Overall your film moved well, but there were a couple places where there were awkward pauses. I loved the faster moving parts, I wish it hadn't been so jarring when you switched out of those.
Also, watch your "headroom" (how much space is above your character's heads).
The ending felt awkward until the handshake. I liked that. -Luke
Wow, thanks for the positive comments everyone; they're very encouraging! God was definitely guiding us through the whole thing - He definitely gets all the glory!
Nice video. You guys look real comfortable in front of the camera. Keep it up!
CallWaitingParade 4 years ago
Overall your film moved well, but there were a couple places where there were awkward pauses. I loved the faster moving parts, I wish it hadn't been so jarring when you switched out of those.
Also, watch your "headroom" (how much space is above your character's heads).
The ending felt awkward until the handshake. I liked that. -Luke
TomySky 4 years ago
I think that's an honest assessment - thanks for the tips! God bless!
us4HIM 4 years ago
Wow, thanks for the positive comments everyone; they're very encouraging! God was definitely guiding us through the whole thing - He definitely gets all the glory!
us4HIM 4 years ago
Nice job. The elements seemed part of the story.
stephennasby 4 years ago
It was interesting. Good job.
cellarmedia 4 years ago
Great job! I love the way you worked the elements in (cheerios, socks...)
Trestle2Treasure 4 years ago
I really like how you guys did this! Great work guys!
DanielGardner 4 years ago
I really like how you guys did this! Great work guys!
DanielGardner 4 years ago
Wow! You guys did great making the socks a vital part of the story :P
RuthLaroche 4 years ago
Great video guys! Looks like those socks came out of my dresser :)!
pressdelight 4 years ago