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  • decent stories in your films, just work on the technical aspects - shot composition, sound continuity, scene continuity etc. i find that the simple technical structure is lacking, which takes away from the storytelling - despite there being good material here! you're around my age, so i understand you're probably teaching yourself a lot of stuff at this point - so i feel for you haha

  • Brilliant work! The sound is unfortunate but the style and story were really powerful

  • nice tune i liked it, jus wasn't keen on the intro part to video. If the song was playing through out this intro leading up to when racheal introduces herself to katie, the narrative of the song would have been a lot stronger in portraying what ever was going on with racheal. Silence is golden and all that shit some times can say more. good stuff (charlie chaplin)

  • For one, that blonde girl is WAY too skinny. Her legs are like toothpicks.

    And second, who lights a cigarette like that??

  • This is a brilliant short. I love this.

  • the camera work and dialogue was good. but sadly didnt mix right. good video on in general though, was there a filter change on the camera after the song?

  • Could somebody please explain to me what this was all abou - Or why it is entertaining?

  • yeah, this was really good until the opening credits began...

  • the girls are very preety

  • was creatively filmed, just really slow for my taste

  • You know what, I was really hoping that this would get to the top 10.

  • very nice! i liked it! Yes again the way it was shot was good.

  • Hi thank you very much. I actually was the camera operator was well as the director/edior/writer etc. I only found out about the competition 3 days before we filmed this, so I didn't have much time to gather any crew!

  • this was fucking ausome!!!

  • Very nice camera work here. It's hard to find a camera operator who can shoot creative shots, without being annoying, but you've pulled it off. Good job!

  • favourited. Very nice work, this is up there with the better ones. nice story, shots and characters.

  • nice work

    M.V.B Films

  • great acting, but wish the camera could hold still. not a fan of the whole Paul Greengrass thing.

    But great work and nice score.

    Best of luck my friend

    -D R Westphal

  • Great work!!

  • PS. does anybody know how to vote for this contest?

  • Your collection of videos suggest to me that you're a very good director of actors. The quality of performance is always high, and you don't really get that from luck.

    I'm growing rather fond of this video. I've watched it a few times now.

  • Thank you all for your kind comments. I'm sure Rebecca Jeffries and Annie Orchard would be thrilled to know they're thought highly of. =)

  • Well done sexy ;]

  • lol ya, i saw ur video earlier today

    its very well done....especially the guitarist

  • Hey, nice work. The best one in the competition that I've seen so far. It was very real, good job.

  • Very very good. Loved it.

  • Nice work. It's dark in the UK like Seattle.

  • ur from seattle? Not that far from vancouver canada, dark here too. rains a ton.

  • Sophie Boyce i am impressed.

  • Great stuff! I loved it, well done Boyceeee! xXxXxXx

  • this is certainly one of the best submissions for 2009. i've had a look at your website, I would have never guessed how young the production team were.

    great work! good luck.

  • great job i think this is the best one so far

  • Very enjoyable, and strangely uplifting. I'd like to see some more of your work.

  • sophie, you should be porud of this:D

    its SO good:d

    i love annie! haha its so unlike her, and omg i never really heard becca sing before! wow!

    o yeh whats this comp for? you should so win with this one!

    love vicky lowry

  • This is really moving, the song she sings is beautiful. Great acting and direction.

  • Real nice little film. Great acting and camera movement. Good luck!

  • acting was the best part of this video and thats rare so far for this competition. nice work.

  • Good acting and interesting handheld camera movement, very 60's french new wave. lol ...worked for the most part. good job,though

  • jus chekin out the competition. first one ive seen from the uk.

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