Book Review #3: Swoon

[tmpfan2]

You have beauty hair. Anyways, I am half way into it and the shorten nicknames are stupid, the fake, horrible dialogue crates on my nerves, and Dice's voice is really irritating to read. It started out has bad, then turned to so bad it started to get good in that bad way, and then it just stays there in an entertaining way. I have to completely turn my brain off to enjoy this book, and after page 100 I do. The names are the worst and the writing is just plain horrible.

[tmpfan2]

@tmpfan2 What's up with Y.A. writers feel the need to rape the thesaurus for? I read some heavy books and only have to look up a few unfamiliar words, but in YA books there is WAY to many big words were smaller ones would make reading their work much more pleasurable. I don't mind it a few times but after awhile it gets on my nerves big time. I know a lot of big words but YA writers for some odd reason feel the need to punish younger readers, I guess to appear smart, but not all. End of rant.

[iGraceeee]

1700's*

[AlannahClaire]

The dynamics of the book don't matter. It's what the story's about.

[sadgirl22]

i personally didn't like it. the writing was confusing and the story didn't make sense. and i bought the book.

[jdoug0234]

im reading it right now, about 1/3 of the way through. its ok, its very ....strange. the way malkin writes it confuses me she uses so so so so many describing words that i dunno what she means half the time lol. anyway . its ok so far. i think ill finish it.

[girlofthefuture17]

cool Swoon sounds really interesting. I love to read and at the moment I don't know what to read so lucky for me that I came across your review. Great video and I can't wait for your next review.

[hannarocks10]

thanks i have stopped; since school started and havent found anything too interesting. but will do more within time.