I really love the way you master your lyrics with such pictorial and metaphorical terms in such a poignant way and matter of fact style. Thanks for sharing. I hope we can do something in the way of recording together.. Elton
Another well crafted song and you delivered it just fine. It's only 9 in the morning and you got me wanting to pour a glass of wine and start writing more songs. Thanks for sharing this little jewel. Mark
I love this song! Great for a firster. I wrote the cheesiest stuff when I started. Course, I was 13. I love your voice, and the images your song creates. Come over and play castle anytime...
You are such a great writer and performer FiveDollarGuitar. You songs harkens back to an earlier time, but its all in the "now". This is a great moody creation. -Ron
Very nice, you've come a long way. (Making me feel old since I remember when you were born! heheheh.) Nice work though, sounds really good, keep on jammin'!
I'm impressed that this is your first original, great job on it! I've been writing for years and it's not too often I come up with a good one, but you've definitely started off on a good note (pun fully intended)
thanks all for your support and input!! It means a lot to me, especially knowing a lot of the props are coming from talented people such as yourself!!
yc, this lady writes brilliant lyrics and her voice is well, i agree with you 100 percent. like most geniuses she also has a goofy side which is why my comment appeared twice under yours. it is okay as einstein used to get his morning paper and would forget to put pants on.
I really love the way you master your lyrics with such pictorial and metaphorical terms in such a poignant way and matter of fact style. Thanks for sharing. I hope we can do something in the way of recording together.. Elton
bidanoso 6 months ago
Wow. Your lyrics are stunning. Just excellent....
mmcs122 2 years ago
you are just awesome girl thanks for the comment!i write lyrics just cant play that guitar:(
natneedsfriends 2 years ago
Great stuff 5 bucks!
oldnrone 2 years ago
i love your style and delivery
unique
krabbers 3 years ago
That was just gorgeous,
what a songbird u are !
5 Awesome ******
BeautifulGirlByDana 3 years ago
I really like your lyrics.
kaliazzura 3 years ago
thank you so much for listening!
FiveDollarGuitar 3 years ago
My pleasure :)
kaliazzura 3 years ago
Sweet lady of the flowering dress your words are the best i've heard since last i was a sober guest.
leecamer 3 years ago
it´s very good
gitarrefish08 3 years ago
lovely song...linda
lindacrnll 3 years ago
good song here five friend see you around.
jimmymccombs 3 years ago
Not bad... for your first song. ;-p
Excellent tune. Very soulfull.
Oswlek 3 years ago
another classic... oh yeah, aleady! cheers
captxxchaos 3 years ago
I wish my first song (30 years ago!) had been as good as yours! Well done,
Wes
wesalittle 3 years ago
Another well crafted song and you delivered it just fine. It's only 9 in the morning and you got me wanting to pour a glass of wine and start writing more songs. Thanks for sharing this little jewel. Mark
Maysey1 3 years ago
I really like your lyrics. Love the song!
nllleonard 3 years ago
thank you! i am glad you like it!!
FiveDollarGuitar 3 years ago
last time i saw you, you had like no subscribers, what happened? =D
thewintersessions 3 years ago
very beautiful, music and lyrics. 5stars
KrisShred 3 years ago
This is a great first song!
I'm impressed, really!
"A great moody creation", as Ron says.
5 stars and a hope for lots more!
shas1814 3 years ago
I love this song! Great for a firster. I wrote the cheesiest stuff when I started. Course, I was 13. I love your voice, and the images your song creates. Come over and play castle anytime...
amymacclain 3 years ago
Loved it girl. You have a wonderful unique style! Never stop the music!!!
Jeffro :) smiling!!!
jeffro1234567891 3 years ago
no you look like and sound like a woman !
i messed up thought you were some one els
dreaminglad 3 years ago
I really like the whole mood of this song and your vocals. Five stars and added to my favourites.
TERUKO5 3 years ago
very cool i just Subbed to you sub back that would be so very Cool
SherifG1 3 years ago
great job with only 5$ Guitar..:P
thenatureway 3 years ago
i really love this! your voice is amazing and i love the lyrics! 5 stars - kristen
strawberryfields88 3 years ago
You are such a great writer and performer FiveDollarGuitar. You songs harkens back to an earlier time, but its all in the "now". This is a great moody creation. -Ron
rhopen 3 years ago
nice song and the lighting sets the mood
I bet you could also try your stuff on that yobi sing contest.
WhatYouGots 3 years ago
The fantastic performance !!!
Beautiful voice and beautiful song !!!
5*****
Thanks for share KentonKrueger !!!
Tadek59 3 years ago
This is great!!! Awesome! Great Lyrics
mrchilli 3 years ago
Love the lighting effect-also love the lyrics-a great first song!- thanks Kenton.....
flatted5th 3 years ago
awesome song thanks kenton for the send
chrisgilroy19 3 years ago
i freakin loved this!!!
KentonKrueger 3 years ago
i owe you big for the share. i think i got a couple of new subscribers because of you!!
FiveDollarGuitar 3 years ago
no prob, you deserve it!
KentonKrueger 3 years ago
This is great!!! I really like the lyrics and the chord progression!!! Awesome!
sheriff923 3 years ago
the Lyrics are awesome keep playing this
dreaminglad 3 years ago
★☆
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(='.'=)
(")_(")
not bad!
skeepbop 3 years ago
Beautiful, Great Lyrics,they Paint a Very Colorful Image !! Take Your God Given Talent and Run... and Don't Look Back !!! PEACE JIM
jimiller7 3 years ago
Great lyrics,wonderful melody,strong singing,super guitar playing.Great stuff girl!
blueukulele 3 years ago
I like it. Good lyrics.
mysticcynic 3 years ago
Very nice, you've come a long way. (Making me feel old since I remember when you were born! heheheh.) Nice work though, sounds really good, keep on jammin'!
IamJoeDestruction 3 years ago
Beautiful! Endless stars! :))
4u2know1 3 years ago
very nice . Sent by Yellowcatz
chickiesgrettagirl 3 years ago
sweet song with beautiful lyrics, great job!!!
5*
darkamythyst 3 years ago
You are fantastic. You have such a sad but beatiful voice. Thank you for sharing your beautiful song.
ResearchX 3 years ago
i liked that, a kind of tender female americana, 5*
lemonostiftis 3 years ago
Cool stuff! Not the normal predictable lyrics. Great performance.
dmio2 3 years ago
It's verry good :) Keep it up :)
XXBiBiX 3 years ago
I'm impressed that this is your first original, great job on it! I've been writing for years and it's not too often I come up with a good one, but you've definitely started off on a good note (pun fully intended)
Hope you'll keep writing music, you sound great!
madcowgirl4h 3 years ago
yep...such brilliant lyrics...I'm a subber...!!!
lookin' forward to more...!!!!
peace & blessings
conkling 3 years ago
Great!
skeepbop 3 years ago
Hey this is great, love it! 5* Thanks to Yellowcatz for the share, I should have subbed first time round.
wiretwanger3 3 years ago
wonderfull! beautifull! remineds me a liitel of crosby nill young...
MyzzTy 3 years ago
very beautifully played/written ;)
ottodix 3 years ago
great song and voice, good job 5* A.D. :)) thanks for sharing Yellowcatz
4DRY4N 3 years ago
excellent great talent i can hear a little bit of mary chapan carpenter in there but in your own style. good luck you should go far
newf196939 3 years ago
5 stars
patman2112 3 years ago
E X C E L L E N T
Great Voice, Great Song.
Very Soulful !!!
Thank you for sharing your gift of Music.
David
DAVIDDAMIENR 3 years ago
beautiful song...original sounding voice!..diggin it for sure
stealurface1976 3 years ago
This is very good and I like your voice too!
Thanks to yellowcats for sharing! P&L, Anne:)
QueenOfWannabe87 3 years ago
Awesome voice !!
thanks for yellowcatz for sending this..
my five stars & welldone
ikbeninbalans01 3 years ago
thanks all for your support and input!! It means a lot to me, especially knowing a lot of the props are coming from talented people such as yourself!!
I have added the lyrics per some of your request.
FiveDollarGuitar 3 years ago
nice!!
nomadicjazz 3 years ago
Good Song.. Great singing...Gave ya 5!!!
carlguage 3 years ago
I like the line; I drink life like lemonaid
faffytunes 3 years ago
@o@~♪5*****
komusoumetal 3 years ago
Thanks for sharing with us. Your first, such a big step, such a trembling moment. Good luck. Fine effort.
bigeeezy 3 years ago
wow! i'm well impressed! love it.. your voice gives me goosebumps and i like having them ********
YCoriginals 3 years ago
yc, this lady writes brilliant lyrics and her voice is well, i agree with you 100 percent. like most geniuses she also has a goofy side which is why my comment appeared twice under yours. it is okay as einstein used to get his morning paper and would forget to put pants on.
reverendgisher 3 years ago
i do that sometimes, how's the paw?
YCoriginals 3 years ago
Thanx for sharing this incredible talent, Yc.
You're wonderful sweetie, your voice is bold and beautiful! Love your song.
WavelengthRose 3 years ago
congratulations on such a wonderful job with this video.
michael
mettanc 3 years ago
congratulations on such a wonderful job with this video.
michael
mettanc 3 years ago