Love it! As always turning bread and water into a gourmet meal! Keep it steemin' Beamen! I agree with a lot of the comments session showed out on the verses... Much Love!
this is a very dope indie video @rodashtoc I do not see it that way at all. 1st of all I believe this is mixtape material the verses are very dope its some real mc shit. Don't need a hook for this shit its not for commercial usage @rodashtoc if you want commercial videos with hooks and shit go to mtv or bet and both session and Willie beamen hold their own very much here
First of all, I'm not dissing anybody nor did I say I was looking for commercial shit. Let me put it plain, if this song were on a mixtape, the verses aren't dope enough to carry me through the length of them, well, one of them. So I gave my opinion on the easiest way to fix. I can't help it if you feeling some sort of way about it. I just give honest constructive criticism. Session's verse is cool, the second one 'feels' long. lol @ thinking I'm commercial when I praise independant hustle
I stated my opinion after you stated your opinion what more can we really say after that. You are now just repeating yourself you could have just sent me a personal message if you needed to reply to me personally.
Real talk, the beat is cool. But the verses... I get lost in them, they are long and the delivery doesn't carry me through them. I'd say shorten them to about 16's, put the best bars in em, and lace it with a hook that's money, and you got some heat. But for right now it's, meh.
The Good: Independent hustle. Love seeing shit like this. Session got flow.
Fire!! Reppin' Boston Correctly. :D
rezen1983 2 months ago
This video is DOPE ! The delivery, and the way these dudes feed off each other. The whole bionic man sample is dope too.
manamz01 2 years ago
Love it! As always turning bread and water into a gourmet meal! Keep it steemin' Beamen! I agree with a lot of the comments session showed out on the verses... Much Love!
VirtueRL 2 years ago 3
nice video
ladiijazz 2 years ago 4
Thank you for the feedback
oshun521 2 years ago
this is a very dope indie video @rodashtoc I do not see it that way at all. 1st of all I believe this is mixtape material the verses are very dope its some real mc shit. Don't need a hook for this shit its not for commercial usage @rodashtoc if you want commercial videos with hooks and shit go to mtv or bet and both session and Willie beamen hold their own very much here
i'll be checking out the "too much tv" project
imhaterfree09 2 years ago 2
First of all, I'm not dissing anybody nor did I say I was looking for commercial shit. Let me put it plain, if this song were on a mixtape, the verses aren't dope enough to carry me through the length of them, well, one of them. So I gave my opinion on the easiest way to fix. I can't help it if you feeling some sort of way about it. I just give honest constructive criticism. Session's verse is cool, the second one 'feels' long. lol @ thinking I'm commercial when I praise independant hustle
rodashtoc 2 years ago
I stated my opinion after you stated your opinion what more can we really say after that. You are now just repeating yourself you could have just sent me a personal message if you needed to reply to me personally.
imhaterfree09 2 years ago
Thanks for the feedback
oshun521 2 years ago
Real talk, the beat is cool. But the verses... I get lost in them, they are long and the delivery doesn't carry me through them. I'd say shorten them to about 16's, put the best bars in em, and lace it with a hook that's money, and you got some heat. But for right now it's, meh.
The Good: Independent hustle. Love seeing shit like this. Session got flow.
The Bad: "Pro like keds..."
rodashtoc 2 years ago