Pater noster

[lunaticonthegrass111]

Done with a proper choir, I reckon this would be pretty good! Well done on your efforts!

[mannometro]

Great, thank You. Perhaps You are interested in my Pater Noster. There isn't a score yet online, but You can hear the music here on YT. A collaboration with tinitussi21. I hope I'll find some ensemble who wants to perform it.

[therockinplace]

where can I get the TTBB arrangement?

[cklampe]

@therockinplace - send me your email and I'll send you a PDF scan of the score.

[mrmcdoodles]

You have a couple of voice leading problems, it seems, such as at 1:29 (not sure of the measure number) between the alto and tenor. Also, there are parallel fifths at 3:48-3:49. Parallel fifths aren't always a problem in modern music, but I think in this case they undermine the cool polyphonic texture you have going. Also, I felt like the final Amen should have been a little more drawn out, but that's mostly personal taste.

Good work!

[cklampe]

@mrmcdoodles thank you so much for your careful listening. The problems are not problems for me. The unison movement at 1:29 is so fleeting. And the parallel movement to the C chord at 3:48? I don't think the melodies lose their individuality here, either. Besides, my parallel 2nds at 3:03 (which you were kind enough not to bring up) give away the game that I am not seeking to be the next renaissance polyphonic composer. While I receive the tradition, voice leading "problems" can be expressive.

[mrmcdoodles]

@cklampe I didn't think the parallel 2nds were a problem, either, which is why I didn't bring them up. I suppose as long as you own the spots where you break the rules, that's what matters. I just know my composition professors have criticized me for doing similar things.

Once again, nice work. I wish you luck in finding a choir to perform it!

[Dimi10b]

Notre père qui etes aux cieux;que ton nom soit sanctifié;que ton règne vienne,que ta volonté soit faites sur terre comme aux ciels,donne nous aujourd'hui notre pain de ce jour;pardonne nous nos offences,comme nous le pardonnons aussi à ceux qui nous ont offencé et ne nous soumets pas à la tentation mais délivre nous du mal amen...(French version)

[HUComposer]

This is beautiful.

[cstr135]

composer = ??? sounds good!

[cklampe]

@cstr135 Composer=Craig Klampe (thank you!)

[linitalips]

Padre Nuestro que estas en el cielo. santificado sea tu nombre,venga a nosotros tu reino, hagase tu voluntad asi en la tierra como en el cielo, Danos el pan de cada dia perdona nuestras ofensas como tambien perdonamos a los que nos ofenden, no nos dejes caer en tentacion y libranos del mal, Por que tuyo es el reino , la glorya por los siglos de los siglos. Amen

[ironmadion55]

lyrics

Poter Noster, qui es in caelis, sanctifictur nomen tuum, advaniat regdum tuum. Fiat voluntas tua, sicut en cailos, et in terra. Ponum Nostrum, quotidianum, da nobis hodie. Et dimitte nobis debita nostra. Sicut dimmittimus debitorious nostris, at ne nos inducas intentationem. Sed libra nos a malo.

Amen

In nomine patris, et filli, et spiritu sancti

Amen

(in the name of the father, son, holy spirit)

:)

[00Dosio]

Pater Noster, qui es in caelis, santificetur nomen tuum, adveniat regnum tuum. Fiat voluntas tua, sicut in coelo et in terra. Panem nostrum quotidianum da nobis hodie. Et dimitte nobis debita nostra. Sicut et nos dimittimus debitoribus nostris. Et ne nos inducas in tentationem. Sed libera nos a malo.

Amen

Now is better :)

[ironmadion55]

:).

[cklampe]

Thank you doshea3. I am so glad you liked it. Yes, a living and breathing performance is much to be preferred over this electronic one.

[doshea3]

A lovely setting! Would love to hear a performance of it. Nice suspensions. :)