Well at first i was all about team edward but now i think im all for jacob. i mean the boy is soooo hott!!! and plus edward is a little over protective sometimes, but i still luv him, hes good for bella cuz now i can have jacob!!! lol
Oh My Gosh, I aboslutely love Michael Crichton, when I first read Jurassic Park I was so amazed, it was the greatest book I think I read in my entire life, but I have to go to the bookstore to get this Sphere book! Oh and by the way loved the chapter so goo, Doris should seriously have her own show about relationships she's really good at making people fall in love! Oh and TEAM JACOB all the Way! LOL!
@grovychic2 Really Michael CHrichton is the greatest Novelist. I was also amased by the jurassic park. it is a fabulous mixture of facts and fiction. i immediately baught all his novels after that.
And Romeo & Juliet, as in the really old version right?
Well if your unabout the old one, we watched that not to long ago, and my friends obsessed with Zac Efron, and i was like ''He SOOO Looks like Zac!'' and she was like ''Yeah he kinda does... But Zac's SOOOO Much more attractive'' and then get this i get home, type in 'leonard whiting' as that was his name, and guess what he looks like, he looks like a FRIGIN PEDO. haha. lol
i love reading this! I cant explain it, i love stories dat take there time with the details nd dont just rush in like on the 1st chapter and start with 'can you be my girlfriend?"etc etc, neways what I'm trying 2 say is you're a reli gr8 writer lol
Love it!! And I'm neither,i'd rather be team Jasper. Love him! Anyways great job!
KevinJonasLover78 1 year ago
Team Edward. I love Edward and his undying love... But I still love that hot werewolf Jake.
mayandnickj4ever 2 years ago
Well at first i was all about team edward but now i think im all for jacob. i mean the boy is soooo hott!!! and plus edward is a little over protective sometimes, but i still luv him, hes good for bella cuz now i can have jacob!!! lol
macXheartsXmusic 2 years ago
Team Edward. :) But I LOVE Taylor Launter. :P
TheTwilightTwins232 2 years ago
Oh My Gosh, I aboslutely love Michael Crichton, when I first read Jurassic Park I was so amazed, it was the greatest book I think I read in my entire life, but I have to go to the bookstore to get this Sphere book! Oh and by the way loved the chapter so goo, Doris should seriously have her own show about relationships she's really good at making people fall in love! Oh and TEAM JACOB all the Way! LOL!
grovychic2 2 years ago
Michael Crichton is freakin amazing. I've read 9 of his books. My two all time favorites: Sphere and Timeline. Amazing. :D
madison50364 2 years ago
Oh yeah, Timeline, got to get that too. I loved books with time machines! 1357 France sounds scary! LOL but he's a great author! Simply fantastic.
grovychic2 2 years ago
@grovychic2 Really Michael CHrichton is the greatest Novelist. I was also amased by the jurassic park. it is a fabulous mixture of facts and fiction. i immediately baught all his novels after that.
anupamdixit 1 year ago
TEAM EDWARD!!!!! but in real life Lord have mercy JACOB is FINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥!!!!!!
CRAZYhead36 2 years ago
That old lady's kinda creepin me out.
And Romeo & Juliet, as in the really old version right?
Well if your unabout the old one, we watched that not to long ago, and my friends obsessed with Zac Efron, and i was like ''He SOOO Looks like Zac!'' and she was like ''Yeah he kinda does... But Zac's SOOOO Much more attractive'' and then get this i get home, type in 'leonard whiting' as that was his name, and guess what he looks like, he looks like a FRIGIN PEDO. haha. lol
JBLuvStorys 2 years ago
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i hated twilight so its neither
Hooters56 3 years ago
WOW this was amazing
im voting for doris next election time.
soccergirl1237 3 years ago
I Like this chpater alot!
Good Old Dorris :P I <3 dorris. Im her No.1 Fan! :D
*holds up an "I Love dorris" sign*
=]
x0CurlyWurly 3 years ago
i laughed at that part in romeo and juliet too!!
sadness and violence is funny...
i really like this series getting good!!
peace!!
internetxfreak 3 years ago
love the chapter!!!!!!!!! more please!!!!! sorry i never read twilight!! XD
DanaLovesNickJ7 3 years ago
oh almost forgot, TEAM EDWARD!! all the way! :D
cutierose1234 3 years ago
i love reading this! I cant explain it, i love stories dat take there time with the details nd dont just rush in like on the 1st chapter and start with 'can you be my girlfriend?"etc etc, neways what I'm trying 2 say is you're a reli gr8 writer lol
cutierose1234 3 years ago
Aimee- Awesome chapter. And you are so very welcome. I wanted to make sure everyone one knew how amazing your fanfic is! =D
ButterflyxDream 3 years ago
definately team edward !!!!!!
softballchick2197 3 years ago
Team Edward.
But i THINK i might be going Team Switzerland soon.
lol.
GREAT JOB!
Moree soon xD
JessLovesJB19 3 years ago
just a cute storyyy...XD
its lyk a fairytale
even more...becaz
kevins in it..lmao
XOXOXOXxxxOOxoxooxoxox Camiiii..♥;]
argentinachika 3 years ago
team jacobbbbb
kdblovestjb 3 years ago
TEAM JACOB! ALL THE WAY! i love edward but i love jacob even more :]]]]]]]]
futuremrsnickjonasss 3 years ago
that grandam lady doris is kinda creepy, shes nice but creepy.
futuremrsnickjonasss 3 years ago