When the next event comes around, we'll probably end up using a more high quality camera, which will make everything a bit more pleasing to the eye, I think.
Nice dude, I really liked it, o.k. so like that dude said, it's not completely original, but what idea is now adays. I thought it was pulled off quite well, a little bit confusing at first and I think the end could have used some work. Maybe more than just a shot of the guy walking away. A closeup on the girls eyes while she's strugglin knowing she's about to die etc.
I Can See Why You Didn't Win. The Concept Is Not Original At All. It's Basically "Saw" Meets The "Matrix" When Neo's Running To The Exit And Why Is Everyone A Martial Arts Master. Should Of Spent More Time On The Plot And Some Dialogue Instead Of The Fight Choreography.
I might've had a bit more from the girl. Close-up of the look in her eyes, pleading perhaps? It was still pretty sweet considering the constraints on production.
The shaky cam looked great. Not amateur "guy running with his camcorder" at all.
Was the guy in the black hoodie the dude from LCC3? Kinda looked like him.
The one critique I would have for the whole film really is that in the split-screen shot you when you had the two guys running off. I would have suggested that you put the guy on the right side under the street light so that we could see him better when he starts running off.
OMG! Nevermind my last comment. I was writing it while I missed the big thing about the girl having her three lovers being sent to her. Very nice film!
Our writer was going for a 'Bourne Identity' style. I personally haven't seen any of the 'Bourne' films, so I guess in the end it had that, with a little 'Saw' twist, heh.
What camera did you use?
willidke 3 years ago
We used a Canon GL2 for this short.
When the next event comes around, we'll probably end up using a more high quality camera, which will make everything a bit more pleasing to the eye, I think.
davidadametz 3 years ago
Nice dude, I really liked it, o.k. so like that dude said, it's not completely original, but what idea is now adays. I thought it was pulled off quite well, a little bit confusing at first and I think the end could have used some work. Maybe more than just a shot of the guy walking away. A closeup on the girls eyes while she's strugglin knowing she's about to die etc.
BlackChameleon 4 years ago
I Can See Why You Didn't Win. The Concept Is Not Original At All. It's Basically "Saw" Meets The "Matrix" When Neo's Running To The Exit And Why Is Everyone A Martial Arts Master. Should Of Spent More Time On The Plot And Some Dialogue Instead Of The Fight Choreography.
ThomasBdCrowne 4 years ago
Yeah, that's what we get for blowing 3 out of the 7 days that the contest ran for.
Sorry it doesn't satisfy you.
Matrix and Saw?
Sounds like a nifty little hybrid to me.
davidadametz 3 years ago
im confused, why would the over men try to kill him if they were trying to save him, and why did he leave the girl?
Brasillie 4 years ago
Did you guys win?
SilentBat 4 years ago
Well we placed in the Top 16 shorts of all 6 Colleges participating, but we didn't win any awards.
Ours was pretty different from a lot of the other shorts, and there weren't really enough to distinguish ours as a category.
They only awarded "Best Comedy", "Best Drama", and "Best Picture"
We were nominated for "Best Picture", but I thought out best shot would have been "Best Drama"
davidadametz 4 years ago
Shucks ... that stinks. Great film no less!
SilentBat 4 years ago
Are the punching sounds done from a bouncing basketball?
SilentBat 4 years ago
No, I downloaded the sounds off the the internet, royalty free.
In the staircase fight, I added reverb to the punches, so that's why they sound like they reverberate and ring a little bit.
davidadametz 4 years ago
It's an interesting thing to try out though. Basketball bouncing for punching sounds.
SilentBat 4 years ago
Good stuff.
I might've had a bit more from the girl. Close-up of the look in her eyes, pleading perhaps? It was still pretty sweet considering the constraints on production.
The shaky cam looked great. Not amateur "guy running with his camcorder" at all.
Was the guy in the black hoodie the dude from LCC3? Kinda looked like him.
Good work, as usual.
-Vaportrail
VaportrailFilms 4 years ago
Yeah, that was me, heh.
davidadametz 4 years ago
Oh, both the bad guys are wearing black hoodies, heh. I meant your sparring partner. I don't recall his name.
Hooray for cameo!
VaportrailFilms 4 years ago
The one critique I would have for the whole film really is that in the split-screen shot you when you had the two guys running off. I would have suggested that you put the guy on the right side under the street light so that we could see him better when he starts running off.
SilentBat 4 years ago
Yeah, very good point.
That was actually me acting in that shot, and when I 'answer the phone' I sort of trail off from the light.
davidadametz 4 years ago
Yeah I'm going to be working with him for his Magic DVD.
davidadametz 4 years ago
This stars Chris Brown.
A friend and I shot this film. He acted in it.
davidadametz 4 years ago
OMG! Nevermind my last comment. I was writing it while I missed the big thing about the girl having her three lovers being sent to her. Very nice film!
SilentBat 4 years ago
Violent ... Hmmm ... I din't exactly get it. Was it supposed to be like Saw? Maybe I should watch it again.
SilentBat 4 years ago
reminds me of saw. Great directing man
tatsy2009 4 years ago
Thanks for the comment.
Our writer was going for a 'Bourne Identity' style. I personally haven't seen any of the 'Bourne' films, so I guess in the end it had that, with a little 'Saw' twist, heh.
davidadametz 4 years ago
yea.. I liked it though it was really interesting.
tatsy2009 4 years ago
No, didn't cross me to be Bourne film. Definitely Saw though. Very nice though! Favorited and 5 Stars and I'm putting you up on my blog!
SilentBat 4 years ago