Monologue Acting

[mrgqit]

wow bro good job on tht.

[Cajmonet1]

wow nice 

[jjosep00]

Damn son...that was really really good. You scared the shit out of me.

[LEO3Dee]

Wow did he ever blink???

[Agita129]

Dude, where did you really get this monologue from?

[jocose22]

@Agita129 heyy i actually wrote it myself

[gut197]

That was really good and convincing! I would like to use it as a monologue. The only suggestion I would have is to maybe show subtle facial expressions as you describe each thing. Like when you describe how the guy was killed you might smile a little then switch back to looking tough

[jocose22]

@gut197 thanks i really appreciate that feedback

[whatsXthat]

cool man. very cool.

[JUANO510]

amazing dogg.......... wow. thats how u fucking do it!!!!!! i got monologues on my page 2.... if u wanna check it out.... i moved out 2 cali 2 do acting

[1TENNISTITAN]

Wow that was great

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[MasBlar]

wow...you didn't have to talk the eye contact made me shiver

[joeacting2009]

Excellent work Bro!

[Sha11226]

CLap Clap AMAZINGGGGGGGG JOB.. BRAVA

[KianaTheWordsmith]

Hell naw this some scary shit LOL good job though!

[Actortube1]

Great job. actortube

[HarliQDuh]

Omg.. That was intense! I <3 It. Good work

[PanicBus]

This monologue is brilliant, and the way you've done it has made me want to choose it for a module on my College course. I hope its not too much trouble, but could you possibly tell me where i can get this from ? Btw your acting is superb.

[ACTreyreyACT]

lol.. it was good. im doing this same monologue for this audition i have. When i make it.. ill let you know so you can tell me how it was. is that ok?

[jocose22]

@ACTreyreyACT hey thats whats up.....sure thats ok

[bruck78]

good shit bro!

[watchMEshyne]

you need to get to know your eyelids and eyebrow muscles and understand how they work. sometimes how you imagine your facial expression to be is not what it actually is visually to the audience. t remove all trace of your personality from your profession. work at it your doing really well.

[yaffytaffy12345]

I like the fact that you didn't blink much at all, if you even did. You kept steady eye contact and that's really powerful when delivering a monologue. Blinking shows signs of weakness and uncertainty, but you were right on. I also liked that you kind of had a sense of immaturity at around 1:06. At least that's what I got out of it.

That was really really good!!! Creepy, but I'm sure that's what you were going for. lol

Five Stars! :]

[JoBroLuva1689]

did you blink at all??? haha good job haha im kinda scared of you now haha jk just dont push me off of a cliff alright??? kk haha

[MrEthanjmoltz]

What monologue is this?

Great job

[greenville252]

there is a smurk that is off putting in this. More emotion and feeling then you get an "A" but right now you get an "E" for effort

[REYESINGDABAR]

needs more emotion. facial expression. unless you want to be like forest gump.

[auquaboi]

wow u taped in boi sound like  a southern killa lol

[RetroColor]

this is really good!! keep acting fellow actoorrr

[dAtxMiiXdxChiCk]

that was pretty good!

[WritingtheWrongzz]

That was good dude! I loove it

[Bfolks84]

hey nice work man!! Check out some of my videos! Thanks!

[geeksofthestreet]

i remember the first time i killed somebody

iwas 15 years old summer camp in 1962

i was at the top of the clift

this boy in my summer camp wanted me to jump and i just dident wana jump and i told him i wasent gona jump he kept teasing me telling me i was diffrent and i kept thinking at the pit of my stomatch...if i could silience his talking if i could just make him stop talking.. i never jumped off that cliff but he did i pushed him off that cliff he knocked his head on the side of the rock.

[Sterling86h]

rather boring and i didnt buy it. Sounds like he was telling a halloween story to his little cousin

[dbones1984]

that was great

[sweettourment]

omg XD at one point i couldnt figure out whether i should look away or continue staring!!

[brandirainbow]

OH i tHiNk i liKE SERiAl KiLlERZs N0W jUXXZ fROM LOOKiN AT YUU:]] lMAOO;

YUR REAlly qOOd:]]

[MADasinger]

Not bad! I love how you stare, nearly unblinkingly, towards the camera. In MOST cases, that would make for a bad monologue, but in this case it made it just the amount of "creepy" it should have been.

[2QueenD]

Nice! You're really good

[1superstarjames]

um this is some scary shit. i was gonna come say bye to u but i dont know now!!!

[jocose22]

LOLOLOL

[loveshackbaby709]

ur rly good!

[Posi0nApple]

Wow tht was good you looked stright ahead the whole time, i herd that speach from somewhere but i cant quiet point it out.

[RebekahNunn]

Very Good.

[craziihumble]

wow...ur good!

[B0wToMe]

guys his facial expersions are fine what u mean? hes a serial killer what do u want him to do smile with a lolipop in his hand and start jumping up and down?

[ericajennings]

actually a smile would've been down right creepy. Acting schools teach voice and movement and facial expression is a big part in conveying a message.

When a killer smiles and the thought of killing... well that says something much more than a blank stare into space.

[cantlivethisway]

Your so cute!!!!!!!!

[Drakerider0077]

very monotone

[JhayeStar]

that was actually verry good, was the southern accent apart of the whole thing? I just thought you could have done alot more with you facial expressions.

[creek762]

im not teasing any1 ever again

[jgm1889]

your facial expressions arent making me believe that u enjoyed killing your victim.

[GuardianIces208]

I love this...

[BLACKCAPRICORNESS]

amazing work, very good looking, nuff uk love x

[jocose22]

thanks so much

[joronline]

that was great...you have a true talent...next time iron the sheet and light it from both sides...it's a pain to do...but it looks betta...(when I make my vids I do it...I hate to tho...but in the end I'm happy I did...

[jocose22]

hey thanks for the comment....i appreciate that....yea i actually did the monologue all in one take and made it up as i went lol i just hung up my sheet lolol i never really intended on posting it but i kinda liked it im so lazy lolol

[joronline]

lol...yeah ain't the only lazy one...at times by the time I finish settin up, I don't even feel like recording nuffin'...lol...again good job bruh

[tevar1998]

That was great man!  5*s

[xoxneekxox]

he looks so serious and i wanna laf but it like a real story lol wb soon x

[sinnny]

i felt like there should of been a side smirk like an insane side smirk, when u said i just kept doin it

[baby70812]

lol (im not laughing cus this was serious) but that was good (the way u were made me wanna watch

[greendream777]

This is really really good. I don't really think it's funny at all. Your eyes are very captivating and the hold my attention.

great job!

[Tee4now]

O.K. why did I bust out laughing at 8 seconds. I thought Rob was about to bust one out himself. I guess I'm so used to him being silly, I just wasn't expecting the seriousness.

[LazyIncorporated]

omg!! i thought u actually killed someone!! thaht was frikin amazing

[rtoob]

holy s**t you only blinked once the whole time! nice!

[asaund]

Good job Rob Keep up the good work kid!!

[Riiajanelle]

good job. i can see yu n a movies filled wit thugs. lol reminds me of terrence howard a bit, your facial expression nd the way you talk

[Dayfray116]

that was great! kinda scary and really believable. i would have like to see a little more facial expression and hand movement. but it was really good. your voice was very controlled and had a lot of emotion. keep it up

[tklazzbenz6]

That was really serious and intense. Rob you did that, you really did.

[TavyDay]

"i jus can't stop"

love it!

[jocose22]

thanks so much!!!

[datboij06in]

OH wow this is good i almost believed something was wrong with you lol