Hello Beautiful A Nick Jonas Love Story Chapter One

[WorldWar2ismylastnam]

ugh.... sucks so bad

[welcometomylife12]

Good!

[nickjonas420]

It was too fast...maybe use pics and have dialouge...?

[notcon4md]

Um I think this story starts too fast :), imho. she's randomly in starbucks and suddenly nick's her best friend.

[msnickjonasfan13]

good job on this story! im making one to plzz check it out and tell me what you think. =) im still working on it.

[aznxbabyy]

can someone tell me what song was used in this?

[MustangLuver137]

please be mine by jonas brothers

[kittycatty112]

jonas brothers: please be mine

[crazysurfer438]

i never really got to read the whole thing....what happened in the last chapt.?? when are yu posting your new chpt.?

[MustangLuver137]

i'm posting a new chapter i'm hoping too next weekend but i've been sooo busy and this week i was sick

[crazysurfer438]

im not sure if you got my other Q, what happened in the last chap. you made?!?!? :)

[MustangLuver137]

pretty much Athelianna kevin's friend came to visit and athelianna tells nick and joe she likes Kevin

[crazysurfer438]

someone im related to is writing a book and went to new york and met the publisher. the only thing is im not sure ic ould hook u up :0

[MustangLuver137]

that's fine... cuz i kno that it wouldn't make it through and i'm not the best writer and don't really want a writing career lol

[crazysurfer438]

whatevs

[MustangLuver137]

okay....

[crazysurfer438]

did this really happen? if it did, pmg im sooo jealous. anyways youre a good writer. keep on going with the story and if its good i know someone who could help you publish it[?!?!]

[MustangLuver137]

nope completly made up.. how do you kno a publisher?

[crazysurfer438]

someone im related to is writing a book and went to new york and met the publisher. the only thing is im not sure i could hook u up :0. [and just to give you a heads up the story might not get through :( just cause of some of the content in it.]

[roszeyred]

i LOVE this song but to bad this is a short story

[KelliCom]

?why is it so short?://

[MustangLuver137]

cuz i started writing it short not relizing how short it was till i typed it and now i write them longer

[ITSRAD]

What song is this???? I love JB but I have never herd this one??? Well I have but what is the name????

[MustangLuver137]

PLease Be Mine from there first album

[ITSRAD]

is their first album where can I get it and is it the Bonous Jonas one????

[MustangLuver137]

umm the first album is no longer sold

[ITSRAD]

What??? Why not?? I love all those songs!! That SUCKS big time!!! ;-(

[MustangLuver137]

idk y but maybe you can find it on ebay

[xoLuvnJoeJonasxo]

im in and out of love with you trying to find if its really true<33 hah yeah i loveeeemmm

[zellowfab5598]

wow. it's amazing how nick, joe, and kevin got soo famous. Nick was my friend when we were little. lol nice story though. =)

[MustangLuver137]

that's cool how'd you meet him?

[zellowfab5598]

well it was when we were little. First grade. He was in my class and we became friends of course. It started with, "can I borrow your green crayon." i miss him though. he's always doing concerts or on tour.

[MustangLuver137]

ohh that's cool that you knew him

[UgottaLOVEjb]

OMJ OMJ u knew NIck jonas thats like WOW OMJ

[mrs13nickjonas]

did u steal that one from quizzilla

[MustangLuver137]

no it is completly made up by me

[njobsessed]

that song makes me cry every time i hear it but idk y

its so cute and sweet

i want nick to sing it to me

[MustangLuver137]

yea same here

[njobsessed]

lol

[alysuex3]

hey!!! this is SO awesome!!!!! do u like have a crush on nick or something?? (i do... go figure gils & their Ca-RAZY obsessions!!!) :-) seeya 'round!

[MustangLuver137]

thanx i do like nick lol

[QuEenBloNde579]

OMG! i hate this nick is my man!

[pinkprinces212]

great!

[hottmamasoccer19]

r u sure u hung out w/ them ????? message me back

[MustangLuver137]

i never did this is all made up

[biancajacinto]

HAHAHAHA look at their mouths in :07!! It goes from Kevin (not that big) to Joe (almost big) then Nick (WIIIIIDE!)

[MustangLuver137]

lol

[2295mochi]

What song is this? I like it!

[MustangLuver137]

please be mine

[rasha93]

is this true

[MustangLuver137]

no just made up

[nickjoffdachain]

WOW THAT WOULD BE A DREAM COME TRUE! if that were real....

[MustangLuver137]

yea it would

[heatherjones00]

thats please be mine...

[MustangLuver137]

Yep i put please be mine in the background

[MustangLuver137]

thanx!!

[greenguitars884ever]

gr8 job!

[MustangLuver137]

thanx

[MustangLuver137]

it ends at 42 seconds then the rest is music