Almost Lover

[mercedesdadancer]

a little messy and choppy. but potential

[x0mizxannax0xD]

I REALLY LIKED IT.. almost love.. but i know what type of dancer you are. Keep practicing... your getting there. your an 8.5.... make it a ten. I loved some sparts... it looked as if it was a pro. good job girl.. So proud of girls like you <3

[caitlinpaige012]

good job, but just one critique: try to make your movement more fluid :)

[JesusChristSavesUs15]

good job :) i just have a few comments :

-GREAT LEAPS!!! I loved them they are very good and strong :)

- show more emotion in the dance because on top of the great dancing ability, emotion is the rest of the package :)

-and be carefull to dance in socks, they can be very slippery and can cause major injury... but good job! :)



[KaylaCheerchick]

that was great just try to match the songs high and lows aswell but overall great job

[lildaddysgirl8220]

you should have worn something that fit the song. duh

[marlsbabe28]

it was okayy

[acrofreak]

not bad, good job. just put your heart into it.

[whitneydana421]

Some people can improv. some cant.

[7895123578946]

you need to strengthen your core, but other than that you just need practice and a good technique trainer

[mego12lego]

it was good! i like that u just float around like what ur doing is nothing =)

[jennwie]

hey girl don't look down when you're jumping ! be PROUD of what you got and use it well so you're gonna be good =) keep working hard

[PRIINCEEZXDIIAANAA]

too stiff but over all, good

[dancemonstermary]

just make sure to make the movements defined when you improv but really good :)

[DancerLivingHerDream]

Your a good dancer but yea the choreography wasn't exactly my favorite.

But you can't just do the moves but feel the moves if you understand that because to be the best dancer you have to put emotion into it.

Just a little advice leave it or take it.

It's just an opinion.

But otherwise great job at dancing!=)

[leeshapesh09]

she was improving. there wasn't any written choreography.

Remember: when you improve, keep moving and try to make everything connect. Finesse throughout your phrases. and trust yourself. =)

[meekachu]

more emotion!!!!!

[misspunkydork]

soooooo i clicked on the video because i saw a really awesome extensin as the freeze frame/ some highlights:

*there needs more actual movement, feeel it out. some parts were terribly boring.

*you have awesome,leaps,kicks, and turns!

*show more enthusiasm!!

im not sugar coating anything, cuz you wont be able to improve! but you look reallly awesome and im glad i watched this! :) keeeep dancing

[uheartme93]

1)in my opinion it was average

2)there could be a lot more dancing

3)you have potential to be a good dancer keep up the work

[SmexyKat]

great job! your kicks are amazing!

[simgrl]

this is great!! how long have you been dancing?

[twinkletoes1118]

13/14ish years =]

[cutecookie]

i see potential to.. but try not to turn around your self so much and dont make your moves so choppy

[twinkletoes1118]

thanks... i will work on those things =]

[DanceWithChinchillas]

Ok 2 things (I'll try not to ramble on): you're a very beautiful dancer with a lot of potential, keep working hard and posting vids, I would love to see how you progress as a dancer.

My only negative is that your musicality could be a little better. Your dancing/emotion didn't change with the changes in the music; I know that this is improv but if you work on it then it will come naturally when you don't have choreography.

Anyway, I really enjoyed this and hope to see more.

[twinkletoes1118]

i am definately going 2 post more videos... my camera broke and i am in the process of getting a new one... a lot better one... haha... so i will def be posting a lot more soon... and my musicality is a lot better than this shows... 4 some reason when i uploaded it 2 youtube it got all screwed up... like near the beginning it is with the music but it slowly got off and by the end it was like 5 seconds behind... haha... thanks so much for the comments... they really help me!!!

[shaylamarie23]

Hahaha i love how like when it says "you sang me spanish lullabies" you did a kind of baby rock.

when i was improving in my class to that, i did the same thing.

[twinkletoes1118]

thanks!!! it just seemed 2 fit 4 me there =]

guess i wasn't the only one =]

[leiladancexo]

that was really beautiful! i loved it!

[twinkletoes1118]

thanks!! i am glad u like it!!

[wildroses21]

I could watch you all day. You dance with such grace and beauty. And I still can't believe it's improv. Your so talented. I can't wait to see more! <3 <3

[twinkletoes1118]

Thanks!!!!! i am glad that u enjoyed it!!!

[badkarma1215]

I could watch you dance all day. You dance with grace and beauty. So talented! <3 <3