just a tip - overdescribing your character as "we live in the rich, rich part of hollywood" and "my parents are rich" do not really give the reader a good impression. Also, there is something called punctuation. :)
Nothing against the Jo Bros though, they are awesome.
just a tip - overdescribing your character as "we live in the rich, rich part of hollywood" and "my parents are rich" do not really give the reader a good impression. Also, there is something called punctuation. :)
Nothing against the Jo Bros though, they are awesome.
skydancer95 3 years ago
i love them
smileyj22 3 years ago