
An intense start. I can't wait to see more.
Agriking 3 years ago 3
I am a fan already. You guys are consumate professionals
Crosisborg 3 years ago
brilliant, got me hooked from the first second
Rivingtonfilm 3 years ago 3
Excellent start! I'll be watching.
carlgottlie 3 years ago 2
I like how we're thrown into the story. It'll be interesting to see where this goes
lostinz 3 years ago 2
I was really doubting this new series but watching this first episode I think it might be the best yet.
animaguspadfoot 3 years ago 2
that was pretty epic
residentemojacob 3 years ago 2
I am interested! Great job.
SkazzMedia 3 years ago 2
Anyone with a pretentious goatee shall die!
Philinspaces 3 years ago 3