Ashwin, i would say you both got a great future! please utilize your skills to the fullest and you would be one among the best directors in the world!
coming to camera angles...i tried my maximum to make it look pro and give a proper movie look... if i had a better camera i wudve done the best. thanks for rating it 8/10 ! i hope i used shihab the rite way as a first time director. he's done real good in the last .really good. i dunno if u ppl have noticed but shihab has two looks in the movie to differentiate his personalities of his past and his present.
thanks to all the critics above. . .this is sumthin i need from u ppl. . .criticize. the only way to become a GOOD filmmaker or an actor. thank u sabir sir for all ur views. i shudve taken care of a few things. sajen..i truely agree wid ur point about shaking of camera in a few shots. ..but didnt have time to take them again. i told shihab too dat even a lill a shake is bad but i tried ma maximum to give it a good look.
the narration changes to monologue towards the end of the film. transition could had been more smoooth. Narration is little lengthy and could had been more sharper, simplified way bit too much. editing is superb, so is the use of the background music in the film. shihab performance is very good. film got a style and its treatment give the film its unique edge. still i feel, it could had been written better....all the best guys!! keep up the good work..SABIR HAQUE
heyyy.....amazingggggg!!!... loved every part of it! jus creative! loved the initial background score, titling.Nice direction and flow of story. the time shihab stops at the car nd rewinds was a lil shakey. shihabs expression during the accident was a lil funy =). but really loved the next scene afta the accident wen he is sweating, amazing acting. love the transition picking up the whisky glass. only one major flaw , shihab was wearing the seat belt :(. gr8 effort!
hu is dis. . . ? anywayzz thanks a lot for ur views...
about the seat belt. . it is not a flaw but its the second chance he got to live..if it was not the seat belt he wudve passed away. the flaw is that there shudve been a small scene of him wearing the seat belt in the end wen he tells about his second chance to live...
Ashwin really cool work with the direction & steve good sound mixing oh nd shihab took me some time to realize that both were 1 person... but 1 small doubt abt the movie... Aliya, did he get the chance to change the car between the shoot also??? and the seat belt.. hmm already mentioned... Ash I am not criticising u... Just pulling ya leg... COOL work bro.. keep it up..
by the way no mixing done by steven ... its me n shihab onli
stevens car was used in the accident scene and dats y the special thanks...
there is another we are uploading which has no flaws...and i didnt get ur quetions inbetween...aliya? hu where how what? i didnt get that...chaging cars? specify pls...
It's a beautiful movie. The narration was superb, hats off to u Shihab. Direction & camera angles were innovative, but u cud hav avoided the shakes & given more tym for the shots... remember a normal human eye needs a minimum tym to register visuals. It wud be a waste for such shots to be forgotten. U need to prolong it a bit to get the 'feel' if u understand wot I mean. Lighting has to be improved a lot...
Good work Bro!! Keppp up!!
ayasdxb 2 years ago
Keep up da good work guys!!!
jaffarm777 3 years ago
Ashwin, i would say you both got a great future! please utilize your skills to the fullest and you would be one among the best directors in the world!
zaneerahamed 3 years ago
thank you so much dear well-wisher...
:)
ashwinkaykay 3 years ago
coming to camera angles...i tried my maximum to make it look pro and give a proper movie look... if i had a better camera i wudve done the best. thanks for rating it 8/10 ! i hope i used shihab the rite way as a first time director. he's done real good in the last .really good. i dunno if u ppl have noticed but shihab has two looks in the movie to differentiate his personalities of his past and his present.
ashwinkaykay 3 years ago
thanks to all the critics above. . .this is sumthin i need from u ppl. . .criticize. the only way to become a GOOD filmmaker or an actor. thank u sabir sir for all ur views. i shudve taken care of a few things. sajen..i truely agree wid ur point about shaking of camera in a few shots. ..but didnt have time to take them again. i told shihab too dat even a lill a shake is bad but i tried ma maximum to give it a good look.
ashwinkaykay 3 years ago
the narration changes to monologue towards the end of the film. transition could had been more smoooth. Narration is little lengthy and could had been more sharper, simplified way bit too much. editing is superb, so is the use of the background music in the film. shihab performance is very good. film got a style and its treatment give the film its unique edge. still i feel, it could had been written better....all the best guys!! keep up the good work..SABIR HAQUE
thegeeky1 3 years ago
heyyy.....amazingggggg!!!... loved every part of it! jus creative! loved the initial background score, titling.Nice direction and flow of story. the time shihab stops at the car nd rewinds was a lil shakey. shihabs expression during the accident was a lil funy =). but really loved the next scene afta the accident wen he is sweating, amazing acting. love the transition picking up the whisky glass. only one major flaw , shihab was wearing the seat belt :(. gr8 effort!
syciKreations 3 years ago
hu is dis. . . ? anywayzz thanks a lot for ur views...
about the seat belt. . it is not a flaw but its the second chance he got to live..if it was not the seat belt he wudve passed away. the flaw is that there shudve been a small scene of him wearing the seat belt in the end wen he tells about his second chance to live...
ashwinkaykay 3 years ago
Ashwin really cool work with the direction & steve good sound mixing oh nd shihab took me some time to realize that both were 1 person... but 1 small doubt abt the movie... Aliya, did he get the chance to change the car between the shoot also??? and the seat belt.. hmm already mentioned... Ash I am not criticising u... Just pulling ya leg... COOL work bro.. keep it up..
twenty6s 2 years ago
hu is dis?
thank u for ur comments...
by the way no mixing done by steven ... its me n shihab onli
stevens car was used in the accident scene and dats y the special thanks...
there is another we are uploading which has no flaws...and i didnt get ur quetions inbetween...aliya? hu where how what? i didnt get that...chaging cars? specify pls...
ashwinkaykay 2 years ago
My bad...
twenty6s 2 years ago
can u pls tell ur sweet name... so i cud know hu has taken the patience to write a comment...
ashwinkaykay 2 years ago
I wish to see the improvised edition ;) Keep it up guys. Sniff! wish I cud start on mine...
SeanSkanda 3 years ago
Titling is excellent, use bigger size fonts & avoid the zoom from the title
to the opening scene - fade is enuff. I liked the way u reversed & paused the scenes according to
the writer's timing - brilliant! like I said only the timing needs to be improved, prolong the
shots to get the needed effect. Language of narration is obviously good coz it's Deepthi, and the
maturity in Shihab's voice gave full justice to it. All in all, I wud rate this 8/10.
SeanSkanda 3 years ago
It's a beautiful movie. The narration was superb, hats off to u Shihab. Direction & camera angles were innovative, but u cud hav avoided the shakes & given more tym for the shots... remember a normal human eye needs a minimum tym to register visuals. It wud be a waste for such shots to be forgotten. U need to prolong it a bit to get the 'feel' if u understand wot I mean. Lighting has to be improved a lot...
SeanSkanda 3 years ago