for your first animation that's really not too bad. One word of advice (and mind you I am still a bit of an amateur myself) slow down your camera. I know its a fast sequence, flight scenes usually are, but your camera is all over the place. also your movements seem to be a little jerky, but over all it is really good for your first animation (especially with wings, anything with wings are hell in the end).
just a bit of constructive advice, if you can access some feature that will allow you to round the shapes and maybe even make the motion look more fluid, it could look even better.
@demonatemu i saw your aporia costume on the comment question of the day and i gotta say... Cool Beans Bro!
SNiPeRSHaDowZz 4 months ago
nicely done.
xonythebillygoat 2 years ago
super ultra asome job
greengatorproduction 3 years ago
Great job!
Eiyoko 3 years ago
Awesome job.
Tezema 3 years ago
the camera movements make me dizzy.. o.o
spongebobisreallygay 3 years ago 8
That's Super Special Awesome ^__^
Melodyotakuchan21 3 years ago 9
yay YuGiOh Abridged reference!!
shawfam2 3 years ago 2
for your first animation that's really not too bad. One word of advice (and mind you I am still a bit of an amateur myself) slow down your camera. I know its a fast sequence, flight scenes usually are, but your camera is all over the place. also your movements seem to be a little jerky, but over all it is really good for your first animation (especially with wings, anything with wings are hell in the end).
KeenonKH 3 years ago 3
I agree, the camera moves are very fast... that doesn't help to see the animation and to appreciate it. But I can already say that it looks great ^^
jenna1931 3 years ago 3
Man thats SO GOOD and 4 da WIN. Well done!
YamiMisty 3 years ago
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo nice *thumbs up* i cant even paint well on my comp this rocks!
Pharaohslover17 3 years ago
i love it.
just a bit of constructive advice, if you can access some feature that will allow you to round the shapes and maybe even make the motion look more fluid, it could look even better.
Casandraelf 3 years ago 2
nice job :) The wings turned out great :)
4321DarkHalo 3 years ago