Saving Rose ● 2

[SelenaMileyDemi100]

hey, i love this! amazing work. i can't watch the third part of this because of copyright.. could you reupload it without music? that would be amazing!! and when do you continue this? becaue its really really good:)

[chococokkie]

wow... omg omg omg omg.... wow, very passionate i very much love it

[Ian4903]

Wow!

[totallyrandomstalker]

please, continue (:

[BreezyBrunette]

omg this is without a doubt amazing!!!! cant wait for the next one

(:

[chocolatebuttercake]

..Lolena together at the carnival. They so belong together

. Just the parts with Mike he is horrible and like super super scary

. Max Thieriot...He's just amazing =P

. That was awsome..So happy to see him in the story. It was new and refreshing.

[itsNiCAx3]

1. The part when Will and Rose were skipping rocks :) It was so cute.

2. The last part. I honestly want Mike to get run over by a truck or something.

3. Dylan O'Brien!!!! [Him and Selena looked so cute together at the TCA's ;)] haha.

4. asdfghjkl. I love Alex Gaskarth <3333

btw, who's that dude who plays Mike? i've never seen him before, lol.

[intolerablefeeling]

1. Skipping Rocks. :)

2. The Ending because Mike is a son of a bitch.

3. Nick Jonas.

4. Alex Gaskarth is effin' hot. :'>

[buttercreamJenny]

1.Skipping rocks part

2. The whole ending

3.Max

So can't wait for the next one! I'm stoked

[CasiAngeles193]

omgosh!!! What a moster!!!! :( poor rose!!

[JonasBrothersfan96]

1. Skipping rocks in the water

2. The last part

3. Nick

4.Extremely hehe

[beccaarnold10]

i like this episode you should write more of it whens the next one coming :) ?

[aly1742]

this story leaves me breathless!

1. the skipping rocks part, because it was so innocent and non-violent

2. rose falling down the stairs

3. hmmm...idk, maybe nick, or josh hutcherson

4. yess! he is soo cute <3

[x3ShakespearesGaal]

THIS IS AMAAZING! I love this series already! Wheens the next episode outt? :)

[TeamTaylena2]

1) when they were skipping rocks, it was cute(:

2) The end...i dont like Mike >:|

3) Dylan O'Brian ;D he's amazing(:

4) I LOVE ALEXXX<33

[chocolatemuffincutie]

1.)The whole Carnival Scene

2.)When Mike started to treat Rose horribly when she came home..That's just not right

3.)Max T [=

LOVED THE EPPY CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE<3

[juliee0602]

1. When they were at the lake so adorable. 2. When Mike tried rape her and wouldnt let her go to Jillian. 3. Nick.? Or David Herine.? And Demi and, Alex really cute together(:

[bfflovers]

... the lake scene duh ; skipping rocks, hand holding, sparks flyingg etcc..

...Mike's rage & Rose not being able to tend to Julian. Like boo!

...Cory Monteith pls!

...Yeaa him and Demi are really cut together xD

[SelenaMileyDemi100]

i hate mike. how can he? i love the series!!

[ChloesLife]

1. When they were skipping rocks, i jut thought it was a really cute moment

2. The ending, i was so scared and I just HATE mike

3. I dont know haha Nick? joe?

4. OMG i love Alex Gaskarth

[writtenxsecrets]

1. I loved the part where Selena tries to save her son, it really does build up mixed emotions in me.

2. the last, mike is a fucking ass. i'll beat him with a stick.

3. hm, nick? lolol

4. roflmao, alltimelow! <3

[RockFreakx3]

1. The whole scene between Will and Rose at the carnival :)

2. The very last scene. Oh my gosh I hate Mike with a burning passion!

3. Dylan O'Brien. Sorry I'm just in love with that guy! xD

4. Love you for using Alex Gaskarth :))

[zanessa49]

1.the part where Will was talking to julian :) because it was cute

2.the end where rose fell down the stairs. it really shocked me

3.idk who liam is

4.well idk who alex is so it doesnt matter :)

and i really love this series :)

[EastCoastGals]

1. My favorite part is when Will teaches Rose how to throw the rock but Rose knows tricked when she said she knew how to do it. How cute. 2. The fight. 3.idk 4. Cool to see someone different

[brokendreams156]

O gosh. This is amazing!!!!

[WorldOFJonasx]

1. When they were holding hands!

2. When her husband is beating her.

3. I am not sure..

4. Yeah, my brother loves ATL.

[tastetheskittlerain]

-Skipping rocks becuz it was so cute and willam is just rlly sweet.

--Selena getting hurt

----Theriot

----Yeah pretty freaking cool<3

[shazziexzx]

Thank you for bring Alex Gaskarth into this? Any chance he and his wife could break up? And we could get together? ;) i love this series, your my fave writer! Your stuff is so good!

[BonnieWrightFan4ever]

1. The skipping rocks, it was so cute

2. Mike before the carnival

3. I don't know, but I'm sure it'll be great

4. Unexpected, but he seems right

[Dijanax3]

1. My favorite part is probably when will and rose felt the eleqtricity when they touched for the first time

2. the beginning when mike was acting like a dick towards bianca.

3. I don't know who could play luam, sorry.

4. yes it is cool.

I cannot wait for the next part.

[misslolenalove]

Loved it so much

[nessahudgensrulz]

That was beyond phenomenal. I absolutely love your stories. <3

1. My favourite part has got to be when Will & Rose were doing that rock-throwing game on the water. It was so bittersweet; the way you had written that scene made their spark so remarkable yet sad to see how different Will treats her compared to Mike ;(

2. The hallway beating & when Rose fell down. That was incredibly horrific xP Mike is so scary ! Dx

3. Maybe Nick Jonas or Taylor Lautner ?

4. Alex is perfect as Edwardd <3 ;)

[Eveeexoxo]

LEEMME JUST SAY THAT PICTURE OF LOGAN IS TO DIEEEE FOR!!!! <3 <3 <3

1. My favorite part was when Willd and Rose where skipping rocks!! :)

2. Having to read what Rose went through with Mike at the end! :(

3. I think Liam Hemsworth should play Liam!! Or Josh Hutcherson! ;)

4. LOVE! <3

[StrangeGirl4]

1. Julian and Will moment. It's adorable!

2. Mike being an asshole.

3. Uhhh.. Thomas Dekker? He's hot! To be honest, I think Liam was William at first. Didn't know it's different people. lol!

4. I didn't expect Edward would be Alex. xD

continue the series asap! ;p

[whiteminime5]

I loved the cliffhanger!! I didn't have a least favorite. I couldn't imagine the story without any of the parts. And Taylor lautner. And yes!!!! They are so cute together!!!! New one asap. They are soooooo good!!!!

[fearlessxdreams]

-My favourite part is when William and Rose was at the carnival (:

-When Rose fell off the stairs! HOLEY CHEESE, CLIFFHANGER !

-Fransisco Lachowski, he'd oh hot damn ! ;D

i love your writing, it made mine look like a piece of crap.

[starflower250]

i need more plz!!

[AlexComics2010]

Mooooorrrrreeeee it's sooooo goooodddd :)

[XXLoveChannel]

Oh and one more thing. Hehe. PLEASE POST P.O.A.S.H TODAYYYYY!!!!!! I'M DYING HERE!!!!!!!!! Okie now I'm done! Kay bye. Gonna go watch the Glee movie!!!!!!!

[XXLoveChannel]

This is not a comment anymoreeeeee!!! It's a novel! Sorry... :/ Longest comment evar? I think yes!

ing? I dont know. But yeah. Good choice of people! Okay this is finally the end of this comment. :D Keep writing!

[XXLoveChannel]

Haha have to continue again! Damn your amazing stories!

r. Will do something! Mike needs to leave like RIGHT NOW!!!!

3. Someone new? Hm... How about Taylor Lautner, Joe Brooks (The singer), or Drew Roy? But in the end it is your decision. You pick the perfect people! Do what your heart tells you! (Man that sounded cheesy)

4. Fuck yeah it is! I love All Time Low with a burning passion! I never actually thought of Alex to be with Demi... Aren't they friends though in real life? Or are they dat

[XXLoveChannel]

1. When Will "taught" Rose how to skip rocks. It was adorable! It showed that they already had a connection! And when Julian grabbed onto Will's finger. He sure likes Will a hell of a lot better than is own shitty dad.

2. When Rose got home from the carnival. Man that scene was intense. I was literally about to shit myself! Someone needs to choke hold him seriously. No one deserves that type of abbbuse! Why doesn't Rose report to Willi- I mean the police? ;D I mean he is her next door neighbo

[aZnNeRd101]

1. when will taught rose how to skip the rocks cos it was cutee(:

2. mike. hate him.

3. i dunno

4. XD

[DobbyisinGryffindor]

GREAT! I absolutely love this story:)))))))

1)Lolena parts :)

2)abusive parts :"(

3)i don't know...i don't care anyone will be fine :)))

4) i don't really know him

[caitlinjessicax3]

- When Rose "tricked" William, too cute! :'D <3

- The entire time after Rose returned home. I wanted to cry. :|

- I'm not entirely sure. :'D

-Too cool, he's freaking adorable! :'D

[crazychococatmonkey]

1.) Just every moment of Lolena in this eppy

2.) Just like everyone the part where selena is getting abused )= ]=

3.) Freddie or Max

4.) Yeah he's awsome!

[nishitaa1]

1) When Julian holds onto William's finger (: that part was adorable

2) When Mike was abusing Rose :(

3) Joe?

4) I don't know who that is lol xD

[GhostGirlfriendsPast]

1. When William 'taught' Rose how to skip rocks. c; That was so cute.

2. When Mike ripped her blouse off...and started abusing her. ;c

3. Joe Jonas? OOH , OH I KNOW.. BEAU MIRCHOFF. (: From Awkward.

4. i don't really know him .. haha

[foreverNalwaysILY]

YES! i like screamed when i saw this...<3 [:

-william and rose, when he was teaching her how to skip a rock. he was just being beyond sweet to her and i think for a moment she realized what she was missing out on.

-when mike went bezerk and practically pushed rose down the stairs! :(((

-i think that should be up to you, you always pick the best cast love. :D

-haha yes! pretty sahhhhweeet!

[jillpill9898]

1. I liked the part where Will and Rose were skipping rocks.

2. The end had a surprising impact on me. It made me feel really sad and powerless. Like there was nothing I could do.

3. Idk who Liam is, but I know you will make the right decision.

4. I actually don't know who Alex is either. I must be really out of it. Completely Unexpected, which I guess is a good thing.

Awesome series! Still so happy you are back!

[x3Nelena]

@jillpill9898 thanks for your comment(: and alex is in the band all time low :)

[njplovesjb4life]

1) I liked the part when William was teaching Rose how to skip a rock :)

2) When Mike said "Why can't you act like a normal wife?" BITCH WHY CAN'T YOU GO JUMP OFF A CLIFF.

3) Hmm.. Rob Lowe but back when he was young. He was soo gorgeous. Plus, since he was in The Outsiders, it would be perfect :D

4) Aww yeah ;)

[honeybunches648]

i think zac efron should be liam. & its a really good story! next episode soon?

[mischiefmanagedx3]

<3

[cookiechococupcakes]

1st- Ummm just the moment when Lolena talks and meets

2nd-When Mike started to hurt Rose when she came home

3rd-Umm either Freddie(H),Alex(P),or Max(T). I'm srry this probably doesn't help becuz I chose 3. I'm just these r all great ppl I wud luv to see in ur series

Hey I'm new to ur stories and I just got fully hooked to both ur series just today. I love lolena! Ur stories just makes us lolena lovers so happy. Ur so amazing and talented.Ur an inspiration to me and other<3

[xSushiiRollx]

commenting because you said please&the story is amazing itself. :D

- when Julian clutches William's finger, and laughs. it seems sooo cute! hehe

- ...where Mike lets go of Rose's hand and she falls..like what even? why the hell did he let go, i don't understand.

- i think either Tom Felton or Freddie Highmore, or someone attractive like them, since i really like those choices, people suggested and it has to be someone gorgeous that makes Mike jealous of, right?

- & yes(:

[JonasBrothersXOLover]

1. When she thought of Will's eyes as a happy thought.

2. I know it doesn't matter who plays who, it's a story really with pictures portraying characters loosely.. but I imagined Joe as Demi's other half. It's just a bit weird for me to adjust to Alex.

3. Nick. He just fits.

4. ...Like I said for my second answer.

[TheJelenafan]

1.The one with William and Rose

2.Propably the beating part

3.Alex Pettyfer, HE'S SO BEAUTIFUL!

4. Yes, I love him :D

[miniselenajessica]

.Lolena

.Selena getting hurt. It makes me sad but then again it's also the awsome part becuz the abuse she gets is the main plot of this story and it keeps things interesting.

.Max Theriot<3 I just watched my soul to take so yeah I couldn't help myself :/

Oh man 16 comments only! I must see the next episode soon or I shall die. And I mean that I will die. I am too in love with this series too wait for 50 comments but I'll try my very best to keep calm.

[lOlEnAx3]

1. the lake and rock scene

2. when rose fell off the stairs S:

3. PLEASE one of the guys from teen wolf!!!! maybe dylan o'brien! : Dhe has a crush on selena

4. HECK YEAH!

[randyrandom100]

1. Lolena in the carnival!!!

2. The parts with Selena and Mike..I get scared watching those parts. My heart starts to beat fast and I start to feel the suspense guessing what will Mike to do Rose now?

3. I like the idea of Cameron and Max...so if u cud chose eithier one of them it'd be awsome (= .lol.

So I hope there is more coming soon. Becuz I am horrible on being patient. Hahah oh and I wish I cud somehow get in the story and beat Mike with a bat. although rose might get made at me =P

[celebstory101]

1. The Lolena scene <3

2. Nothign really. I know it sounds crazy but I actually liked the beaten up scene. It rlly showed your talent of writing.

3. Cameron Quiseng <33 I love him!

4. So effing cool :D

[lorybear]

1.) carnival and rocks sccene

2.) selena getting beat up,

3.)cameron quiseng

omigoodness..i loveeee this series!

why is mike so angry ! i can selena stand getting beat up everyday... i would go crazy! i love love love love love the series!

[MsCrazy4ubabe]

you are brilliant. your stories brilliant. you should get an award or something

[celebstory101]

I loved it <33

[loloenafanforever]

1.) The Carnival Lolena scene [= (it was a carnival right? .lol.)

2.)The parts when selena gets abused..it's so so so sad D=

3.) Ummm Freddie Highmore?...Lol

4.)Oh yes it is!

I can't wait for the next one. This series is full of awsomeness and suspense! I can't wait for Lolena. I love love love love ur 2 series! Only if these were real series. U know real series like this actually showed on TV. The plots of ur series r so unique and orignal. I JUST LOVE THEM AND UR WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[softballluver123456]

so good, already it's such a good storyline.

[Selgomezfangirlforev]

1.)Lolena skipping rocks together<3 ADORABLE!

2.)Just all the parts with Mike in it -.-

3.) Umm I don't rlly know so I'll just agree with @selenaisawsome101..only becuz I <3 Max he's adorable and I wanna stay away from the disney characters ya know? Becuz too much disney characters will just ruin the effect the story is giving me ]=

4.)Ahaha most definitely

Love ur writing keep up the good work. Ur series always are my fav lolena stories<3

[stacey0191]

1. when logan 'taught' her to skip a rock, god it was romantic! :)

2. The end! i need to know what happens next!! If i comment like 3 times does it count to the 50 comments? :)

3. erm.... Who should play liam, erm... Im thinking like, Nick Jonas :D

4. Hell yeah, i actually didnt see that coming i thought it'd be Joe Jonas, but i thought it was nice that you mixed the couples up and didnt stick to the orginal people who like Demi and Joe together so yeah, nice touch :)

Cant wait for next one

[JoeJonasLuver925]

1) when they threw rocks together

2) umm the part where it ENDED! :O I need to know what happens!

AGH! ur killing me!

3) I forgot who Liam was lmao sorry but just as something random...

tom felton cuz i find him attractive! Hah

4) yeah very cool i thought it would be the typical joe... :)

eeep if u dont post soon i will seriously spontaniously combust xD

[Selenaisawsome101]

1.)Fav is the lolena skipping rocks part duh! XD

2.)The ending becuz ]=

3.)well, what kind of character is Liam?

4.)To be truthful I don't know who he is..hahaha

[Selenaisawsome101]

@Selenaisawsome101 -Ohhh I have a idea! Who can play Liam do u know Max Theriot? Yeah I think he would be a good LIAM[= [= [=

[NileyFan30]

oh my jesus christ this is amazing.

i was literaqlly crawling with butterflies.

you are amazing <3