Hey..the girl in black dress says "bus rangane..tvaraga ekkedam..seats undaavu kada" naa doubt..if there are no other women there where is the Question for competition??
Concept was gd bt d vedio technique ,shot frames ,angels and other aike stuffs were very poor ,,,bt must gt an appriciaton as u guys r making it 1st time.....gd work
@jayeshpurohit515 we have recorded it in a dubbing studio and then added it to the video.. the one we did was near central mall panjagutta.. and they charged somewhere around 200 - 400 per hour..
It is beautiful when two persons are okay with it.what if a stranger proposes and u dont feel d same..take it in a positive way that it doesnt hurt anybody.hope u got my point
the only point i was tryin to say is sayin i love u to a girl is never a crime and it can be taken in a positive way..my way of taking it positively is by taking it as a compliment instead of hurting somebody. the way of acceptance might differ with each individual.
P.S :It may not be a cult classic but it has its word to say.
i think u hav concentrated much on look n quality.. next time.. concentrate evn on the story line. every frame of short film shud hav purpose. good luck..
Ammayi laku kavalasindi prema valani apatiki premistune undali leka pothe na mida ne prema thagindi asalu nv nanu chesthunava leda ani arustaru thapa asalu thana problam nti nduku ala untunadu fast nanu bagane love chesevadu epudu nduku ala untunadu ani aduguthara adagaru ade boys ite am ayindi ra ne problam nti ani adigi ha problam ki sol cheptaru thats boys
u better keep ur concentration on da cinematography rather than titles.... titles are very impressive but u couldn't make it in da scenes... there are no scenes which makes us to feel atleast that's ok... i may one of ur critic... criticism is nothing but it makes us to not to do folly next time... hope you'l come out with da good stuff....
u could do better.... bad acting n dubbing...is this 1st time yo guys used canon 550 d? it's an awesome camera but u guys dint used it in proper way.. keep experimenting on dat 1st....all da best
Well, good attempt. As a first short film may be it was out lil bit sour but you will do good and perfection comes with the amount of expertise. As few others mentioned, Lip sync should be the area to take care of and so much blur in the video will take away the interest of the person watching it. The girl was walking on a pavement and you were at the bust stop looking like the girl is coming from same direction which is not true. try to mix up things well, match them. Good luck
I am sorry but this concept is very bad!!! " I Love you" is not a compliment to a girls beauty! "I love you" means that I am in love with you, I want to make you smile everyday, I want to laugh with you everyday, I want to support you when you're upset or sad. I want to fight with you and then make up with you! I will die for you if need be, but i would rather grow old with you! When everyone turns away from you, i will walk towards you! Thats the meaning of those 3 small words "I LOVE YOU".
Guys U wanted to handle the concept sensibly..then U gotta choose voice's which are calm & deep..first scene the guys and girl voices are horrible. Try to present the theme not the frames...some scenes are like random shoot try to compose frames with wht U need..eliminating unnecessary things...just a suggestion to keep moving ahead
BOSSU .. IDI TOO MUCH BASU .. ILLANTIVI WORK OUT KANEKAVVU ... REALITY ASALU KANAPATLEDHU ... DIALOGUES ... ANNI HAPPY DAYS .. EM MAYA CHESSAVEY CINEMAA VII .. DUDE THINK SPECIAL ... BEST OF LUCK BUDDIE
Many commented about Ajay's(Black shirt) Performance. I won't comment on that since it's His first appearance..!!! A Few tips on the Video, While taking the Introductory Scene, the camera work is not good, you couldn't capture those two friends talking clearly, it was pointing to somewhere and not their faces.(You could have shown something else too and could have brought the focus exactly when they sat down). Be careful in the next venture. Your scene to scene transition was Good
In fact excellent for the First timer.! Two girls acted well and even the guy at the bus stop he did his job well. Background Music is good . Need to work on Editing.
@rakesh31b thanks bro... actual ga jarindhi entaney neny behind the scenes undali... but aa character chesey vaadu hand isthey nannu toosaru.... that was what happened... :)
Good one boss...Chalaa baagundi concept..And as every one says..Black shirt athani gurinchi..may be thanaki dubbing set avvaledu thanu chesina action ki..so baaledu antunnaru..even he did better..aina athanu long look lo unnadu kada...More over chalaa baagundi concept..Everything ok...Inka better ga cheyyandi from the next video....
@rajreddy11111 aa black shirt neney babu... idi naa first time act cheyyadam.. real life lo bochedu saarlu chesa kaani reel life lo idey first time... thanks for pointing out... next time malli ee director nannu act cheyamani adigithey nee comment chupistha... thanks for saving me.... :)
@rajreddy11111 hai rajireddy filim was simply Good .. dialogues is super.. "me peru tappa naku emi teliyadu.. kani kodatarani matram telusu" mansi character name is Good.
Good thinking,, All the best.. ... Mansi is Good name .. na fb lo share link ista....
talent ekkada unna appreciate cheyali... james cameron, maniratnam . movies lo kuda continuitymistakes.. untai..
Good screenplay....... The music is good......Great concept.............direction is Good....... mistake in re-recording..........casting is sooooo good!!!
your first attempt was good i dont say anything as it is your first attempt if you want you can work with me i need aspiring directors for my next film
Music editing is very bad...bus stand deggara okate music cut chesi play chesi cut chesi play chesi....ade music full ga pettunte would have been ohk...starting lo black shirt boys acting assal bale...
There's no sync in the voice and the video...last scene when the girls were talking edo dubbing cinima chusnatundi.....
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judien123 4 days ago
good one...small concept bt gr work guys.....my best wishes
bhagyaitsme 4 days ago
Sincere appreciation fr the msg at last ..i love u is the way of praising beauty ...
sameerpusunuru 5 days ago
Hey..the girl in black dress says "bus rangane..tvaraga ekkedam..seats undaavu kada" naa doubt..if there are no other women there where is the Question for competition??
superG245 5 days ago
hey , sushmitha ur awesome oi ,
coming to movie , it was nice but not awesome , it doesn't contain any theme and info , its just a fallacy
rohitageer 6 days ago
Dude...Really Nice Attempt..!But Inka Kummeyyalsndi..!! But Kocham Feel Ekkinchalsndi.!!
Anyways...Nyc..mama..!!
TheMy3MyLife 1 week ago
Concept was gd bt d vedio technique ,shot frames ,angels and other aike stuffs were very poor ,,,bt must gt an appriciaton as u guys r making it 1st time.....gd work
surreal634 1 week ago
Good film and very nice attempt. Last dialogue about Love proposal was awesome. And he is like Happydays tyson. Nice one.
svapreddy 1 week ago
ammai bagundhi
nissuxxx 1 week ago
thats right buddy...!evry girl must watch & plz undrstnd boys feelngs
nissuxxx 1 week ago
superb attempt yar .. concept is too gud
akurisai 2 weeks ago
heyy vaadu happydays lo tieson gadi la vunadu kada hahah
Chacoboy14399 2 weeks ago
Gr8 maturity shown..
Good work man..
Well cud u say me hw did u do d sound recording??
jayeshpurohit515 2 weeks ago
@jayeshpurohit515 we have recorded it in a dubbing studio and then added it to the video.. the one we did was near central mall panjagutta.. and they charged somewhere around 200 - 400 per hour..
thotaajay 2 weeks ago
Nice work guys
zoominall 2 weeks ago
good one......
tarunmopuru 2 weeks ago
Hey its really cool..!! Its true. U NEVER KNOW WHOM YOU GOING TO HAVE LIFE PARTNER.. the girl attitude was very cool..!
chandu3962 3 weeks ago
It is beautiful when two persons are okay with it.what if a stranger proposes and u dont feel d same..take it in a positive way that it doesnt hurt anybody.hope u got my point
rajreddy111 3 weeks ago
I love you-- is a beautiful feeling between two persons, plzzzzzz do not spoil the meaning....
podishetty 3 weeks ago
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podishetty 3 weeks ago
hay,...simply supb...
TEJAECE 3 weeks ago
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starting lo ... zooming ... right ga ledhu boos
friendlyanimation 3 weeks ago
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thirupathireddyk1 3 weeks ago
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thirupathireddyk1 3 weeks ago
hmmmm nice dude
navynrao223 4 weeks ago
suprb concept :)
sainanikumar 4 weeks ago
the only point i was tryin to say is sayin i love u to a girl is never a crime and it can be taken in a positive way..my way of taking it positively is by taking it as a compliment instead of hurting somebody. the way of acceptance might differ with each individual.
P.S :It may not be a cult classic but it has its word to say.
rajreddy111 4 weeks ago
i think u hav concentrated much on look n quality.. next time.. concentrate evn on the story line. every frame of short film shud hav purpose. good luck..
indap 1 month ago
hey nice one yarrr
i liked it
vinnuc7 1 month ago
some dialogues are nice.....but story slow ga move iendhi.......
bujji2418 1 month ago
U probably are the one indian girl in India that thinks like this...Thank God and good idea
teensrox90 1 month ago
Ammayi laku kavalasindi prema valani apatiki premistune undali leka pothe na mida ne prema thagindi asalu nv nanu chesthunava leda ani arustaru thapa asalu thana problam nti nduku ala untunadu fast nanu bagane love chesevadu epudu nduku ala untunadu ani aduguthara adagaru ade boys ite am ayindi ra ne problam nti ani adigi ha problam ki sol cheptaru thats boys
madhau0000 1 month ago
- Sounding more like varun sandesh...
Viswanath191 1 month ago
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u better keep ur concentration on da cinematography rather than titles.... titles are very impressive but u couldn't make it in da scenes... there are no scenes which makes us to feel atleast that's ok... i may one of ur critic... criticism is nothing but it makes us to not to do folly next time... hope you'l come out with da good stuff....
romanticjoneskatru 1 month ago
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romanticjoneskatru 1 month ago
u could do better.... bad acting n dubbing...is this 1st time yo guys used canon 550 d? it's an awesome camera but u guys dint used it in proper way.. keep experimenting on dat 1st....all da best
romanticjoneskatru 1 month ago
GODD CAN BE MADE BETTER
ramlovesu1 1 month ago
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Good one.Actually i'm also planning a short film.Needed support.
redkokila 1 month ago
Super !!! Esp., the cliimax ....
kbshivakumar 1 month ago
Boss Applause To The Hard work evadiki nachindo ledo telidhu kani naku picha picha ga nachesindhi :) loved it...!!!!!! congrats great work :)
9959998896 1 month ago
Story????
yaswanthkumart 1 month ago
Thank u everyone for the comments and suggestions i know what mistakes ive done n sure ill come up with a better product:)
rajreddy111 1 month ago
@rajreddy111 : Good one boss.....Which camera u used to create this short film and also which s/w tool u used for editing? can you please tell me...
MrSunny0242 1 month ago
@MrSunny0242
i use canon 550d and FCP to edit..
rajreddy111 1 month ago
i liked it!
chikranz 2 months ago
ye raat ye chandni fir kaha song use cheyadam naku nachindi
gravitygrail 2 months ago
worst :(
MrHarishgunda 2 months ago
climax addhiripoindhi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
gud work.
vamsyykrishna 2 months ago
Well, good attempt. As a first short film may be it was out lil bit sour but you will do good and perfection comes with the amount of expertise. As few others mentioned, Lip sync should be the area to take care of and so much blur in the video will take away the interest of the person watching it. The girl was walking on a pavement and you were at the bust stop looking like the girl is coming from same direction which is not true. try to mix up things well, match them. Good luck
rajendrapgoli 2 months ago
Hello Friend,
I am good follower of short films in YouTube. Good Concept need to improve editing. Lip movement sinking. All the best for next short filim
jeevanforu 2 months ago
I agree that complimenting a girl is not a crime, but "I love you" is a bad word choice!
desidol22 2 months ago
I am sorry but this concept is very bad!!! " I Love you" is not a compliment to a girls beauty! "I love you" means that I am in love with you, I want to make you smile everyday, I want to laugh with you everyday, I want to support you when you're upset or sad. I want to fight with you and then make up with you! I will die for you if need be, but i would rather grow old with you! When everyone turns away from you, i will walk towards you! Thats the meaning of those 3 small words "I LOVE YOU".
desidol22 2 months ago
Guys U wanted to handle the concept sensibly..then U gotta choose voice's which are calm & deep..first scene the guys and girl voices are horrible. Try to present the theme not the frames...some scenes are like random shoot try to compose frames with wht U need..eliminating unnecessary things...just a suggestion to keep moving ahead
samyodha 2 months ago
Guys.. you done good job.. for first timers, this is VERY fine..
but next time, try for best..
do one thing.. observe all the comments and note down the -ve comments so that you can get rid of those in next one..
Maintain these things for a good short film..
1. Concept or Theme
2. Back Ground Music
3. Voice Sync
4. Camera Handling
All The Best.. Cheers..!!
CheviTheShravan 2 months ago
who's the girl in the beginning with white chunni? her voice is wierd!!
qwerty23032303 2 months ago 19
BOSSU .. IDI TOO MUCH BASU .. ILLANTIVI WORK OUT KANEKAVVU ... REALITY ASALU KANAPATLEDHU ... DIALOGUES ... ANNI HAPPY DAYS .. EM MAYA CHESSAVEY CINEMAA VII .. DUDE THINK SPECIAL ... BEST OF LUCK BUDDIE
yesshwannt 3 months ago
Many commented about Ajay's(Black shirt) Performance. I won't comment on that since it's His first appearance..!!! A Few tips on the Video, While taking the Introductory Scene, the camera work is not good, you couldn't capture those two friends talking clearly, it was pointing to somewhere and not their faces.(You could have shown something else too and could have brought the focus exactly when they sat down). Be careful in the next venture. Your scene to scene transition was Good
rakesh31b 3 months ago
In fact excellent for the First timer.! Two girls acted well and even the guy at the bus stop he did his job well. Background Music is good . Need to work on Editing.
rakesh31b 3 months ago
@rakesh31b thanks bro... actual ga jarindhi entaney neny behind the scenes undali... but aa character chesey vaadu hand isthey nannu toosaru.... that was what happened... :)
thotaajay 3 months ago
debut ah! best luck next time!
shiiva0avinashh 3 months ago
Actors are just acting not more than that!! Not natural!! Better luck next time!
TheCrazycollection 3 months ago
acting antha natural ga ledhu kani very fine attempt
saidheeraj1993 3 months ago
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saidheeraj1993 3 months ago
Good Job...!!!
pranayareddy90 3 months ago
Good one boss...Chalaa baagundi concept..And as every one says..Black shirt athani gurinchi..may be thanaki dubbing set avvaledu thanu chesina action ki..so baaledu antunnaru..even he did better..aina athanu long look lo unnadu kada...More over chalaa baagundi concept..Everything ok...Inka better ga cheyyandi from the next video....
sagardammala 3 months ago
nice attempt boss..... but i feel rerecording could have done better and yes i accept ur point of view.... its just destiny to find u r soulmate....
cvnaresh 3 months ago
black shirt's acting worst....film anta andaru nadusthune untara???
music editing kuda wyakk....better luck nex tym
rajreddy11111 3 months ago
@rajreddy11111
hopefully i'll impress u nxt tym :) thanks for ur suggestion
rajreddy111 3 months ago 2
@rajreddy111 but since this being your first....good work as a debut...am sure u rock next time
rajreddy11111 3 months ago
@rajreddy111 All the best..
TheKick001 3 weeks ago
@rajreddy11111 aa black shirt neney babu... idi naa first time act cheyyadam.. real life lo bochedu saarlu chesa kaani reel life lo idey first time... thanks for pointing out... next time malli ee director nannu act cheyamani adigithey nee comment chupistha... thanks for saving me.... :)
thotaajay 3 months ago
@rajreddy11111 Dude...they are not editors to Edit the Video Perfectly..
its just a short film
what they want to convey..they conveyed it Clearly..
Encourage them..
their next film will b awful ;)
vinaykanth007 3 months ago
@rajreddy11111 hai rajireddy filim was simply Good .. dialogues is super.. "me peru tappa naku emi teliyadu.. kani kodatarani matram telusu" mansi character name is Good.
Good thinking,, All the best.. ... Mansi is Good name .. na fb lo share link ista....
talent ekkada unna appreciate cheyali... james cameron, maniratnam . movies lo kuda continuitymistakes.. untai..
27ravikanth 1 month ago
@rajreddy11111 hehe...I was laughing at him :)
superG245 5 days ago
Good screenplay....... The music is good......Great concept.............direction is Good....... mistake in re-recording..........casting is sooooo good!!!
1228prasad 3 months ago
your first attempt was good i dont say anything as it is your first attempt if you want you can work with me i need aspiring directors for my next film
don9246677565 3 months ago
Music editing is very bad...bus stand deggara okate music cut chesi play chesi cut chesi play chesi....ade music full ga pettunte would have been ohk...starting lo black shirt boys acting assal bale...
There's no sync in the voice and the video...last scene when the girls were talking edo dubbing cinima chusnatundi.....
SushmithaKRao 3 months ago 2
hey guys ..first attempt wonderfull....just the dailog delivery needs to be improved...bt u guys rocked...
shilpasaragada 3 months ago
Dude ur team had done gud work i appreciate u.
suggestion box : all editing work is fine, acting can be improved some dialogs are unnecessary
avrohit2000 3 months ago
Good concept. Gr8 performance Abhijeth.
Everything is kewl but the framing @ 1:00 - 1:13 mins seems a li'l improper.
Apart from that... everything was good. All the best for future :)
kaushik1091 3 months ago
Yes Naakaithe chempa dhebba keev anipinchindhi.. especially that sound.. video kuda undi unte bagundedhi :P
kishore2737 3 months ago
Kottadam, Edvatam thappa Padatam Vinatam vallaki theleedu machha
Cell Phone phothene vethakkunda edusthaaru!
E 2 dialogues Keka Bhayya!
On a whole, Short Film Chaala bagundi either it's Camera work or Concept or Characters.
ashokraj16 3 months ago
adi naa chempa debba mast famous ayyindi ra bhai... :p
thotaajay 3 months ago