Dream

[chizzlesproductions]

A kinda retarded part at 6:40 i quote "This is a hard choice" i the most dull voice EVAR!!!

[dajenic]

great!

[EIVampire]

Pretty neat idea. You did a really good job with your action shots and a lot of the camera angles were pretty good.

[ReconGuni]

Nice

[ericferrari2009]

This was by far the worst video I've seen by you in 2010.

[mpmachinima]

Hey guys, Tmack here. Im working on a new Halo: Reach machinima that should be very similar to Dream in a sense. Dream was my first project that I edited myself and I am now lightyears ahead of my production capabilities from when I made this so I am expecting to produce something great! If you have any questions feel free to send me a message!

[haloister123]

Wait he chose Death over life

[zombieman48]

@haloister123 yay he wanted to live in enteral peace a place were thiers no killing no war think he was in the miltary he has probley killed alot of people and if that was you would you want to return to killing worrieing

[haloister123]

@zombieman48 well i would pick life only because i want to live with my family plus a whole lot of other reasons i have to chose life over death

[Gummybear889Films]

that was a very sad machinima

[miman3]

Amazing music

[helar96]

nice

[CAHackerGlitcherPro]

Hmmmm....nice movie but i was watching under funny vid's....not drama.

[BigTuna2011]

You stole my armour desine everything down to the color how weird...

[Drumlinespartan]

Nice, the music at the end is from the Halo believe commercial....

"Raindrop" by Chopin

[sirmick3z]

Ahh where is the comedy???

I NEED FUNNY

[Gummybear889Films]

@sirmick3z shut the fuck up!!!!!!!!!!!! this is a sad machinima

[kipr34]

i prefer comic vids but this vid was prety good to nice work

[bbtman1]

gret vid

[magnragn]

BOOBS!

[toomdevil]

wtf?

[gameplaya117]

i wouldnt have stayed

[Arvidps3]

neither would i

[bbtman1]

i agrea but think he could se friends and family

[porchstik]

the acting could got alot more better and after the ending after the credits "Clear" should be more descriptive

[ltmangaka]

very good idea and story. could have been played out better but this outcome is great.

[MrUsername4]

you are retarted "more better" the fuck

[ltmangaka]

you hit reply on the wrong one.. retard.

[KiyroV71]

work on the diologe a little like maybe a little more meaning into it, kinda sounded like you were reading right off of the script. anyway very good job! Loved how the dramatic music played in at the exact right moments.

[shipmaster00021]

this is cool but i think they went a little too far with the camera at the shooting scenes but besides that it was good

[AlecHayter]

this idea would be perfect for hollywood. i like it and its good that you keep the audience guessing

[bloodplzkthxl0l]

It was good.

[vKrayToR]

I truly hope theres a 'heaven'

[Burtence]

i also agree with burtence

[Cha0sN1nja]

2nd time I have watched this now and

I dont know what to make of it really.

I would of ditched the 1st 6 minutes and use those 6 mins for his decison to choose live or this dream like world

all you had to was make a refance to how he got into this coma.

but like I said the 1st time very good Idea, would like to see you make more. and keep up the hard and overall good work

[mpmachinima]

Thanks for the constructive criticism. Its hard to come by that on youtube. And yeah I thought about taking the approach you said but I wanted to keep the knowledge of the coma hidden with small clues until later in the movie. I knew there were different ways I could have done it but I thought the way I took it was the best for cinematic entertainment. I thought keeping low knowlegde would be the best.

[Cha0sN1nja]

yeh I see now

tha a pretty goood idea

when I 1st watched it I was totally fooled into thinking that he alive.

so the good thing is that you achived what you set out to do. keep up the good work =)

[wolf432]

it was good but it could have used more details and parts

[shado299]

interesting it gave a view that not many want to show ill give u that, but its very interesting

[BountyV]

That was awesome.

[Wikkiter]

Its an interesting view... ill give it that

[Wikkiter]

wtf?

[kbtwinkietwins]

definitely 5/5 no doubt

[TrekkieAtlantis]

that was truely beutiful if you can understand it :)

[paco515]

it probably is alot better if you get it, and better if you wrote it or anything... but it was kinda confusing to me

[areyno01]

that movie made no snese it was a war and he die s i mean ther was no thing that told me what it's about but on the other hand it was a smig intsd

[ImSticky037]

wow dude thats inteanse loved it thoe would have chosen life i would have fought and when my time came i would be with the rest of freinds

[beanershot2007]

that was so great

[mpmachinima]

Actually your pretty wrong. Its in his mind. The entire thing is in his mind while he's being operated on. The part on standoff is also in his mind and basically he forgot what happened but his mind is trying to show him visually. His friend, (the CQB spartan) who died talks to him through his mind and tells him that he can either just live in eternal peace, basically giving up and remaining in heaven or try and make it, with a chance that they could save him- a very slim chance.

[Chikalita2]

Its a guy soul weeping around and no one else can see him and so he goes back to where he was "killed". But he then realizes that hes in a coma and he has a choice between staying in place of peace and harmony or go back in the army with war...I wont tell you the end thow lol

[PocketSixes6]

awseome

[LegendaryPersian]

That was purely amazing.

[07SummerBreeze]

i like cheese

[AnitaNogueira]

one of the best machinimas i ever saw in my entire life...no kidding!

[ljwman3]

How? I can't even understand what's going on! The filming was pretty good, but the voice acting was a little fake. This is good, but is not the best...which I have saw. The best would be "The Forgotten Spartans" here on YouTube. Can you explain the storyline for me?

[nittesh0]

should of made a better ending

[Dreadmantisthe2nd]

wow nice!

[Chikalita2]

Wow good job I thought that it was beautifull machinima. Not many people get to pull off that type of machinima! but you did it perfecly!

[ljwman3]

I don't even understand it!

[GetAway0]

Awesome Vid ..

[redmagnus13]

wow......just........wow

absoulutely amazing i really want to see more of this kind of vid

[RogueNinjaProduction]

Beautiful. Absolutly beautiful.

[SPA017]

Its kinda confusing at the biggining, but overall a good vid.

[J166Z]

i liked it, sad, but i liked it. Glad to see someone finaly pulloff asereoce machinima

[WillSkateAndDestroy]

i don't like the noise at the end i hate when peopell die it reminds me of sombody

[sexyawsomeboii]

that was really good and kinda sad

[buckeye172]

amazing

[mpmachinima]

Glad you want more from me :)

send me a friend request if you wish to help act out future projects.

[nbraden22]

I want to stay here too

[Jadoman2008]

nice

[enjoiskate3]

If you ask me, it needs more of a pre-story line. Make a prequal or something. lol

[mpmachinima]

I really appreciate the constructive criticism. Better than just having people say either good or bad.

[TrueProvidence]

While I will say great effort and for the medium you used it wasn't too bad, but I just didn't think it was all that great. You were creative in the ways of sound effects, but the speaking parts were far too chopy and the sound volume fluctuation was far too drastic at times. I'll give it 3/5. Keep pursueing your dreams.

[mpmachinima]

Thanks for all the comments guys :)

[jazzer741]

nice touch with the used energy sword i might use that

[milktoast123]

iv seen meany machinima video`s in my short time on you tube and by far this is the best iv ever seen and trust me iv seen alot but never befor hae I ever seen almost butafuly exixutid screning. I mean the lighting afrcts were amazing the golden glare and other coloers as well with the blurr afects marvlis. and i just want to end out plz make more

[Rossfull]

Brilliant

[Ch1llma3xtr3m]

the end reminds me @ matrix ... take the blue pill ..take the red pill anyway 5/5 ! nice work

[imlikeuber1337]

lmao the matrix is exatly what came to my mind throughout the whole movie

[mpmachinima]

Thats very nice of you to say. Im only 15 and ill be going to film school later in my life.

[BoredomKills92]

truly amazing

you have a gift my friend

[AssassinationFilms]

great job man that was amazingly well done BRAVO!

[Yumez]

....wow... What an amazing job... I love it.. Favorited and 5 stars..though it deserves more than 5.

[shied221]

good job man that was great!!

[Cha0sN1nja]

I really really love this

if you made this a 3 or even a 4 part thing it would of destoryed every other machinima video out to date. the acting was awesome the storyline was top class, the shots and sences were brillant. the only bad things about this was the ending you never explained why he wanted to stay. ok he had a chocie but, it would of been better if u found out the real reasons for him wanted to stay. and I really like how u dont know if he was brought bk to life this has given me ideas

[mpmachinima]

Im glad you enjoyed it. It would have been hard to have made it more than one part so I just stuck to one. And the reason I didnt explain why he wanted to stay, basically I tried to make the viewer decide. The way I see it, which I guess is the true way because I made it lol is that basically last resort was heaven, the true heaven and showing how wonderful it is and its a perfect utopia that he could reside there or go back to his old life just so maybe they could bring him back and save him.

[LinkGrayX2]

Tmack made this.

For crying out loud, his name is in the credits.

[iSGTGrif]

mpmachinima quit trying to take credit for someone else's video, gawd.

loloolol kidding.

[mpmachinima]

check the credits, my gamertag is Tmack674. funny how you dont believe me. Send me a friend request online if you dont believe me. Ill tell you its me.

[mpmachinima]

And thank you to all my fans and people who have enjoyed watching the film. My mind expands even farther than this and will reach many other boundaries of life.

[GORILLADEZ]

u didnt make it retared

[mpmachinima]

When I made it, I planned on making a sequel, but I have recrently decided to cut it and work on other projects which will be out soon including a halo 3 comedy and a GTA IV series. So the clear meant yes, its just a "what if" that you would never know if they brought him back. Sorry im not making a sequel for those who really wanted one. But just be ready for my other work.

[GORILLADEZ]

u didnt mak this

[x2I366INx]

Dude, you're a fucking moron. He made the entire thing.

[Killer60607]

Fuckin awesome

[ObeseSpecOps]

"CLEAR!?!?!?!?!?!?!?" So does that mean that at the end, even though he wants to die, he was brought back to life?!

[lightside13]

if you had a bit more convincing voice acting it would turn out amazing. you should totally make a series

[3MPTYM3LODI3S]

deep...very touching

there were some slight imperfections like acting and camera angles that could have used some touching up but regardless this is a great machinima. amazing job.

[Dark94Flame]

Improve on the acting and this would be perfect.

[xXoncoreXx]

i like this. now i cant wait to get my xbox back from microsoft so i cant finaly start my seiers. rember the name guys

[081daniel]

how did he make his sword like that!?

[Chaosshrine]

he wasted all the energy in the sword, making it lose its blade.

[MorioKun1]

Very interesting to see some none comedy related material of Halo. However, the voicing needed work and the story needed more explanation.

It's a work in progress though, so keep working on it.

[GPKetano]

seriously like have u seen Deus Ex Machina

[081daniel]

Yeah I did I just got a Brainfart my bad!LOL

[colony343]

there was some bad acting bits but the idea is a good one

WTF "this is a hard choice"

[skulldie]

it was sord of like the movie invisible

[qwertdc]

I think that they are both great in my opinoin and man there are alot of fan boys here never seen so many.

[GlenfieldStore]

:O MG

that was amazing

[michaelscottjoyce]

this was actualy good i would like to some more of your videos

[EnjoiTh3Panda]

nice camera effects with the capture card. same with voice acting. just like a real movie, just different environment. 10/2

[church947]

this is acturly really good

[halomc101]

wow, this is so good. i was hooked from beginning to end. 5/5 stars.

[Gman2464]

i find it incredibly confusing but AMAZING!!!!

the ending, though, he made the wrong choice.

didnt the black spartan kill him? well anyway, 5/5

[GlenfieldStore]

he had a choice, return to reality in the body and pull through the operation, or to let his physical body die and live forever in peace in his own imagination (the black spartan is his imagination)

[vanuber]

black spartan was a ghost of his friend who had died in that mission.

[darklord1357]

Your Great!!

10/10

[dontlookatme090]

simply amazing. keep up the good work. 10/10

[kr8zychick101]

on a scale to one out to ten. 5,876,542,95

[chaosphantom8]

zomgttrley that was freakin amazing theyre ginna have alot on thier plate to top this

[502ndAirborne]

good video!

[l00twi]

clear!

[panico22396]

it was absolutly amazing! 5/5 keep up the great job.

looking forward for dream 2

[onretilom]

the part when he got shot with the pistol was cool when u see him get shot in the reflection.

[ThRaShEr129]

the whole storyline was kinda confusing... but it was still an AWSOME MACHINIMA VIDEO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[darklord473]

Liked how you used the sword and made it look like you weren't wielding a weapon

You should consider doing ore machinimas

[peacetoallofus]

very nicely made

[Legendgun]

Awesome

[xG1NOx]

amazing.

[Anchorman195]

Really great work, keep it up!

[GAMINGRING]

Dude 100% perfect, plz make more machinamas

[1337Falco]

I agree

[lacrosse602]

wait...he chose to come back.i guess he changed his mind.

[lacrosse602]

deep...very nice plot.5./5

[DarkGhost209]

Nice camera angles, nice plot very good =)

[ROBandLITTLE]

that was raw

[Carnage1235]

Emotionial.

[nogard888899]

i am confused

[that1guy232]

not that good

[MentalF33r]

how do u get engry sword wit out power

[piesquad9]

use up all the ammo on it dumbass

[greenblobo9]

im not sure but i think if you lower the energy sword it does that instead of lowering (not sure tho ^_^)

[Ace5004]

No... i think they just used up all the energy in it.

[greenblobo9]

nah you cant do that in multiplayer but i may of not bean right ^_^

[Hamster1512]

you cant in halo2 this is halo3 you can in halo3

[greenblobo9]

o then ok he was right lolz but what happens when you lower the energy sword O.O

[PnoySkillz]

AMAZING!

[hellspawn58]

dude awsome vid 5/5

[XtremeCam]

thats an energy sword without power, and nice vid.

[Qgsopp]

how did they get no weapons whitout forge??

[CoatedTrout]

good, but You don't just have your characters state their emotions like that!

THAT MAKES ME SO ANGRY!

[haloman115]

wow that was realy realy good and at the same time realy sad!

[HIGHPINOY]

Hope they make another one with more of a background story, this was awesome.

[stewlegg]

i wouda killed that black guy  y did he kill him in the first place

[cantonschool]

EPIC!!!

[zim507]

possibly the best machinima story ever. 5 out of 5 my man. ps cried at the end.

[petree50]

I almost cried at the end, great work, is this going to be a serries?

[xxMrGuppyxx]

That was amazing and real deep how he chose death to stay in that world and who knows if he did or if he just died in both worlds.

It was so tripy .like a lucid dream

[Shadowsteplz]

i LOVED the machinima a very good amount a perfect 5/5... the only problem was is that I thought he made his decison far to easily, and I kinda wanted to know a little more background info. But, I guess I really can't complain after allthis did seem to have quite a bit of thought put to this and I know damn right I couldn't think of anything nearly asgoogd as this.

[Ish55]

Amnesia in an unknown place, how original lol. The Shaky cam could use some work, the voice acting was decent, but the ending was pretty good.

[heyyathen]

This is a great video. Makes me want to think, what would I choose?

[lazzyboy033]

who thought u could make somthing like this from a game 5/5

[DailyVocabulary]

the editing, sound and quality where superb but some of the voice acting was weak and i feel as though the story wasn't really raped up at the end

i hope you take this as constructive criticism and don't take offense in fact i encourage you to make more just try to rap up the stray ends in the story

[Meguy73]

wat happens in the end after the credits

u here a guy say "Clear"

than?

[Pshnookems]

He was flat lining so they used a dephibulater on him

[JerPWN]

that was sweet, i love sad endings! people don't do them enough! haha

[dxinuyasha]

4/5 voice acting could have been better, but still amazing work, I hope to see mroe from you.

[GamerDude197]

make some more you had a good idea

[pantherking23]

great 5/5 but kinda depressing

[shaneyboy11996]

that was amazing