I really think you should keep to showing your Character models only. I agree with electropothy, that you need to pinpoint what you want to do.
Your Models are very good and design is quite unique, but your animations and camera work are suffering a fair bit.
My suggestion is that if you want your reel to be more dynamic, instead of just turnrounds for your models, have someone else animate them for you so long as you did the rigging to show them as working models.
what is it that u actually do or want to do, if ur lookin for a job u need to pin point what it is u want to go into. if ur a modeler than jus show ur models, special effects if u want to do that sort of thing and so on. employers want to know what the emplyee wants to do so they can decide whether they want u or not.
speaking from firts hand experience as a video game artist student.
this isnt a dig or complaint, more a constructive criticism and helpfull advice lol.
What's up with all the models I see having way too many abdominal muscles? It looks like that guy has a 12 or 14 pack! Oh well, he looks sweet anyway. Great modeling and great demo reel!
in your render settings choose "maya vector" instead of "maya software" for your renderer. make sure all your normals area hard and gicve your objects a solid colored shader. then select show outline or something like that and choose your line color.
My personal opinion is the best demo reels are those kept simple. Show what you can do, and give an estimated time. You're trying to sell your work, and when your work is drowned by music and spastic camera angles, it tends to be difficult to admire. Nice works, though.
I really like your modeling style, very original. I have to agree with most that you should take out the chess animation or change the cameras cause the camera there got really annoying, especially with the space ship as well. The lighting was okay, I'm not much of an expert on lighting. The animation itself was pretty good, but as someone mentioned, your modeling is your strong point so far. Keep up the good work.
cute real! a bit weak on the lighting, render and , ur modeling looks great but the skin texture is too rough. overall the real needs more moive shot positions and less shaky 3D animation with the cam
Really bad camera movements, blah...music, bad.
soulrunner66 1 year ago
I really think you should keep to showing your Character models only. I agree with electropothy, that you need to pinpoint what you want to do.
Your Models are very good and design is quite unique, but your animations and camera work are suffering a fair bit.
My suggestion is that if you want your reel to be more dynamic, instead of just turnrounds for your models, have someone else animate them for you so long as you did the rigging to show them as working models.
Midgetelf0585 1 year ago
Amazing. I love the last character design, it's great.
vivoslibertos 2 years ago
nice
artisanfx 3 years ago
Some are real good .. some are realy bad ... good for you there is more good ones ...
resistanceunion 3 years ago
there "are" more good ones.
Good for you the majority of your grammar is ok.
79expand 2 years ago
awesome
rosshildick 3 years ago
what is it that u actually do or want to do, if ur lookin for a job u need to pin point what it is u want to go into. if ur a modeler than jus show ur models, special effects if u want to do that sort of thing and so on. employers want to know what the emplyee wants to do so they can decide whether they want u or not.
speaking from firts hand experience as a video game artist student.
this isnt a dig or complaint, more a constructive criticism and helpfull advice lol.
best of luck.
electropothy 3 years ago
What's up with all the models I see having way too many abdominal muscles? It looks like that guy has a 12 or 14 pack! Oh well, he looks sweet anyway. Great modeling and great demo reel!
DanLightning 3 years ago
Sorry I dont know. I use softimage xsi.
ericdraved 4 years ago
How do you atach the skeletons so that you can move them and stuff? P.S. i have the demo version.
jarrettl3 3 years ago
HI, can u help me?? {maya}
how to render with wireframe in maya [like this reel???]
naveenmacs 4 years ago
in your render settings choose "maya vector" instead of "maya software" for your renderer. make sure all your normals area hard and gicve your objects a solid colored shader. then select show outline or something like that and choose your line color.
lookitsasian 4 years ago
thnzz
naveenmacs 4 years ago
Hey,
You can render with wireframe using maya vector renderer, it very easy and powerful.
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unilibertypromotions 2 years ago
My personal opinion is the best demo reels are those kept simple. Show what you can do, and give an estimated time. You're trying to sell your work, and when your work is drowned by music and spastic camera angles, it tends to be difficult to admire. Nice works, though.
Cheer348 4 years ago
Buena, buena. Una demo muy interesante. Se ve que en Málaga hay bueno bueno.
freddyvideos 4 years ago
I really like your modeling style, very original. I have to agree with most that you should take out the chess animation or change the cameras cause the camera there got really annoying, especially with the space ship as well. The lighting was okay, I'm not much of an expert on lighting. The animation itself was pretty good, but as someone mentioned, your modeling is your strong point so far. Keep up the good work.
jweinrub 4 years ago
ya, i would stick to modeling and also take out that chess part - it almost gave me a seizure
asdkaosjdlk234 4 years ago
Hmmmm, some nixe work, but you really gotta work on ur animation skills. And the shaky camera is a little 90's.
arniph 4 years ago
Muy bueno toda la demo, pero a ver is animas de una vez al angel que quiero ver como se mueve eso!
segui asi! lobo voyeuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuur
BorrachoFeliz 4 years ago
cute real! a bit weak on the lighting, render and , ur modeling looks great but the skin texture is too rough. overall the real needs more moive shot positions and less shaky 3D animation with the cam
martok666 4 years ago
que crack, estan wapos espero que siguas asi tio y que vean que vales :)
joyman2000 4 years ago
animacion x
angelfreak18 4 years ago
Menudo Crack! No lo dejes y sigue modelando y texturizando así. Guapisímo todo el trabajo se nota que le echas horas.
vanderjas 4 years ago