decent stories in your films, just work on the technical aspects - shot composition, sound continuity, scene continuity etc. i find that the simple technical structure is lacking, which takes away from the storytelling - despite there being good material here! you're around my age, so i understand you're probably teaching yourself a lot of stuff at this point - so i feel for you haha
nice tune i liked it, jus wasn't keen on the intro part to video. If the song was playing through out this intro leading up to when racheal introduces herself to katie, the narrative of the song would have been a lot stronger in portraying what ever was going on with racheal. Silence is golden and all that shit some times can say more. good stuff (charlie chaplin)
the camera work and dialogue was good. but sadly didnt mix right. good video on in general though, was there a filter change on the camera after the song?
THIS IS THE STUPIDEST THING EVER. BUT I LOVE MY MOM SO I AM NOT TAKING ANY CHANCES.If you don't copy and paste this onto 10 videos your mom will die in 4 hours
Hi thank you very much. I actually was the camera operator was well as the director/edior/writer etc. I only found out about the competition 3 days before we filmed this, so I didn't have much time to gather any crew!
Very nice camera work here. It's hard to find a camera operator who can shoot creative shots, without being annoying, but you've pulled it off. Good job!
Your collection of videos suggest to me that you're a very good director of actors. The quality of performance is always high, and you don't really get that from luck.
I'm growing rather fond of this video. I've watched it a few times now.
this is certainly one of the best submissions for 2009. i've had a look at your website, I would have never guessed how young the production team were.
decent stories in your films, just work on the technical aspects - shot composition, sound continuity, scene continuity etc. i find that the simple technical structure is lacking, which takes away from the storytelling - despite there being good material here! you're around my age, so i understand you're probably teaching yourself a lot of stuff at this point - so i feel for you haha
MajicPictures 2 years ago
Brilliant work! The sound is unfortunate but the style and story were really powerful
MadonnaMiaCapelli 2 years ago
nice tune i liked it, jus wasn't keen on the intro part to video. If the song was playing through out this intro leading up to when racheal introduces herself to katie, the narrative of the song would have been a lot stronger in portraying what ever was going on with racheal. Silence is golden and all that shit some times can say more. good stuff (charlie chaplin)
tommywiddle 3 years ago
For one, that blonde girl is WAY too skinny. Her legs are like toothpicks.
And second, who lights a cigarette like that??
Spierdalaj97 3 years ago
This is a brilliant short. I love this.
theindiemovie 3 years ago 10
the camera work and dialogue was good. but sadly didnt mix right. good video on in general though, was there a filter change on the camera after the song?
dartvader117 3 years ago
Could somebody please explain to me what this was all abou - Or why it is entertaining?
Foster2Entertain 3 years ago
yeah, this was really good until the opening credits began...
7EchoProductions 3 years ago
the girls are very preety
projectoz88 3 years ago 4
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THIS IS THE STUPIDEST THING EVER. BUT I LOVE MY MOM SO I AM NOT TAKING ANY CHANCES.If you don't copy and paste this onto 10 videos your mom will die in 4 hours
webkinzplays101 3 years ago
was creatively filmed, just really slow for my taste
stickytoes2 3 years ago
You know what, I was really hoping that this would get to the top 10.
Megan0run 3 years ago 2
very nice! i liked it! Yes again the way it was shot was good.
AChung4 3 years ago
Hi thank you very much. I actually was the camera operator was well as the director/edior/writer etc. I only found out about the competition 3 days before we filmed this, so I didn't have much time to gather any crew!
EsbiFilmStudios 3 years ago
this was fucking ausome!!!
projectoz88 3 years ago 7
Very nice camera work here. It's hard to find a camera operator who can shoot creative shots, without being annoying, but you've pulled it off. Good job!
Zenobios 3 years ago
favourited. Very nice work, this is up there with the better ones. nice story, shots and characters.
thevoter01 3 years ago 4
nice work
M.V.B Films
MEOSHABEAN1 3 years ago
great acting, but wish the camera could hold still. not a fan of the whole Paul Greengrass thing.
But great work and nice score.
Best of luck my friend
-D R Westphal
DRW90 3 years ago
Great work!!
victorpeceno 3 years ago 4
PS. does anybody know how to vote for this contest?
theindiemovie 3 years ago
Your collection of videos suggest to me that you're a very good director of actors. The quality of performance is always high, and you don't really get that from luck.
I'm growing rather fond of this video. I've watched it a few times now.
theindiemovie 3 years ago
Thank you all for your kind comments. I'm sure Rebecca Jeffries and Annie Orchard would be thrilled to know they're thought highly of. =)
EsbiFilmStudios 3 years ago
Well done sexy ;]
owenxowen 3 years ago
lol ya, i saw ur video earlier today
its very well done....especially the guitarist
najeev01 3 years ago
Hey, nice work. The best one in the competition that I've seen so far. It was very real, good job.
Esom123 3 years ago
Very very good. Loved it.
VanillaBear11 3 years ago
Nice work. It's dark in the UK like Seattle.
Spective10 3 years ago
ur from seattle? Not that far from vancouver canada, dark here too. rains a ton.
CellarDoorFilm 3 years ago
Sophie Boyce i am impressed.
ashleynew1 3 years ago
Great stuff! I loved it, well done Boyceeee! xXxXxXx
Paulakfrost 3 years ago
this is certainly one of the best submissions for 2009. i've had a look at your website, I would have never guessed how young the production team were.
great work! good luck.
theclassicweirdo 3 years ago 2
great job i think this is the best one so far
tetrixcorechico 3 years ago 6
Very enjoyable, and strangely uplifting. I'd like to see some more of your work.
theindiemovie 3 years ago
sophie, you should be porud of this:D
its SO good:d
i love annie! haha its so unlike her, and omg i never really heard becca sing before! wow!
o yeh whats this comp for? you should so win with this one!
love vicky lowry
vickipoynter 3 years ago
This is really moving, the song she sings is beautiful. Great acting and direction.
Megan0run 3 years ago
Real nice little film. Great acting and camera movement. Good luck!
therunaway8 3 years ago
acting was the best part of this video and thats rare so far for this competition. nice work.
nucleargarden 3 years ago
Good acting and interesting handheld camera movement, very 60's french new wave. lol ...worked for the most part. good job,though
kyleispoop 3 years ago
jus chekin out the competition. first one ive seen from the uk.
Room149 3 years ago