Shakespeare audition- Midsummer Nights Dream - Helena

[actinggurl1995]

you don't need to put as much emphasis on the rhyming scheme, it makes you sound kind of silly and draws attention away from the actual words you are speaking

[theHDmakers]

kinda goodish... its like spacey and not up to speed. i dunno. it was like you were reading it.

[hollywoodifyable]

You are good. :) But it's sort of like you're reciting a poem. But you TOTALLY have the facials and the gestures down.

[Teresasaur]

read it like ur heart is beating =]

boom boom boom boom

[willowpuff]

You read it like a poem, it's not designed for that, read it wiht a natural cadence.

I loved how natural your body was though.

[vampireanimegirl]

Your voice sounds like your making sentence fragments with the pausing. If your recitation was more fluid, I think it'd be better. :D

[kylielovescole]

Love the blocking. Your body movements look very natural. But the voice is very constricted. You sound a bit like you're enunciating each word a bit too much. Although it is Shakespeare, you should speak with a natural cadence.

Good job!

[bohemiandaisy9]

love the facial expressions! more body language as well. I've played Helena 14 times...hah! She is so much more interesting(nay, even fairer!)than Hermia!

[PanCzeszejko]

plum :)

[SexiKittie]

wtf... u need to move around your arms are too stiff.. you need to work on movement and you sound too robotic.. u need to analyze and kinda work on her character and objectives.. dont just sound low and frustrated you need to show and let it out naturally. ya know?

[angerbearftw]

im sorry, but i hated it

[hayleycamire]

your vocality is kind of like a broken record broken record.

you need to develop a character and analize helena before you dive into the script or lines. first find you objective throughout this monologue.

[ArcticBlanchett2]

I agree. you have good energy, but you are pushing the lines WAY to much. It's over done and this makes it a little unbelievable-- or like you have pre rehearsed the lines; the ones you want emphasis on and the rythmic flow.

[nikabooo]

It seems as if you're concentrating way too much on the text... it needs to be more believable. But other than that good job!!

[SoonToBeDisney]

beautifully done!

[DaizyDizaster]

thats really good

i am playing helena tommorow

i can lurn a thing or two

or a hundred

(:

[onx411]

This was pretty good. In the beginnning you came on strong, but after that you kept the same tone and didn't mix it up alittle bit. Also it seems you were trying to, i guess almost force the words out soit didn't flow very well. But i think if you work on it more it will be really good