oh wow i kinda suspected it was Dustin cuz' who else looks like him more than Dustin and the whole i'm falling in love with u thing so cute and i loved the song it's one of my favorites from B5 and i loved the part when Bryan said Kelly os off somewhere being Kelly LOVED IT 5*
this was............GREAT!!! i loved it they r sooo cute and i hope dustin fix himself up...i hope arianna dont fall for dutsin that will be bad...now to part 4 lolz
Maah Second Time Readingg This Story And Still LOVE IT
TeamEdward151001 7 months ago
This is sweet. They moving toooo fast though.
JacqueenaLaLaLa 8 months ago
oh wow i kinda suspected it was Dustin cuz' who else looks like him more than Dustin and the whole i'm falling in love with u thing so cute and i loved the song it's one of my favorites from B5 and i loved the part when Bryan said Kelly os off somewhere being Kelly LOVED IT 5*
astronewp1 1 year ago
U NEED TO MAKE THIS INTO A BOOK CUZ U IZ A GOOD WRITER
Luv2Sing8737 1 year ago
u should make this into a book!!!!
ur very very very talented
XxCandiiGurlxX 2 years ago
wowe this is good
your teenage love affair!!!!!!
niyahrocs96 2 years ago
patty cakes is so sweet
flygirls64 2 years ago
u made Patrick so sweet , watz ur zodiac sign i bet ur a scorpio like me
b51girl 2 years ago
nahh picses lol.
OneToughCookiee 2 years ago
the reason i said dat was cause in the story u make her say a lot of stuff i would say imafoooo
b51girl 2 years ago
aww Patrick is such a sweetheart.
goodb5girl 2 years ago
bryan is actin like a little kid. and dutin why wont you talk to her?
QueenOfMean15 3 years ago 2
this was awsome..u r a talented writer omg i cudnt stop laffing though
Ulukau808 3 years ago
wow i agree wit the girl under me.
essence1660 3 years ago
wow this is like a movie only better haha
beastgirl18 3 years ago 2
I love this story...this is so good....
Shunte012 3 years ago
omg i can picture everythin
Patrickslovergurl 3 years ago
omg i luv this song i sweat it harshly & im proud 2 say that!
SweetRebelPrincess01 3 years ago
whoa that was really good I loved it
my5cutiesb5 3 years ago
this was............GREAT!!! i loved it they r sooo cute and i hope dustin fix himself up...i hope arianna dont fall for dutsin that will be bad...now to part 4 lolz
BrYaNzBaByGurl4EvR 3 years ago
àww pOor dUstin =( ...
àRiàNnà is Very LuCkyy!!
5*
=D
KayKaystylZ 3 years ago
great story :)
B5babiigurl15 3 years ago
love the stories ..wonder what dutin gonna do
xoxlilmissunshinexox 3 years ago
Lmaoo =x
OneToughCookiee 3 years ago
LLLooooovvvveee it gurl keep it up ur stories r so gud they scare me =O
Patrickgurlforlife 3 years ago
lol :] thankkk youu !
OneToughCookiee 3 years ago
=D no prob but for reals that is so gud man i can't wait for the rest naw for reals hurry it up i can't wait for ever lol jk jk
Patrickgurlforlife 3 years ago
Lmao okayyy . I'll have to thinkk of what to writee cause I just makee it up on the spottt .
=x
OneToughCookiee 3 years ago
=O i kno a diry serect lol
Patrickgurlforlife 3 years ago
loll what ?
OneToughCookiee 3 years ago
U make up ur stories on the spot =O lol
Patrickgurlforlife 3 years ago