As The World Burns S1E1: First Light (Halo Reach Machinima)

[MORTALCHAINSAW100]

nice

[TrigramsProduction]

Oh my..yet another post apocalyptic machinima, there is so much "character progression " and originality i foresee in this, with dialogue that will blow our minds and effects that will make our heads assplode...this will be definitely above 2/10..yes indeed.

[BillyandBarry]

@TrigramsProduction hi!

Thanks for the feedback, sorry if you didn't like this. i aim to make the rest of the series more original than the average post apocalyptic machinima, so if you have any tips that would be great.

[Batdude36]

@BillyandBarry If only this guy knew what is coming in the future.

[TheZeddProductions]

Very well done, I think you should tone down the voice actors and add in some more Cinematography. Overall I think its a great tie in to a new series...

-TheZeddProductions

[lekgolocrap]

nice way to start off a series, i like the Signs Score you put in

[SmallProductions1]

Hmm, not bad. Cinematography could do with some improvement. So far, the story seems a bit generic (as in a bit common). The voicing is alright, maybe altering the audio levels a bit will make quieter voice actors a lot louder. The effects I thought were a bit pointless. Overall, I'd say well done, for a first attempt :)

[Batdude36]

@SmallProductions1 Well the gauss hog water cannons are kinda necessary and realistic and the fires would be there if there was a crash.

[BillyandBarry]

@SmallProductions1 this isn't my first machinima, but thanks for the feedback anyway!

[Batdude36]

Well I guess the National Guard got it's ass owned, just like every other movie it's in.

[ubermaster94]

i remeber the scene with the first zombie attack on civies. i was the cop!!! stephan always did like to come from behind ;D

[XxQmanxXP2B]

I wonder who did the visuals

*wink wink*

[brokenpieces141]

This is great Stephan! <3 much love

[Sean360h]

Me gusta lol very good work

[ubermaster94]

cool

[DropPodStudios]

Nice job i wouldn't worry about views anymore

[MrKillercharm]

three words... Needs more views. This is very good, ima send it to a guy i know he pretty big and hopefully he can give you the big push on youtube that you deserve

[BillyandBarry]

@MrKillercharm thanks dude!