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  • good one...small concept bt gr work guys.....my best wishes

  • Sincere appreciation fr the msg at last ..i love u is the way of praising beauty ...

  • Hey..the girl in black dress says "bus rangane..tvaraga ekkedam..seats undaavu kada" naa doubt..if there are no other women there where is the Question for competition??

  • hey , sushmitha ur awesome oi ,

    coming to movie , it was nice but not awesome , it doesn't contain any theme and info , its just a fallacy

  • Dude...Really Nice Attempt..!But Inka Kummeyyalsndi..!! But Kocham Feel Ekkinchalsndi.!!

    Anyways...Nyc..mama..!!

  • Concept was gd bt d vedio technique ,shot frames ,angels and other aike stuffs were very poor ,,,bt must gt an appriciaton as u guys r making it 1st time.....gd work

  • Good film and very nice attempt. Last dialogue about Love proposal was awesome. And he is like Happydays tyson. Nice one.

  • ammai bagundhi

  • thats right buddy...!evry girl must watch & plz undrstnd boys feelngs

  • superb attempt yar .. concept is too gud

  • heyy vaadu happydays lo tieson gadi la vunadu kada hahah

  • Gr8 maturity shown..

    Good work man..

    Well cud u say me hw did u do d sound recording??

  • @jayeshpurohit515 we have recorded it in a dubbing studio and then added it to the video.. the one we did was near central mall panjagutta.. and they charged somewhere around 200 - 400 per hour..

  • Nice work guys

  • good one......

    

  • Hey its really cool..!! Its true. U NEVER KNOW WHOM YOU GOING TO HAVE LIFE PARTNER.. the girl attitude was very cool..!

  • It is beautiful when two persons are okay with it.what if a stranger proposes and u dont feel d same..take it in a positive way that it doesnt hurt anybody.hope u got my point

  • I love you-- is a beautiful feeling between two persons, plzzzzzz do not spoil the meaning....

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  • hay,...simply supb...

    

  • jhjkkkjkl

  • jj

  • hmmmm nice dude

  • suprb concept :)

  • the only point i was tryin to say is sayin i love u to a girl is never a crime and it can be taken in a positive way..my way of taking it positively is by taking it as a compliment instead of hurting somebody. the way of acceptance might differ with each individual.

    P.S :It may not be a cult classic but it has its word to say.

  • i think u hav concentrated much on look n quality.. next time.. concentrate evn on the story line. every frame of short film shud hav purpose. good luck..

  • hey nice one yarrr

    i liked it

  • some dialogues are nice.....but story slow ga move iendhi.......

  • U probably are the one indian girl in India that thinks like this...Thank God and good idea

  • Ammayi laku kavalasindi prema valani apatiki premistune undali leka pothe na mida ne prema thagindi asalu nv nanu chesthunava leda ani arustaru thapa asalu thana problam nti nduku ala untunadu fast nanu bagane love chesevadu epudu nduku ala untunadu ani aduguthara adagaru ade boys ite am ayindi ra ne problam nti ani adigi ha problam ki sol cheptaru thats boys

  • - Sounding more like varun sandesh...

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  • u could do better.... bad acting n dubbing...is this 1st time yo guys used canon 550 d? it's an awesome camera but u guys dint used it in proper way.. keep experimenting on dat 1st....all da best

  • GODD CAN BE MADE BETTER

  • Super !!! Esp., the cliimax ....

  • Boss Applause To The Hard work evadiki nachindo ledo telidhu kani naku picha picha ga nachesindhi :) loved it...!!!!!! congrats great work :)

  • Story????

    

  • Thank u everyone for the comments and suggestions i know what mistakes ive done n sure ill come up with a better product:)

  • @rajreddy111 : Good one boss.....Which camera u used to create this short film and also which s/w tool u used for editing? can you please tell me...

  • @MrSunny0242

    i use canon 550d and FCP to edit..

  • i liked it!

  • ye raat ye chandni fir kaha song use cheyadam naku nachindi

  • worst :(

  • climax addhiripoindhi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!

    gud work.

  • Well, good attempt. As a first short film may be it was out lil bit sour but you will do good and perfection comes with the amount of expertise. As few others mentioned, Lip sync should be the area to take care of and so much blur in the video will take away the interest of the person watching it. The girl was walking on a pavement and you were at the bust stop looking like the girl is coming from same direction which is not true. try to mix up things well, match them. Good luck

  • Hello Friend,

    I am good follower of short films in YouTube. Good Concept need to improve editing. Lip movement sinking. All the best for next short filim

  • I agree that complimenting a girl is not a crime, but "I love you" is a bad word choice!

  • I am sorry but this concept is very bad!!! " I Love you" is not a compliment to a girls beauty! "I love you" means that I am in love with you, I want to make you smile everyday, I want to laugh with you everyday, I want to support you when you're upset or sad. I want to fight with you and then make up with you! I will die for you if need be, but i would rather grow old with you! When everyone turns away from you, i will walk towards you! Thats the meaning of those 3 small words "I LOVE YOU".

  • Guys U wanted to handle the concept sensibly..then U gotta choose voice's which are calm & deep..first scene the guys and girl voices are horrible. Try to present the theme not the frames...some scenes are like random shoot try to compose frames with wht U need..eliminating unnecessary things...just a suggestion to keep moving ahead

  • Guys.. you done good job.. for first timers, this is VERY fine..

    but next time, try for best..

    do one thing.. observe all the comments and note down the -ve comments so that you can get rid of those in next one..

    Maintain these things for a good short film..

    1. Concept or Theme

    2. Back Ground Music

    3. Voice Sync

    4. Camera Handling

    All The Best.. Cheers..!!

  • who's the girl in the beginning with white chunni? her voice is wierd!!

  • BOSSU .. IDI TOO MUCH BASU .. ILLANTIVI WORK OUT KANEKAVVU ... REALITY ASALU KANAPATLEDHU ... DIALOGUES ... ANNI HAPPY DAYS .. EM MAYA CHESSAVEY CINEMAA VII .. DUDE THINK SPECIAL ... BEST OF LUCK BUDDIE

  • Many commented about Ajay's(Black shirt) Performance. I won't comment on that since it's His first appearance..!!! A Few tips on the Video, While taking the Introductory Scene, the camera work is not good, you couldn't capture those two friends talking clearly, it was pointing to somewhere and not their faces.(You could have shown something else too and could have brought the focus exactly when they sat down). Be careful in the next venture. Your scene to scene transition was Good

  • In fact excellent for the First timer.! Two girls acted well and even the guy at the bus stop he did his job well. Background Music is good . Need to work on Editing.

  • @rakesh31b thanks bro... actual ga jarindhi entaney neny behind the scenes undali... but aa character chesey vaadu hand isthey nannu toosaru.... that was what happened... :)

  • debut ah! best luck next time!

  • Actors are just acting not more than that!! Not natural!! Better luck next time!

  • acting antha natural ga ledhu kani very fine attempt

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  • Good Job...!!!

  • Good one boss...Chalaa baagundi concept..And as every one says..Black shirt athani gurinchi..may be thanaki dubbing set avvaledu thanu chesina action ki..so baaledu antunnaru..even he did better..aina athanu long look lo unnadu kada...More over chalaa baagundi concept..Everything ok...Inka better ga cheyyandi from the next video....

  • nice attempt boss..... but i feel rerecording could have done better and yes i accept ur point of view.... its just destiny to find u r soulmate....

  • black shirt's acting worst....film anta andaru nadusthune untara???

    music editing kuda wyakk....better luck nex tym

  • @rajreddy11111

    hopefully i'll impress u nxt tym :) thanks for ur suggestion

  • @rajreddy111 but since this being your first....good work as a debut...am sure u rock next time

  • @rajreddy111 All the best..

  • @rajreddy11111 aa black shirt neney babu... idi naa first time act cheyyadam.. real life lo bochedu saarlu chesa kaani reel life lo idey first time... thanks for pointing out... next time malli ee director nannu act cheyamani adigithey nee comment chupistha... thanks for saving me.... :)

  • @rajreddy11111 Dude...they are not editors to Edit the Video Perfectly..

    its just a short film

    what they want to convey..they conveyed it Clearly..

    Encourage them..

    their next film will b awful ;)

  • @rajreddy11111 hai rajireddy filim was simply Good .. dialogues is super.. "me peru tappa naku emi teliyadu.. kani kodatarani matram telusu" mansi character name is Good.

    Good thinking,, All the best.. ...  Mansi is Good name .. na fb lo share link ista....

    talent ekkada unna appreciate cheyali... james cameron, maniratnam . movies lo kuda continuitymistakes.. untai..

  • @rajreddy11111 hehe...I was laughing at him :)

  • Good screenplay....... The music is good......Great concept.............direction is Good....... mistake in re-recording..........casting is sooooo good!!!

  • your first attempt was good i dont say anything as it is your first attempt if you want you can work with me i need aspiring directors for my next film

  • Music editing is very bad...bus stand deggara okate music cut chesi play chesi cut chesi play chesi....ade music full ga pettunte would have been ohk...starting lo black shirt boys acting assal bale...

    There's no sync in the voice and the video...last scene when the girls were talking edo dubbing cinima chusnatundi.....

  • hey guys ..first attempt wonderfull....just the dailog delivery needs to be improved...bt u guys rocked...

  • Dude ur team had done gud work i appreciate u.

    suggestion box : all editing work is fine, acting can be improved some dialogs are unnecessary

  • Good concept. Gr8 performance Abhijeth.

    Everything is kewl but the framing @ 1:00 - 1:13 mins seems a li'l improper.

    Apart from that... everything was good. All the best for future :)

  • Yes Naakaithe chempa dhebba keev anipinchindhi.. especially that sound.. video kuda undi unte bagundedhi :P

  • Kottadam, Edvatam thappa Padatam Vinatam vallaki theleedu machha

    Cell Phone phothene vethakkunda edusthaaru!

    E 2 dialogues Keka Bhayya!

    On a whole, Short Film Chaala bagundi either it's Camera work or Concept or Characters.

  • adi naa chempa debba mast famous ayyindi ra bhai... :p

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