@leetbob Don't be such a twat. It's sooo easy to be derisive in anonymity. Like @mrhschick said, you try to do better.
The lighting was in the interview and the crushing was at the crime scene. And don't forget that this a school project, not something from an experienced director.
"I hope one day you can find it within yourself to forgive me" - Sorry, but I'll never find it within myself to forgive you for making this shitty short.
Extremely well made and directed, but I didn't really like the story. It leaves you feeling empty, and has no balance (granted, it is a short), which can be a little overwhelming for some viewers.
If this is correct, the brothers killed the released murderer, and then when the one brother wanted to confess the one you see in the video killed him too, but not before his brother somehow gave his confession to the police.
A few years ago, two parents went out for dinner. A few hours later, the babysitter was calling to ask if she could cover up the clown statue in the kids' room, the father said,"Take the kids and get out of the house. We'll call the police, we don't have a clown statue." The "clown statue" is really a killer that escaped from jail. If you don't post this letter on to 10 videos tonight, the clown will be in your bed at 3:00 am with a chainsaw in his hand(SORRY BOUT SPAM THIS REALLY FREAKS ME)
i suggest working on your action shots. there were a lot of scenes where nothing was happening, and the camera wasnt moving. maybe panning and zooming in certain uninteresting areas.
PLEASE DONT READ THIS. YOU WILL GET KISSED ON THE NEAREST POSSIBLE FRIDAY BY THE LOVE OF YOUR LIFE. TOMORROW WILL BE THE BEST DAY OF YOUR LIFE. HOWEVER IF YOU DONT POST THIS COMMENT TO AT LEAST 3 VIDEOS YOU WILL DIE WITHIN 2 DAYS. NOW UV STARTED READIN DIS DUNT STOP THIS IS SO SCARY. SEND THIS OVER TO 5 VIDEOS IN 143? MINUTES WHEN UR DONE PRESS F6 AND UR CRUSHES NAME WILL APPEAR ON THE SCREEN IN BIG LETTERS. THIS IS SO SCARY BECAUSE IT ACTUALLY WORKs (i didnt make this up)
I like how it had one of the brother feeling guilty and he end up telling the truth. Then it had the other brother listening to what the brohter said to the cops. The look on the brothers face......Guilt....it will come back and get you............
Everyones such a fucking dick. That was brilliant. Very well directed some good CLose ups of the blood. I liked the bit with the sheet on the floor and it slowly got blacker. EXCELLENT *****/*****
Agree... very nice set up... I kind of got a flavor that the brother thing was going to be a switch up..but you didn't give it away...just enought to keep us guessing and then hit us with the pay off. I liked it.
The worst shit ever. PERIOD! It's SUCH a sadness to see you idiots plunk down thirty thousand dollars to create human feces.
leetbob 2 years ago
Awesome seriously great job
zeKiller2193 2 years ago
this is awesome:) great job!!!
mrhschick 3 years ago
"Hey! I KNOW! Light a cigarette and then put it out for no reason to make the sequence incredibly dramatic!" - Director - Jason Callaghan
leetbob 3 years ago
@leetbob Don't be such a twat. It's sooo easy to be derisive in anonymity. Like @mrhschick said, you try to do better.
The lighting was in the interview and the crushing was at the crime scene. And don't forget that this a school project, not something from an experienced director.
AingonAtelia 8 months ago
"I hope one day you can find it within yourself to forgive me" - Sorry, but I'll never find it within myself to forgive you for making this shitty short.
Kirynn 3 years ago
fuck you... do better and then you can talk shit!
mrhschick 3 years ago
not so good
liverpoolsamurai 3 years ago
thanks!
PogoFONG 4 years ago
The dialogue is a tad cliche.
littleoutrage 4 years ago
awesome guys yeah the story was ok not perfect but it is a short so nice
munkygrim 4 years ago
Extremely well made and directed, but I didn't really like the story. It leaves you feeling empty, and has no balance (granted, it is a short), which can be a little overwhelming for some viewers.
jackgray 4 years ago
Wow that was amazing.
If this is correct, the brothers killed the released murderer, and then when the one brother wanted to confess the one you see in the video killed him too, but not before his brother somehow gave his confession to the police.
Very nice twist.
Medicora 4 years ago
did his brother confess that he and the smoking guy killed the kindergardener? or the murderer?
PogoFONG 4 years ago
poo
habibilamour 4 years ago
WOW! I got ducky bumps! AMAZING!!!
PixiePink91 4 years ago
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A few years ago, two parents went out for dinner. A few hours later, the babysitter was calling to ask if she could cover up the clown statue in the kids' room, the father said,"Take the kids and get out of the house. We'll call the police, we don't have a clown statue." The "clown statue" is really a killer that escaped from jail. If you don't post this letter on to 10 videos tonight, the clown will be in your bed at 3:00 am with a chainsaw in his hand(SORRY BOUT SPAM THIS REALLY FREAKS ME)
estelacoetto 4 years ago
great video and plot...
i suggest working on your action shots. there were a lot of scenes where nothing was happening, and the camera wasnt moving. maybe panning and zooming in certain uninteresting areas.
good use of reflection also.
great video overall :)
jessigrrl 4 years ago
Yeah he isn't the one talking. The guy on the tape is his brother.
MrMooge 4 years ago
THIS is what they need to be showing in the theater one day. Great job. Loved it
WACKYteenLIFE 4 years ago
Fucking Awesome.
MrGreenGenes 4 years ago
wow, this is a college right? dammnnn.
papastiffy 4 years ago
he may be smoking too xD yeah i realized it at the end xo
silvanoscherrer 4 years ago
WOW
acidsnarl 4 years ago
wow i think this was perfectly done
BOT221 4 years ago 2
GREAT. the director has a future!
EmmaWismyhero 4 years ago
Great Story and Camera angles.. but a tip for futher work.. Try to control your breath when you finish a sentence....and show some emotions in voice
najeebqazizada 4 years ago
yes besides that and the pauses in places where it is not needed are the only things that are wrong..other then that GREAT!
Vifrit 4 years ago
actualli because of the breathning: he is smoking, while telling that, so...
silvanoscherrer 4 years ago
do all student films overuse voice overs?
bonzo9999 4 years ago
that was really well done
malph05 4 years ago
that was cool
axelgrind 4 years ago
Great job in this. Love the plot and the twist at the end. Brilliant.
I love the way you presented it too.
milikosan 4 years ago
awesome! very motivational! whoever made that's headed somewhere good in life!
thejoekster 4 years ago 2
Beautiful movie.
goofyboots159 4 years ago 3
That was kinda a random... i got confused... but it was still awesome! HAHAHA! pu
Britt3333 4 years ago 2
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PLEASE DONT READ THIS. YOU WILL GET KISSED ON THE NEAREST POSSIBLE FRIDAY BY THE LOVE OF YOUR LIFE. TOMORROW WILL BE THE BEST DAY OF YOUR LIFE. HOWEVER IF YOU DONT POST THIS COMMENT TO AT LEAST 3 VIDEOS YOU WILL DIE WITHIN 2 DAYS. NOW UV STARTED READIN DIS DUNT STOP THIS IS SO SCARY. SEND THIS OVER TO 5 VIDEOS IN 143? MINUTES WHEN UR DONE PRESS F6 AND UR CRUSHES NAME WILL APPEAR ON THE SCREEN IN BIG LETTERS. THIS IS SO SCARY BECAUSE IT ACTUALLY WORKs (i didnt make this up)
flowerbudy 4 years ago
Nicely done! Great twist at the end. The maker has a real future.
AingonAtelia 4 years ago
M. Night Shyamalan would be proud!
brantkogasu 4 years ago
oh i get it! the guy in there was the his brother!
OhBaby116 4 years ago
added as favorite :)
W4RW017 4 years ago
Very well done! Excellent story line, keeps the interest and feels real. Great job.
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sad.... so sad...
bam55599 4 years ago
very hemmingway..really reminds me of law and order too. great shots, though some of the dubbing sounds awkward.
awesome work vfs
rrraawwwkk50 4 years ago
So that was his brother, with the policeman?
Alex06CoSonic 4 years ago
that was deep. intersting :)
chellychelle2 4 years ago
amazin
pabloe0168 4 years ago
The end music is fantastic. By itself and in the film.
globexde 4 years ago
Very well done.
I have seen far to many amateur films that suffered from bad acting skills mostly. As mentioned before, well done.
gmanrman 4 years ago
can someone reply to me iff they get it
gaybrigade 4 years ago
Loved the use of the tape recorder. Really brought out the story well. Disturbing story, very human. well done.
endaderoad 4 years ago
just do what's right...
biaeen 4 years ago
Amazing
TenshiRebecca 4 years ago
=/
maybe it wasn't that good in my Opinion because I don't get it.. Oh Well, I know I'll figure it out
MsSunshine321 4 years ago
That was great.
It isn't like one of those art ametuer films that gets you gasping for the air of regular media.
It was actually good...
hellomate639 4 years ago
wow that was amazing. Brilliant.
Well written, shot and edited.
millymonsterous 4 years ago
wait were they twins?
retsel528 4 years ago
Wow...I didn't see that coming.
DemonToad 4 years ago
At first I didn't get it that well, but then I started thinking and it hit me. Amazing.
MISSElectricOcean 4 years ago
wow that was amazing, the ending was ridiculous!
eCHotShotRico 4 years ago
really great ending
hearttaken122603 4 years ago
fantastic ending.
one of the best ones i've seen from vfs so far.
OwningYourLifeNow 4 years ago
i watch all of the vancouver film school videos, they're sooo cool. im from vancouver, maybe il go there one day
dwellingtond 4 years ago
What was the music used in the credits?
kingLOL7 4 years ago
that was amazing. I love these videos!
mrjoecool 4 years ago
WOW
It took me two times to get it but it was great!
FuskaTv 4 years ago
yeah that was a great ending
suckthispoo 4 years ago
I like how it had one of the brother feeling guilty and he end up telling the truth. Then it had the other brother listening to what the brohter said to the cops. The look on the brothers face......Guilt....it will come back and get you............
chrissy599122 4 years ago
That ending was amazing. 5/5
BSpitz218 4 years ago
i liked the reflection of his face in the blood, and i also liked when the blood was soaking through the towel. cool effects.
ellenspeakswhale 4 years ago
Really great short man... It makes me want to join Vancouver Film School.
Intrinsica12 4 years ago
that was brilliant 5/5
StopTheMadness25 4 years ago
oh my god...sweet!
PhoenixAshOnFire 4 years ago
Brilliant. one of the best shorts ive ever seen
3m1ly25 4 years ago
Excellent.
lalalasocks 4 years ago
i thought this was amazing =]
thank you for a terrific short!
funneemunkee 4 years ago
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That was awesome. Awesome at blowing dick. Fuck that movie.
cowboylyon 4 years ago
Everyones such a fucking dick. That was brilliant. Very well directed some good CLose ups of the blood. I liked the bit with the sheet on the floor and it slowly got blacker. EXCELLENT *****/*****
movieposterboy 4 years ago
"sooo... the guy sitting at the table with the interrogator person is the brother that didn't want to be turned in???"
"...i dont get the end... can someone please explaine... (ya, im stupid, i know)"
Damn right you are stupid motherfuckers... This was fucking brilliant!
ThgIdiotFromSweden 4 years ago
i love the simplicity. it spoke volumes.
robbkatherine 4 years ago 2
that ending was extremely the type of ending that i would like to see in any short, or film. loved it.
cacram 4 years ago
WoW.. As close to a perfect short as I can think of.
musichalloffame 4 years ago
This is the best of the 10 or so Vancouver School films I have just watched.
Excellent. Gripping to the end.
Keep up the good work.
cpaj21 4 years ago
sooo... the guy sitting at the table with the interrogator person is the brother that didn't want to be turned in???
angeliumsoar 4 years ago
this is like the tell-tale heart meets frailty
that1guy777 4 years ago
...i dont get the end... can someone please explaine... (ya, im stupid, i know)
ricosneakysuave 4 years ago
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Good that you know that..dude ,how soft in the head can u be?it wasn't that complicated..do u even know ur own name??
shalinc 4 years ago
NICE! Loved it!
KrnBlackWannabe 4 years ago
nice like the end.
mexicanprez 4 years ago
Good set up. A little long in the middle and the payoff could be clearer but I'd give it a giant thumbs up.
mbatchellor 4 years ago
Agree... very nice set up... I kind of got a flavor that the brother thing was going to be a switch up..but you didn't give it away...just enought to keep us guessing and then hit us with the pay off. I liked it.
RDJim 4 years ago 2
very nice, I really liked that. I saw the comment below and kept thinking of what the twist could be, didn't think of that lol ;) good job
childre24 4 years ago
I liked the twist at the end. it was well done
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