Trespassing

[rcrazyish]

TRAVISCERA u got talent liked it thanks alot

[TheWiihightnenjea]

At least she dint sparkle.

[ArioftheDarkness]

This is far better than the newer horror movies they make these days.

Are trying to become a movie producer? If so I bet you'll succeed and if you dont that only proves the world has no sense of talent

[TraViscera]

@ArioftheDarkness Thanks for the support!

[Crazyguitar96]

i really liked the lighting and the feel for it, it felt like a silent film from the 20's and 30's, the whole scene where the thing chases tawni is scary and tense, i really liked the old filter (or did you use old film)

i really enjoyed watching this

[TraViscera]

@Crazyguitar96 Thanks for the comment! Yea I actually used old 16mm film for the first time, which was a lot of fun to use.

[usmc0321guy]

not bad at all for low budget short silent. honestly the music was one of the best parts. is the music u did for this up for download anywhere?

[TraViscera]

Wow, I never thought anyone would be interested in the music..

Unfortunately I lost the original files when I formatted my comp, all I have left is the actual audio track used in the film. If your interested I could cut it up and email to you or something.

[usmc0321guy]

Yeah, TraViscera I would love to get that music. Who did the music?

[TraViscera]

@usmc0321guy I did all the music. PM me your email and I'll send it to you.

[tonickone]

what i waste of 16mm...

[xSicSlipknotMaggotx]

Wow you did a great job with this. Your monster kind of looks like Nosferatu (original dracula movie based on bram stokers book from 1922) I loved it

[TraViscera]

Thanks. I have to admit I was a little inspired by the Nosferatu look. I really wanted to do something different than the "conventional" vampire.

[nothingfaceart]

cool movie man. some pointers i thought the lack of audio was distracting in parts, also the part where she throws the vampire out of the building looks pretty bad maybe you can edit it so the suit isnt so visible. the music could be better also. overall i enjoyed it cool short man

[TraViscera]

Thanks for constructive criticism. I totally agree with you on all points, and most could have been fixed with more time and money, enither of which I had. For my first film I'd say it's acceptably amateur.

[RIEvamp]

I almost didnt watch this all fearing it might freak me out but It was really good haha I only closed my eyes alittle ahah XD im a chicken. Great job! I loved it

[abrasivecell]

awsome job!!!! trav!

[TraViscera]

thanks!

[dablankrainbow]

wow, this is the first time anything has actually freaked me out. Good job on this! I love your videos, they're amazing. =]

[nyxjthm]

Very well done, herr Traviscera. I especially liked the teeth shot, and the burning of the albino monster.

[TraViscera]

Thanks! The teeth shot was was fun and kinda awkward, having that right in my face, trying to film it. If only I coulda captured the sound too, the licking and lip smacking made it so much better.

[finchparade]

TraViscera, I was a fan ever since your first post (I LOOOVE Jhonen Vazquez' work) and I think you're making a great job... the actress portraying alana sucks though xD I'm eager to see more of your work, =) Love from Mexico

[TraViscera]

Thanks for the support, I love Jhonen Vasquez' work too. I hope to do some more Johnny stuff in the future. If only filming wasn't so goddamn expensive!

[finchparade]

with such talent, sooner or later it will pay off, believe me, you may even be the next george romero =D let's just hope it doesn't take too long till it does xD

[rogerfan1327]

1:22-1:32 O_o wtf are they doing....are they fucking standing up or...um....O_O WTF were they doing!!!!????I thought they were going to kiss or something

[TraViscera]

heh, yea, that shot didn't turn out the way I planned, it shoulda been cut a lot shorter. Like they're ABOUT to kiss but then she's like "eww, no, look at that nasty bed". It'll be cleaned up in the director's cut

[rogerfan1327]

OH oh okay...O_o

[VikingLord13]

1:50 i was thinking about buyin those boots XD the bed guy is creepy and fuckin awsome.

[NotFunnyJoka]

Pretty amazing sir... although it could have used more special attacks... also more air time for the striking photo victim.