Own Song #1 - Metalcore

[Piotrekk109]

Tuning? 5/5

[H3R3T1C5696]

dean vendetta nice i have the 7-string version sick riff too

[Sephiroth78941]

What guitar is that????

[MrStonzer]

AWESOME!! i don´t know how it is called in english, but in german---> VOLL DER OHRWURM :D

[Deathcultreaper]

@MrStonzer I'm dutch, but I don't know what that means.. Nowadays I play far more advanced songs...

[BeneathItAll09]

okay. so it seems like yoy used the drum kit thing to keep track of yourself. makes your self look stupid when you have that. your trying to hard to even play. loosen up and make up your own style of playing. change the drums up. im not gonna sit here and tell you what all you could change. but do something different to get somewhere.

[OMARnCANDY]

Sweet man ... has any one told you that you look like the guy from Queen of the Damned?? :P

[nagstrom]

wow beautiful fret inlays

[ThePriceOfDalila]

@munky2089

ur name.... no originality! xD

give the guy a break . hes having fun

and there is no originality anymore. you cant be original on something thats SET

[munky2089]

No originality and cheesy guitar moves !

[crazy00metal]

o another aild part if u know what i mean

but good

[PS2178]

dean vendetta ftw =D

[cristiantimofi]

nice song, quite well performed!

[CobraTeamOmega]

0:27 to 0:50 its sound like As I Lay Dying- Through the struggle :S but nice man

[ScaryLaRRY1234]

freakin sweet bro!!

check out my originals please!!!

[DesertStorm313]

that one part sounds like AILD, just means u are influenced by them, its good Though.

[Branmomarme]

Yay for having no originality. learn to write mus

[mrice102888]

@Branmomarme Define originality.

[kolton1122]

@Branmomarme Are you kidding me?YOU learn to write music it's harder than you think I would like to see you write something this good or even a song that's decent. You're an idiot. You have no musical sense if you think all metalcore sounds the same or at least that this is like every other metalcore song. He is inspired by metalcore of course it's going to be in the same genre and sound a little alike . When you have good music written and recorded let me know until then your opinion is crap!:D

[wpasola123]

Needs to change the drums up a bit, but other than sounds good man.

Btw, what kind of guitar is that? My vision is failing me.

[BleedingsunriseMetal]

hee,

This is a Dean vendetta 4,0 with "the old" inlay.. they changed it to the evil eye inlay.

I know about the drums, it is just my keyboard playing in the background..

I dont have time for new video's because of school and many other things... to bad

cheers

[SimonTUTS]

The riff after the intro has to be the most over used metalcore riff in existence, come-on man..other than that its not bad ;3

[Ragefall]

I know I so agree.

[jacobifshr]

can i get tabs lol

[OoLightFecaRavaloO]

Nice song !! =)

[GuitaristWanaB]

i love ur freakin songs!ROCK ON!

[nirvanadeth666]

nice*

[nirvanadeth666]

yo thats was a vnice vid but who is Niels Renne?

is that a drumming track or a friend playing the drums?

[Deathcultreaper]

I am Niels Renne :P

It's a Drumming Track (my Keyboard)

[Prazlugez]

Sounds like the song of "mydarkeningheart"

The title of the song is "Metalcore w/ 2nd guitar (Read the desc before commenting)"

But good playing tho.

[d4nyelle]

Very good the video = D

Liked ^^

[Deathcultreaper]

thankyou :)

[laurlaurdoll]

awesome :]

[skandiaman]

bad ass my friend