It would be awesome if you got good enough to continue in the metalocalypse episodes. it somewhat resembles their animation except for the characters themselves. good job, 5*'s!!
@thelogicalperspectiv Hey thanks!!! This was our first ever real attempt at animating using Photoshop and After Effects primarily, so I am sure it will only get better! We're currently looking into further software/ tools to help us get stuff down faster (instead of manually keyframing EVERYTHING!), and we're definitely going to create more IKFZ content. Stay tuned!
Hey Gana, thanks for the feedback! Yes, it was VERY hard work! Glad you like the chars!
I have been rustling a few more people in to do voice acting, so likely when I get the animated web comic rolling along, there will be an actual continuing story, voices, etc (this spoof/homage was kind of done as a test, and a bit of a gag as well - but there is a real story to tell, and a more seriously toned IKFZ on the way) - and some other goofy shorts like this one from time to time. :)
Heya bro, just wanted to again say, what a great job you did with this. I know what ya went through and I am seriously impressed. Looking forward to seeing what else the brain spawns :)
Yeah, i hope we can put more of these together... more than likely it will end up being as a simpler animated webcomic, mostly because of how much time & work would be required to make it even this level of animation with such a small team of two people!
Part of me says "Okay, that was worth 9 minuets, 21 seconds I spent watching this" and part of me says (Even though I didn't pay to watch) "...I want my money back"
ha ha, yeah, that's kind of the joke. Those old cartoons would always have the craziest intros (think Thundercats or similar), and the actual animating in the episodes were often minimal or cheesy, and didn't deliver the goods the intro promised.
No worries though, I'll be doing a 'serious' take soon, one way or another on these characters. :)
Man, it's true as hell. For example the beetlejuice intros were amazing as all hell but the show was plodding and had really awful animation.
Weirdly though I just watched some real ghostbusters episodes and while the animation was inconsistant and the shows had some of the trappings of children's programming contrivances from that era, the writing was..surprisingly really really really good, and held up very well today.
Surprise surprise, turns out J Michael Straczynski wrote for that show!
I loved watching Ghostbusters... even the cheesier episodes like the one where Slimer multiplies, and then combines into a humongous Slimer, or the one with Stay Pufft vs Murray the Mantis, the one where Egon gets posessed ("FREE TO DESTROY!"), the subway train to the netherworld, & probably my favourite, the zombie chicken and the undead farmers episode... so much good stuff!
Now... the animation was decent. Not super great, but there's only two of you, whaddayaexpect.
The robot's voice was a bit hard to understand, you could probably turn the modulation down a notch.
The build-up was fun simply BECAUSE it dragged out ridiculously and built up to nothing.
I feel like you wasted some joke opportunities, though. E.g. I thought the pod might actually turn out to just be a bomb. Also, the base explosion was anticlamactic, but was that the point?
Hey littlebeasti! Thanks for the awesome and thorough feedback! Yes, it is only two of us. And basically me doing all the artwork assets, etc, with Grey doing character rigging etc. I'll see what I can do about the bot voices, maybe even a subtitle. And yeah, you got it! It kinda was the point, in those cartoons the good guys always won no matter what! point A, point B, the end. :) And no worries about the zombies not having lines, there's going to be a story side to this nuttyness too. ;) THNX!
Intro was good, ive never been a fan of these style animated shows, but this was different, kept me interested. good work on the art and animation! 5 stars and favorited.
Thanks a lot, LH! Appreciate the support, and that's really awesome to hear from someone that's not very into these types of things. Hopefully the serious-ish side of the IKFZ will entertain you just as much (in a different way of course).
this is great stuff, man! good work on animation and effects. as was already mentioned, storytelling needs polishing. more dynamism and less long, slow scenes. and more zombies ofcourse :) this has very good pontential for a series. have you tried submitting this to Adult Swim? right up their alley.
Thanks, SSR123. And I appreciate the feedback! I'll definitely look into the Adult Swim thing, I had no idea they took submissions openly. Also, yeah, I think what we're going to do is, we'll do a full on 'serious w/ story' episode (or animated webcomic), and include a spoof/ self-satire short (like this one) alongside each one. So 2/3d's action and story, 1/3rd just spoofy lampoony nonsense. :)
Quick word of advice: Your storytelling skills need some work. There were literally like 20 seconds at a time where NOTHING happened. Like the pod flying down. what? just have it fall, crash into the planet and replace all of that free time with zombies kicking butt. there was only about a minute of that and I was disappointed.
hey blackxrosesxforever - thanks for the feedback. Yeah, that's been a mixed bag response wise. Some folks like the build up, some don't. No worries though, there IS a story to be told, & action sequences to be delivered in future with this characters. :) This particular one shot was done more as a spoof in general - we're figuring out if we want to do further content as either a webcomic, or even an animated webcomic, considering how much work would be involved in doing this with just 2 of us!
Also, it would just be me doing all the artwork and art assets. But in an animated web comic format it might be much more manageable, and we might be able to produce more with more frequency!
Thanks again for the feedback. It's very encouraging, man!
Yup yup! All the animation in After Effects, but I did all the art assets (character pieces, backgrounds, etc) in Photoshop (some of them from sketches scanned in, and digitally inked or painted), save for the couple of 3d models used (the Coffin-1 and the URN Pod). The 2 1/2D backgrounds were also done in AE (like the Fortress interior, planet shots, etc).
Thanks!!! Pass it on! We're figuring out what & how we'll keep doing more IKFZ. :)
I actually liked the big build up for this supposedly epic fight for it then to turn into them falling down the stairs and accidentally winning makes it a good little end. After all how else would you expect to actually fight. Well thought out will be keeping an eye out.
Thanks, SDE! Glad you appreciated the spoof/ lampoon in this! I do have more 'serious' stories to tell with them, but we'll be mixing up spoof with serious in the time to come. :D
same as pebbles, saw the link on STWPT and checked it out. gotta say.... it seriously reminded me of stuff you see on adult swim now. not saying whether that's a good or bad thing... it's just a thing.
I must say, that although I adore Andrew's stuff, I don't think it really fits your animation style (which is amazing, but the song doesn't seem as edgy as your comic/Starcraftesque colour choices). I do look forward to the next episode tho~ :)
Here cus of Andrew i must admit. I heard the theme when he first posted and i was epic excited to see this. Mr. Sal, looks like you put in a lot of work and kudos, but i was wonder how you can make this??? Like are you funded or is this kinda spare time sorta thing.
Anyways i half felt that it was a little long and that it could use some finer editing, just a second or two some places.
Anyways decent first ep. looking forward to see where this goes.
Andrew did a phenomenal job. We really wanted the intro to be over the top, because especially with those old cartoons, the intros would always have some KILLER animation, epic scenes, & eye candy, many times the episode would start and the quality would drop by like half!!!
As for being funded, no this was very much a pet personal project, it was VERY tough on the two of us. With a deadline hanging over our heads, having to learn all this from scratch (AE), the rest of the scoring etc, - all within 3-4 months. Very challenging, very addicting, but a little stubborness goes a LONG way!
Spare time: lol!
Thanks for checking it out, and for the feedback too! Will see about tightening it up, but will def help for whatever comes next!
Heh! Sorry you feel that way, Vincent/ Favio. There is actually a story and complete character development in the works (if you look at the youtube sidebar you'll see a sliver of that), however this particular 'episode' is more of a spoof/ homage more than anything else, so it's meant to be goofy and humourous. :)
But thanks for the feedback! The good stuff like what you're talking about is yet to come! It's all planned out and in the works.
Thanks for checking it out and the honest response.
This is pretty much awesome. Love the theme song.
KojiTsunami 7 months ago
show has definite potential. If the budget was behind it, I would prolly watch this. Reminds me of an old show from the 90's, Mutant League
superboi 1 year ago
@superboi Hey, thanks a lot! I really hope I can start pushing more IKFZ content out soon. There's stuff in the works, so stay tuned! More soon!
thedarkcloakTDC 1 year ago
It would be awesome if you got good enough to continue in the metalocalypse episodes. it somewhat resembles their animation except for the characters themselves. good job, 5*'s!!
wheredaminitacos 2 years ago
well done!
however if i could offer some contructive critisicism, work on the animation just a little bit
you dont have to, since it's awesome already
thelogicalperspectiv 2 years ago
@thelogicalperspectiv Hey thanks!!! This was our first ever real attempt at animating using Photoshop and After Effects primarily, so I am sure it will only get better! We're currently looking into further software/ tools to help us get stuff down faster (instead of manually keyframing EVERYTHING!), and we're definitely going to create more IKFZ content. Stay tuned!
thedarkcloakTDC 1 year ago
awesome ^^
love the theme song too
IncognitoMnky 2 years ago
That was hilarious, would have likes to hear the zombies talk but hey after I realized only 2 people made I understood why.
gana51 2 years ago
Hey Gana, thanks for the feedback! Yes, it was VERY hard work! Glad you like the chars!
I have been rustling a few more people in to do voice acting, so likely when I get the animated web comic rolling along, there will be an actual continuing story, voices, etc (this spoof/homage was kind of done as a test, and a bit of a gag as well - but there is a real story to tell, and a more seriously toned IKFZ on the way) - and some other goofy shorts like this one from time to time. :)
Thanks again!
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
I can only imagine how much work it took out of you. I would love to follow the characters. Are there any other pictures/videos of them?
gana51 2 years ago
Yup! There's more stuff coming soon, including tshirts and that sort of thing. :)
Thanks!
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
Heya bro, just wanted to again say, what a great job you did with this. I know what ya went through and I am seriously impressed. Looking forward to seeing what else the brain spawns :)
5 stars from your boy TA! :)
ThorsAssassin 2 years ago
hey! Thanks, man!
Yeah, i hope we can put more of these together... more than likely it will end up being as a simpler animated webcomic, mostly because of how much time & work would be required to make it even this level of animation with such a small team of two people!
I appreciate it, dude, really!
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
lol, nice "kung fu zombies"
all they did was tumble out of their space pod! hilarious!
Two49 2 years ago
Heh, glad you got a kick out of it!
and shhhhh... spoiler!
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
Part of me says "Okay, that was worth 9 minuets, 21 seconds I spent watching this" and part of me says (Even though I didn't pay to watch) "...I want my money back"
JadenVonBat 2 years ago
ha ha, yeah, that's kind of the joke. Those old cartoons would always have the craziest intros (think Thundercats or similar), and the actual animating in the episodes were often minimal or cheesy, and didn't deliver the goods the intro promised.
No worries though, I'll be doing a 'serious' take soon, one way or another on these characters. :)
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
Still a good start all and all.
JadenVonBat 2 years ago
Man, it's true as hell. For example the beetlejuice intros were amazing as all hell but the show was plodding and had really awful animation.
Weirdly though I just watched some real ghostbusters episodes and while the animation was inconsistant and the shows had some of the trappings of children's programming contrivances from that era, the writing was..surprisingly really really really good, and held up very well today.
Surprise surprise, turns out J Michael Straczynski wrote for that show!
Ultrasecond 2 years ago
I loved watching Ghostbusters... even the cheesier episodes like the one where Slimer multiplies, and then combines into a humongous Slimer, or the one with Stay Pufft vs Murray the Mantis, the one where Egon gets posessed ("FREE TO DESTROY!"), the subway train to the netherworld, & probably my favourite, the zombie chicken and the undead farmers episode... so much good stuff!
and JMS? really? Dayum!
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
wow... I was all .___. until the ending. Then I laughed... that was great how they just stumbled around and somehow blew everything up. XD Good times
DDgeek84 2 years ago
Ha haaa... it's really interesting to see the various responses to this thing.
Hopefully you like the more 'serious' take on IKFZ that will be coming out later on, too!
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
Cloak and grey awesome!!!! As expected keep it up guys an I missed u two for the last 2 months :-) can't wait to Catch up!! Talk to ya soon
albi4444 2 years ago
Thanks Albi!
And where you be at??? You've up & disappeared!
No borderlands for you yet? Dude!
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
i cant belive u got sdrew to make u a song!!!!
dralocon 2 years ago
Well duh, they paid him. He takes paid requests :P
zolfingtons 2 years ago
The end was HILLARIOUS.
It looked so high tech, but in the end nothing really happned xD
I guess thats where the author got lazy.
Props guy's 5/5 fave.
devinewisdom 2 years ago 2
LOL honestly, i would love to see this on adult swim late at night... keep it up man this shit is awesome!!
Needlewenis 2 years ago 2
Now... the animation was decent. Not super great, but there's only two of you, whaddayaexpect.
The robot's voice was a bit hard to understand, you could probably turn the modulation down a notch.
The build-up was fun simply BECAUSE it dragged out ridiculously and built up to nothing.
I feel like you wasted some joke opportunities, though. E.g. I thought the pod might actually turn out to just be a bomb. Also, the base explosion was anticlamactic, but was that the point?
NO ZOMBIE LINES. :(
littlebeasti 2 years ago 2
Hey littlebeasti! Thanks for the awesome and thorough feedback! Yes, it is only two of us. And basically me doing all the artwork assets, etc, with Grey doing character rigging etc. I'll see what I can do about the bot voices, maybe even a subtitle. And yeah, you got it! It kinda was the point, in those cartoons the good guys always won no matter what! point A, point B, the end. :) And no worries about the zombies not having lines, there's going to be a story side to this nuttyness too. ;) THNX!
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
Intro was good, ive never been a fan of these style animated shows, but this was different, kept me interested. good work on the art and animation! 5 stars and favorited.
lordhazzard 2 years ago 2
Thanks a lot, LH! Appreciate the support, and that's really awesome to hear from someone that's not very into these types of things. Hopefully the serious-ish side of the IKFZ will entertain you just as much (in a different way of course).
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
this is great stuff, man! good work on animation and effects. as was already mentioned, storytelling needs polishing. more dynamism and less long, slow scenes. and more zombies ofcourse :) this has very good pontential for a series. have you tried submitting this to Adult Swim? right up their alley.
SoSoRandom123 2 years ago 2
Thanks, SSR123. And I appreciate the feedback! I'll definitely look into the Adult Swim thing, I had no idea they took submissions openly. Also, yeah, I think what we're going to do is, we'll do a full on 'serious w/ story' episode (or animated webcomic), and include a spoof/ self-satire short (like this one) alongside each one. So 2/3d's action and story, 1/3rd just spoofy lampoony nonsense. :)
Thanks again!
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
It was alright.
Quick word of advice: Your storytelling skills need some work. There were literally like 20 seconds at a time where NOTHING happened. Like the pod flying down. what? just have it fall, crash into the planet and replace all of that free time with zombies kicking butt. there was only about a minute of that and I was disappointed.
blackxrosesxforever 2 years ago
hey blackxrosesxforever - thanks for the feedback. Yeah, that's been a mixed bag response wise. Some folks like the build up, some don't. No worries though, there IS a story to be told, & action sequences to be delivered in future with this characters. :) This particular one shot was done more as a spoof in general - we're figuring out if we want to do further content as either a webcomic, or even an animated webcomic, considering how much work would be involved in doing this with just 2 of us!
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
Also, it would just be me doing all the artwork and art assets. But in an animated web comic format it might be much more manageable, and we might be able to produce more with more frequency!
Thanks again for the feedback. It's very encouraging, man!
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
Good job on the 3-D and 2-D animation
and
awsome work getting Andrew to make your theme song
that guy is awsome and you are too
dghdhgdghdhgdgh3 2 years ago
lol did the robot say
"Dr.octagonapus" at 4:36
Good job on the 3-D and 2-D animation
and awsome work getting Andrew to make your theme song.
dghdhgdghdhgdgh3 2 years ago
lol, no but I can see how it can be heard that way, heh. Like one of those death metal translation videos.
Thanks, man. And yeah, I think Andrew did a fantastic job.
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
OMG! That was awesome! Great job, TDC!
optycalillusion 2 years ago
Hilarious. Adult Swim, check these guys out.
Oh, and favorited.
BlueMaxx86 2 years ago
Thanks, BlueMaxx86!!!
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
Im on your XBL Friends list, saw the message, and I checked the video, its really funny, good job.
beybladera 2 years ago 2
Hey, Thanks, man! It's a minor miracle Grey & I didn't end up killing each other through this whole process. :P
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
GREAT!!
drawnseeker 2 years ago 2
Thanks a lot! Pass it on!
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
80s Throwback! excellent job on the intro especially with the song and all! Well done you guys. you did this all in after effects?
ikaba 2 years ago 2
Yup yup! All the animation in After Effects, but I did all the art assets (character pieces, backgrounds, etc) in Photoshop (some of them from sketches scanned in, and digitally inked or painted), save for the couple of 3d models used (the Coffin-1 and the URN Pod). The 2 1/2D backgrounds were also done in AE (like the Fortress interior, planet shots, etc).
Thanks!!! Pass it on! We're figuring out what & how we'll keep doing more IKFZ. :)
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
you sir deserve a ROFLCOPTER for this masterful work of art!
noshadowmaster 2 years ago 2
Thanks, noshadowmaster!
I'll have to figure out how to go about putting in an exploding a ROFLCOPTER at some point. ;)
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
I actually liked the big build up for this supposedly epic fight for it then to turn into them falling down the stairs and accidentally winning makes it a good little end. After all how else would you expect to actually fight. Well thought out will be keeping an eye out.
SilverDeusEx 2 years ago 3
Thanks, SDE! Glad you appreciated the spoof/ lampoon in this! I do have more 'serious' stories to tell with them, but we'll be mixing up spoof with serious in the time to come. :D
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
This is awesome.
Stonefyr 2 years ago 3
Thank you, Stonefyr!
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
same as pebbles, saw the link on STWPT and checked it out. gotta say.... it seriously reminded me of stuff you see on adult swim now. not saying whether that's a good or bad thing... it's just a thing.
sakaylor123 2 years ago 7
at least it's a thing! ;)
Thanks for checking it out, sakaylor!
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
no problem! i honestly enjoyed it (realized i hadn't said that in my last comment :-P) keep up the good work
sakaylor123 2 years ago 2
Saw the link on STWPT and I had to check it out. Epic art! XD interesting ending there
Pebblespots 2 years ago 6
Gripping isn't it? ;)
Thanks and pass it on!
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
I must say, that although I adore Andrew's stuff, I don't think it really fits your animation style (which is amazing, but the song doesn't seem as edgy as your comic/Starcraftesque colour choices). I do look forward to the next episode tho~ :)
SparklyChakram 2 years ago 3
Hey Sparkly, really? I'm curious to hear more on your take. Edgy? I hope that's a good thing!
We are too... with much much terror and discord. (this was TOUGH!)
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
Here cus of Andrew i must admit. I heard the theme when he first posted and i was epic excited to see this. Mr. Sal, looks like you put in a lot of work and kudos, but i was wonder how you can make this??? Like are you funded or is this kinda spare time sorta thing.
Anyways i half felt that it was a little long and that it could use some finer editing, just a second or two some places.
Anyways decent first ep. looking forward to see where this goes.
AudioVideoDiscoFTW 2 years ago 3
Thanks AVDFTW!
Andrew did a phenomenal job. We really wanted the intro to be over the top, because especially with those old cartoons, the intros would always have some KILLER animation, epic scenes, & eye candy, many times the episode would start and the quality would drop by like half!!!
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
Ran out of space, heh!
As for being funded, no this was very much a pet personal project, it was VERY tough on the two of us. With a deadline hanging over our heads, having to learn all this from scratch (AE), the rest of the scoring etc, - all within 3-4 months. Very challenging, very addicting, but a little stubborness goes a LONG way!
Spare time: lol!
Thanks for checking it out, and for the feedback too! Will see about tightening it up, but will def help for whatever comes next!
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
All I can say is WOW!!! Very cool. I am zen from nightwatchers forum. No wonder you have a callus!
RavenOakSpiral 2 years ago 4
wow, i can't believe how good it looks graphic and music wise. but still sucks so hard :s
i'm disapointed actually :)
there could have been a story, or even a real combat in this. the characters move so clumsy and speak really awkward.
and what the fuck? the heroes fall from the stairs shoot 10 bullets in the air and the castle explodes?
looks 10/10
feels 0/10
Vincentgriezelig 2 years ago
Heh! Sorry you feel that way, Vincent/ Favio. There is actually a story and complete character development in the works (if you look at the youtube sidebar you'll see a sliver of that), however this particular 'episode' is more of a spoof/ homage more than anything else, so it's meant to be goofy and humourous. :)
But thanks for the feedback! The good stuff like what you're talking about is yet to come! It's all planned out and in the works.
Thanks for checking it out and the honest response.
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
OMG this is AWESOME! lol Great job!! I'll have to come over and jam this winter! Who KNOWS what we could come up with :P
pagnmickie 2 years ago 4
Yes. You MUST!
My fingers are still itching to do more music tracks!
I'm really glad you liked it. Now you know what's kept us living in a freaking cave for the last 4 months. :D
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
It's a real shame stuff like this doesn't get the attention it deserves, so I hope you garner more popularity soon.
And loving Andrew's theme of course, but that was to be expected.
Toadsanime 2 years ago 4
Thank you very much, Toadsanime!
Well, hey it's out there now doing it's thing!
I just want it to have fun as it romps around and I hope it tickles people's nostalgia, too!
Andrews IKFZ theme ROCKS.
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
Thanks for checking it out, everybody!
I'm sure there will be more where this monstrosity came from.
We have a few things planned out, but for the moment - enjoy the cartoon!
thedarkcloakTDC 2 years ago
Not sure if my comment was posted, but again awesome stuff. Looking forward to more episodes.
Cerebrusrok 2 years ago 2
youtube noob :P
OneRyt 2 years ago
Lanna this is kickass! Keep up the good work. Hope to see more of this from you.
Cerebrusrok 2 years ago 2
Oh my heck! How cool!
emmalinesweets 2 years ago 2
"I've got blisters on me fingers!"
Hope everyone enjoys it :) LOVE THE HECK out of the the theme song, and that leech is hella sexy ;)
GreyDancer42 2 years ago 3
Did you make this knowing what I wanted Lanna?
KungFuZombieNinja 2 years ago 2
Everyone with any class has deep and secret dreams of martial art's space zombies & stuff exploding ;)
GreyDancer42 2 years ago 3
It is like it was made for me.
KungFuZombieNinja 2 years ago 3