Stefan Stignei Spotlight Comedy Club 6.26.2009

[mrdoolittle906605]

Overall I like your creative approach to stand up comedy. I like your energy and u seem to really enjoy it. I think you will go far. Speak slowly. PEACE

[mrdoolittle906605]

11-Braile Joke hard to hear

12-Tootsie Roll Joke - good

13- Dui Joke- Car keys is not a loophole. I know what you're trying to say in this case I like the punchline just change the premise.

14-Wife elling u not funny- punchline doesnt make sense it's just mean but you will get moans.

15- I like the Trix joke

16- Kids fun not in bed- not funny just shocking.

[mrdoolittle906605]

#6 magic lamp- I kinda like it. It's a lil corney but it's pretty funny

#7-Owl joke like the premise that u interrogated the owl but I would drop the canadian tag. it's confusing. I would also shorten the punch.

8-heavy breathing- eh

#9-Blackout story-change the punch

10-Finder's keeper- OK

[mrdoolittle906605]

#1- I'd drop I know what you're thinking opening it's too common and the "married" comment also.

#2-Made it in life joke was good.

#3- Sharing is caring is a good premise but i'd change tha punch since u mentioned " in school" and there may be a disconnect with "addict"

#4-Typing Joke is pretty good. Tag is good also.

#5- lightbulbs and more joke unclear. I would add a punchline that would would reinforce the "more" aspect like never running out or having enough of something.

[mrdoolittle906605]

I'm just giving you feedback per your request on the SC Comedy. I'm just another comedian (sort of haven't performed in ages) but I am a fan of th art form .

[SStignei]

yes please do. Just send me a message :)