Constructive comment here. Try either singing and playing your songs with feeling, or just talk and 'flirt' if that's what it is, but it just don't work when you seem to doing both. It detracts from the songs. All your videos you have the same strange eye expressions. You don't look like you realise the words you are singing, just seem to posing to the camera. Can you see yourself when you are filming it, cos that's what it looks like. Sorry.
Brave in general or this song in particular? sorry, but just interested to know how mny ppl actually get what this one's about cause most of my rl friends don't, heh. either way, yeah, uploading a song can b a nervewracking experience, but i couldn't talk to camera in the way you do - i admire it, that demands a willingnes to look yourself in the face over time on a whole other level of bravery, i commend you
thats excellent performance!great rythem that you played, and of couse, fantastic singing.i think your voice is kind of between "rock" and "country", which
gives a great feel to song like this. quite refreshing and relaxing.=)and looking forward to see your new vids soon;)
thanks a lot man :) and yeah, i do appear to have some closet country tendencies, but i try + minimise them lest i start singing about how even my lil dog left me, hehe
no way! even the saddest songs in the world aren't necessarily depressing, they can remind you that other people are in your shoes and yr not alone in that way. or at the very least that some poor bastard is worse off than you, hehe, though i'd say yours are more the former :) these are the 1st happy songs i've written - inspiration always strikes hardest when yr down.
Yeah, I can tell stories about all that... ;) Ok, I'm trying to write 'no easy' songs. Not always, but most time - actually that's due to my nature :o) And I know that most ppl wanna listen to easy stuff. Lyrics are not that important to me than to most ppl. And yes, the most intense/emotional songs I've written in a 'down situation' ;) I usually do love more kinda sad songs than easy happy songs
always depends how i'm fee;ing - sometimes i wanna listen to sad stuff to knwo that other ppl have felt the same, but mostly i like to be cheered up by music :)
Your enthusiasm comes across in all of your posts and this song is a breath of fresh air compared to others. I notice that you have kept it simple with the chord changes - simplicity is the key to a great song!
my guitar skills aren't BRILLIANT, self-taughtnes ftl, but yeah, this is pretty damn basic even by my standards, heh, i just go with what works for my mood/the lyrics in my head/whatever, heh, i don't rly know how i write, i just do o.O
This is the first song I hear from you and it's very very good! I'd change a biiit on the lyrics but better to leave it with your own thoughts. Very nice, I'll keep hearing! :)
ordered a new cam last night, so fingers crossed my next original'll b better quality - can't wait for a cam to post again though, it's too much fun, so i'll do a cover over the next few days
teehee, that's prob just cause i KNOW i shoudld be studying for my giant exam on Thurs, so of course i've been doing the rounds + commenting on as many random vids as poss.. procrastination ftw!
And thanks so much for being my 50th! i'm totally overwhelmed by all the support, it's just fantastic!
when i first uploaded, i promised myself + a mate that I'd buy a better cam if i ever got to 50 subs + thus it looked worth it.. unbelievably i'm already on 45 O.o so it could happen soon :) glad to know ppl DO seem to think it's worth it!
ah, i was 100% hooked b4 i even started posting, i've already pretty much resigned myself to the fact that the majority of my easter break will be dedicated to attempting to write more songs to upload :)
And this is cool Polly and her bodacious hat! Awesome song Polly! Great lyrics, Great performance. You know, you have more fun singing songs then anyone I know. It's especially cute when you lift your legs up and lean back a little when in the moment of a powerful note! Your just so RAD. ( Ya I said "Rad", so what if I used to be a skater, lol) Givin ya a Big 5!
teehee, rad's forgivable, given that i call everyone dude/man like something out of the fabulous furry freak brothers!
and dammit, how do i always end up being 'cute'? save us from cuteness! i wanna b bitchin' lmao :) but i probably do have too much fun for that, you're right, hehe
Very nice rhythm. remind me Joan Baez.
zedid06 2 years ago
Constructive comment here. Try either singing and playing your songs with feeling, or just talk and 'flirt' if that's what it is, but it just don't work when you seem to doing both. It detracts from the songs. All your videos you have the same strange eye expressions. You don't look like you realise the words you are singing, just seem to posing to the camera. Can you see yourself when you are filming it, cos that's what it looks like. Sorry.
astronut66 3 years ago
I promise... I will never move. Don't stop writing.
noDsliw 4 years ago
Very soulfull voice. Nice lyrics. It looks like you really enjoy playing this song.
csaintg 4 years ago
Go ahead and quit your day job, awesome work! ;) Do you only play acoustic?
nighttrain1067 4 years ago
And I forgot... Nice hat!
MichelZBlues 4 years ago
So you had 50 subscribers in March? now you have more than 250!
Well, you deserve that!
always a pleasure to see your videos.
MichelZBlues 4 years ago
thanks a lot man, though it still seems insane to me, heh, :)
logana13 4 years ago
Excellent.
Mad5am 4 years ago
How brave. I've been toying with the idea. Way to put it out there. Nice.
heidi1970 5 years ago
Brave in general or this song in particular? sorry, but just interested to know how mny ppl actually get what this one's about cause most of my rl friends don't, heh. either way, yeah, uploading a song can b a nervewracking experience, but i couldn't talk to camera in the way you do - i admire it, that demands a willingnes to look yourself in the face over time on a whole other level of bravery, i commend you
logana13 5 years ago
thats excellent performance!great rythem that you played, and of couse, fantastic singing.i think your voice is kind of between "rock" and "country", which
gives a great feel to song like this. quite refreshing and relaxing.=)and looking forward to see your new vids soon;)
fyang32 5 years ago
thanks a lot man :) and yeah, i do appear to have some closet country tendencies, but i try + minimise them lest i start singing about how even my lil dog left me, hehe
logana13 5 years ago
YOur songs are superb and your delivery is delicious.
secretstrummer 5 years ago
thanks a lot, man, having heard a few of yours now, that certainly means a lot! :)
logana13 5 years ago
As they say, a very simple song, but if you try to complicate a song just for the purpose of being complicated... it will suck.
You've got a great spirit, I'm sure you make a lot of people happy! I get a feeling I bring people down with my songs, haha :D
KarinFredrika 5 years ago
no way! even the saddest songs in the world aren't necessarily depressing, they can remind you that other people are in your shoes and yr not alone in that way. or at the very least that some poor bastard is worse off than you, hehe, though i'd say yours are more the former :) these are the 1st happy songs i've written - inspiration always strikes hardest when yr down.
logana13 5 years ago
Yeah, I can tell stories about all that... ;) Ok, I'm trying to write 'no easy' songs. Not always, but most time - actually that's due to my nature :o) And I know that most ppl wanna listen to easy stuff. Lyrics are not that important to me than to most ppl. And yes, the most intense/emotional songs I've written in a 'down situation' ;) I usually do love more kinda sad songs than easy happy songs
KrisShred 5 years ago
always depends how i'm fee;ing - sometimes i wanna listen to sad stuff to knwo that other ppl have felt the same, but mostly i like to be cheered up by music :)
logana13 5 years ago
You would'nt marry me on the other site.Will you marry me on this one ?
LOUIEAVILA8 5 years ago
Your enthusiasm comes across in all of your posts and this song is a breath of fresh air compared to others. I notice that you have kept it simple with the chord changes - simplicity is the key to a great song!
foggonthetyne 5 years ago
my guitar skills aren't BRILLIANT, self-taughtnes ftl, but yeah, this is pretty damn basic even by my standards, heh, i just go with what works for my mood/the lyrics in my head/whatever, heh, i don't rly know how i write, i just do o.O
logana13 5 years ago
She's great foggy - why didn't you send her vids round. You obviously wanted to keep your discovery to yourself!
secretstrummer 5 years ago
This is the first song I hear from you and it's very very good! I'd change a biiit on the lyrics but better to leave it with your own thoughts. Very nice, I'll keep hearing! :)
euge31 5 years ago
thanks a lot :) and yeah, i guess lyrics can be a pretty personal thing
logana13 5 years ago
Gotta say you look like ya having fun!!! Much of the "i" factor, lololol. Phil
pjraddin 5 years ago
i generally am when i'm plaing :) but.. the 'i' factor?
logana13 5 years ago
Great composition !! ~
yohakusunshine 5 years ago
thanks a lot man :)
logana13 5 years ago
WOO! 5/5 BIG stars! Intelligent lyrics, great upbeat rhythm, super vocals...
And one great thing about YT is, the camera is of little concern, so long as we can see and hear. So no real need for a 'better' cam.
Cheers!
~Brian
ariestheramone 5 years ago
wow, thanks a lot dude! :D
ordered a new cam last night, so fingers crossed my next original'll b better quality - can't wait for a cam to post again though, it's too much fun, so i'll do a cover over the next few days
logana13 5 years ago
excellent! *waits in anticipation*
ariestheramone 5 years ago
lol, best get practising...
logana13 5 years ago
no rush...inspiration is the key.
ariestheramone 5 years ago
Beautiful song Polly!
Congrats on 50 Subscribers.
Pat & Nic :o):o)
patman2112 5 years ago
thanks a lot guys :)
*still proud to be your 100th*
logana13 5 years ago
great job polly!!! you are amazing!
betz28 5 years ago
i am watching you
nosibor 5 years ago
lol, that doesn't sound vaguely ominous or creepy at all...
logana13 5 years ago
Cool Song!! Awesome!!
tuskaiae 5 years ago
wow, thanks a lot dude, i <3 your stuff :)
logana13 5 years ago
lovely too ! lol I try to do write in english but is not easy I hope that you understand my words ! lol ! follows this !
tristounette62 5 years ago
i do understand, thankyou! or, erm... oui, je comprhends, merci beaucoup!
logana13 5 years ago
Great one Polly, I listened to this three times already
Rocket
Ottawarocket 5 years ago
All to sand
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In one day! Yeah!
♥ mako ;]
makochan200 5 years ago
teehee, that's prob just cause i KNOW i shoudld be studying for my giant exam on Thurs, so of course i've been doing the rounds + commenting on as many random vids as poss.. procrastination ftw!
And thanks so much for being my 50th! i'm totally overwhelmed by all the support, it's just fantastic!
logana13 5 years ago
wow, now THAT's a compliment! thanks dude, glad u like it :)
logana13 5 years ago
grate song i like your styl logana you get write into the mode and you are soooos sexy lov u
adil
adilzahrani 5 years ago
grate you get right into the mode 5 stars from me logana you are the best and thats for sure lov u
adil
adilzahrani 5 years ago
thanks a lot adil :)
logana13 5 years ago
Gr8 job !!!!
Bocist 5 years ago
thanks a lot dude :)
logana13 5 years ago
when i first uploaded, i promised myself + a mate that I'd buy a better cam if i ever got to 50 subs + thus it looked worth it.. unbelievably i'm already on 45 O.o so it could happen soon :) glad to know ppl DO seem to think it's worth it!
logana13 5 years ago
I was your 50th subscriber! YEAH!
And YES it's worth it, I think it's _more_ than worth it and I'm sure I'm not the only one thinking so!
makochan200 5 years ago
Nice. Deserves a better camera & sound quality.
MilitaryBoot 5 years ago
I think your great, be careful the youtube infection will get you, like it's got me, Love it
rokgod 5 years ago
ah, i was 100% hooked b4 i even started posting, i've already pretty much resigned myself to the fact that the majority of my easter break will be dedicated to attempting to write more songs to upload :)
logana13 5 years ago
And this is cool Polly and her bodacious hat! Awesome song Polly! Great lyrics, Great performance. You know, you have more fun singing songs then anyone I know. It's especially cute when you lift your legs up and lean back a little when in the moment of a powerful note! Your just so RAD. ( Ya I said "Rad", so what if I used to be a skater, lol) Givin ya a Big 5!
modernoracle 5 years ago
teehee, rad's forgivable, given that i call everyone dude/man like something out of the fabulous furry freak brothers!
and dammit, how do i always end up being 'cute'? save us from cuteness! i wanna b bitchin' lmao :) but i probably do have too much fun for that, you're right, hehe
logana13 5 years ago
I'm falling in love over here.. You're so good!
joe6panther6 5 years ago
lol, cheers dude, still a long way from catching you up!
logana13 5 years ago
Gratz on another great song and vid dude!
loiresquall 5 years ago
cheers, dude :) when r u gonna upload more of your ff vids? you know you want to, relenquish the warcrack, love the youtube!
logana13 5 years ago