me performing a short slam

[danielepila]

why so nude?

[slopPylessOns]

all art is subjective. never let anyone tell you any different

[RocksteadyNL]

What a cool way to get to know about this thing called slam poetry. I came here via one of your other vids and I have to say, I like this a lot, loved the way how you ended it by the way. And even tho I am obviously no expert: you did a great job !

[ilovefrankandbeans]

i would do a poem about your tits, my poem goes something like this, i wanna eat your pussy and fuck your tits, thank you

[rawlnos101]

hey guess what

ur boobies are very great at poetry

[RitaBurrita]

that was great !

[poetadeslam]

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh  yeah that's, great I like it so much, me encanto niña esta buenisimo, c'est très bien charmante, you're muy buena.

[gs16mk1]

your boobies are great too.

[frobles2000]

Great work. Both written and performed. !!

[BellaLove26]

That was great? More please?? lol

[smokendry]

they make pills for people like this...

[Arny12056]

AMAZING! ^0^

[mnmaggie]

Nice! I'm in a lit performance class and this would be killer to show. Great job!

[Jerez911]

Wooow!! Really good... Nice rhythm..!

BTW, Nice bathing suit...Hahahah! Cheers...

[pixieperfect53]

i love this :) very nicely done

[KayDR27]

That was really, really good, I liked that. Amazing! I see u have a little soul in ya:)

[funkykatie41]

lol

[Feministeppin]

this is pretty amazing girl!

i felt left hanging at the end though, as if i were expecting you to say something kind of rhyming with drum. i think it would be more of a powerful ending if you did