The only thing I'd change is the title you added at the end... you already say it in the video. Personally I don't think you really need anything on top of the shirt.
@danieee10 that's my goal for when i make these vids ;) i'm not sure if the words are distracting or not :/
like, number 2 is probably more entertaining / better for the rowers but number 3 is so new people can understand what it's about with the words.. but idk if that's gay or not :P
i need people who don't row to watch it to get an opinion!!!
yer i like the titles, i odnt so much like the its more than a sport its a community, its too cheesey and get rid of the random bottles of energy drink :)
deffinetly the best this would make me want to row
homerman001 1 year ago
The only thing I'd change is the title you added at the end... you already say it in the video. Personally I don't think you really need anything on top of the shirt.
dutbavid 1 year ago
i like ittttt
:) haha
again, made me tearrr
danieee10 1 year ago
@danieee10 that's my goal for when i make these vids ;) i'm not sure if the words are distracting or not :/
like, number 2 is probably more entertaining / better for the rowers but number 3 is so new people can understand what it's about with the words.. but idk if that's gay or not :P
i need people who don't row to watch it to get an opinion!!!
henryleef 1 year ago
@henryleef i posted it on tumblr and i'll make some of my friends watch it when they come online and i'll tell you :)
the words are good
like, that's what a ad is all about :) haha
it's kinda inspirational.
danieee10 1 year ago
yer i like the titles, i odnt so much like the its more than a sport its a community, its too cheesey and get rid of the random bottles of energy drink :)
abarry3 1 year ago
@abarry3 haha community stays. it fits all the footage behind it :P and if i had footage to fit there, i'd use it!
henryleef 1 year ago