I really like your cinematography and scoring sensibility set up in the opening scene and establishing shot...You're a fine talent HrachStar! I cannot watch it to the end however...it's a subject I personally cannot deal with...I suspect you are the central character...you need good pro actors around you to focus your script's directions...Thanks...NgaiO
I actually clicked on this thinking I was going to watch Tarkovsky's masterpiece. But lo, before me played a film far superior! Oh, kind fortune that hath had me stumble upon such mastery!
Part 3: But alas my friend don't fret. As you've probably already figured out by now (1.5 years later), the common denominator with any successful film is usually rewrites, rewrites, and rewrites...and MORE rewrites!
Part 2: I thought the choice of music that accompanied the opening scene was a poor choice & needed to begin with the actual beginning of the film, & not after the camera pans in & the actor takes up the whole screen. I know you delayed the music on purpose in an attempt to build on the drama of the film's opening, but you fail to do that, & instead of building drama, you actually end up creating an ackwardness that had me hoping the music (which I knew was coming) would hurry up & begin.
I thought from a technical aspect, the work was quite good. Whoever was operating the camera for example, did an exceptionally good job when the shoot was being done outside (i.e. the way he would pan in and out of a scene, the angle of the camera during certain scenes of the filming), but the acting was atrocious. Most of this was because of the actors you employed, but the script didn't help it much. The dialogue didn't flow between the characters and seemed contrived or forced.
i think this is interesting, you should expand on it. I can actually relate this to me. I talk just like the character in this script. People always criticize me for it and I believe that society is no good.Good film.
Um.... you made this video, ju-st so your writing skills could possibly get notice by some famous director or writer OR something?!?!
hmm.... my feedback is, Mr.Weeney's acting S-U-C-K-S! and the story is a bit bore to me. write more interesting one's with full of suspense/action/drama ...etc. ya know.
goddamn it!im looking for the movie not this lame dogshit!look,if you guys wanted to upload fuckin movies then make sure it wouldn't annoy the hell out of us!this video is nonsense!go and fuckyourself and be burned in hell you cocksucker!
fuck you stupid bitch! retards like me will kick your ass where i come from so i suggest you shut the fuck up cus you dont know me and this video is a bunch of bullshit!
@HrachStarMedia wait if u live in canada yull know me well and i just got probatation for beating this kid up on the street i broke alot of stuff ill give off a bit both legs broken broken 4 ribs and both arms and twisted hnd dont know if that counts i was listening to music from mk (mortal combat ) lol
@HrachStarMedia look we dont want to hear about how you sodomize man! just title this something else. we unwillingly give you views because we are mislead by damn titles!!
this video sucks SO MUTCH BALLS! i was lookin for the 2008 mirrors movie not this lame piece of shit! this deserves no stars! b-cus it sucked so mutch ass go screw yourself in the butthole fuker!
i'm glad retards like you leave absolutely no constructive criticism. i mean i could care less if you liked it or not, but tell me why, not rambling bullshit that comes from your ass
@joserodriguezization well if u werent just nother troller u can see in the descriptio 'a teenage boy' the real movie has an adult so give the kid a break
this is a pretty good story and obviously a lot of effort has gone into it but the the actors kinda let the whole thing down a bi... sorry only 3 stars from me but i still think it was an excelent idea :D
Did you create everything yourself? I love the character Calvin, his speech is an interesting twist nowadays and I kinda agree with his pessimistic views. To put it simple: Calvin rocks! Great video, man.
well next year I'm going to be at college studying and whatnot to pursue a career in film. I'm not sure what area I want to concentrate in, either Directing, Editing, Cinematography, or Screenwriting, but I really enjoy Directing!
haha yeah man I know, and I mean the movie is kinda boring but it took a lot of thought process to write this so I hope people weren't expecting like a huge violent epic film. I'm glad you appreciate it though!
@kakabli31 Get a life yourself. You were searching for mirrorS, the movie, right, well next time read the title and don't blame others for your own shitty mistakes.
I mean if you wana watch the real Mirrors movie then dont click on Mirror. I mean the difference here is one being plural the other is singular. I mean I dont care that you didnt like the movie, I'll admit it's not for everyone, but obviously it isnt bullshit and time went into the writing and what not for this. So when I ask the question what kind of life do you have when your searchin youtube for a movie and I'm out making movies, how do I not have a life? Kindly go fuck yourself! =]
when you make a movie for your script, try to make sure your actors don't sound robotic or like they are doing a play for school...you don't want them to sound like they are reading something or are nervous sounding hyper. Make sure they are calm. Try to make your movie actor's voices natural down to earth almost.
continued...Also try to add a narrator for the movie, tell background info. add more personality to your characters. You don't want your viewers to get bored so spice it up. I hope my opinion helps you in some way.
go shove a huge 6 foot pipe in your ass! then go jump off a cliff! this is the good part gotax you paying atttention?!?! make sure you land on your ass so that fucking pipe shoots right out your mouth! this is a more modern version of what ancient tribes use to do, its called piking!!! =]
if you are going to leave impotent and insignificant remarks towards my film that are not contructively criticizing my film, please dont fucking comment.
Great job so far. I liked how you ended part 1 hahah. Only thing I have to say is when you do an over the shoulder shot when you were having the conversation with grandfather, stick to the same side. Eg. If the camera is on the LEFT shoulder of yours , then the camera should be on the RIGHT shoulder of grandfathers. I must say that your writing abilities pwn.
I wanted yo see the mirrors 2008 but this isn't bad anyway
cd37857 2 months ago
gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
sewagedweller 3 months ago
I really like your cinematography and scoring sensibility set up in the opening scene and establishing shot...You're a fine talent HrachStar! I cannot watch it to the end however...it's a subject I personally cannot deal with...I suspect you are the central character...you need good pro actors around you to focus your script's directions...Thanks...NgaiO
NgaiOlaudah 3 months ago
whats this bloddy shit is?
Catayllst 4 months ago
faggot
thealmassi1 6 months ago
I actually clicked on this thinking I was going to watch Tarkovsky's masterpiece. But lo, before me played a film far superior! Oh, kind fortune that hath had me stumble upon such mastery!
DuskAndHerEmbrace13 7 months ago
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LoveeiiNikiaaa871 10 months ago
where is the reall horror movie mirror
nikola45998 10 months ago
THIS AINT MIRROES DIS IS ALOT OF CRAP
aimee20208 10 months ago
lol just like the real thing random
pureorion2310 10 months ago
thenoblequran (Ctrl+Enter)
thankallahalltime 10 months ago
not funny!!!
Darbaz09 11 months ago
BOOOOORIINNGG......
nexianboy08 1 year ago
zzz.z.z.z.zzzzzzz.......
MetrOali113 1 year ago
All I can say is "WTF?"
JOHNYBOY11S 1 year ago
fuk u who uploaded dis shit
airkuna 1 year ago
GGGGGGGRRRRRRRRR I was expecting the real movie but no offence to the people who tryed :) :) ) :)
kidsandgrowns 1 year ago
Part 3: But alas my friend don't fret. As you've probably already figured out by now (1.5 years later), the common denominator with any successful film is usually rewrites, rewrites, and rewrites...and MORE rewrites!
DuaneMThomas 1 year ago
Part 2: I thought the choice of music that accompanied the opening scene was a poor choice & needed to begin with the actual beginning of the film, & not after the camera pans in & the actor takes up the whole screen. I know you delayed the music on purpose in an attempt to build on the drama of the film's opening, but you fail to do that, & instead of building drama, you actually end up creating an ackwardness that had me hoping the music (which I knew was coming) would hurry up & begin.
DuaneMThomas 1 year ago
I thought from a technical aspect, the work was quite good. Whoever was operating the camera for example, did an exceptionally good job when the shoot was being done outside (i.e. the way he would pan in and out of a scene, the angle of the camera during certain scenes of the filming), but the acting was atrocious. Most of this was because of the actors you employed, but the script didn't help it much. The dialogue didn't flow between the characters and seemed contrived or forced.
DuaneMThomas 1 year ago
even know its knot the REAL mirrors it twas still good
SquiggleFox 1 year ago
fuck the barking dog in the background and FUCK YOU
slipknotfanalex21 1 year ago
i think this is interesting, you should expand on it. I can actually relate this to me. I talk just like the character in this script. People always criticize me for it and I believe that society is no good.Good film.
zepeterinma 1 year ago
So.... [silence for a while]
Um.... you made this video, ju-st so your writing skills could possibly get notice by some famous director or writer OR something?!?!
hmm.... my feedback is, Mr.Weeney's acting S-U-C-K-S! and the story is a bit bore to me. write more interesting one's with full of suspense/action/drama ...etc. ya know.
ultraviolet95 1 year ago
goddamn it!im looking for the movie not this lame dogshit!look,if you guys wanted to upload fuckin movies then make sure it wouldn't annoy the hell out of us!this video is nonsense!go and fuckyourself and be burned in hell you cocksucker!
UndYinGsAnITY 1 year ago
THIS is bettr than the original movie. lol
didiuanna10 1 year ago
xeshmo!!!axaxaxaxa0xa0ax0ax0ax0
TheManiosable 1 year ago
The squirrel was the best part.
PerverseRequiem 1 year ago
Is it really imposible to find a movie on here that people didnt remake into retarted films....If u feel the same way press like.>:(
cortney22446 1 year ago
all u fuckin want r bloody views well ges wah i turned it of sfter dah first 5 secz! and after readin da comments ur just a fuckin sad piece of shit!
zanessaforever061 1 year ago
thiz iz zo stupid my lil cuzin dnt lik this and she only 4 years old
reshiaphoo1 1 year ago
i love this, it made me laugh :)
BubbleiliciousTwins 1 year ago
aighalya
aichi gand tuzya
yedya bhokachya
aadii229 1 year ago
fuck you stupid bitch! retards like me will kick your ass where i come from so i suggest you shut the fuck up cus you dont know me and this video is a bunch of bullshit!
joserodriguezization 1 year ago
@joserodriguezization i'm on probation for stabbin a man.
fuck off.
HrachStarMedia 1 year ago 19
@HrachStarMedia do u want a medal for that? WOW u stabed a Man do u want a Medal? ur pretty tuff for stabbed a man arnt u?
AussieGhost869 1 year ago
@HrachStarMedia wait if u live in canada yull know me well and i just got probatation for beating this kid up on the street i broke alot of stuff ill give off a bit both legs broken broken 4 ribs and both arms and twisted hnd dont know if that counts i was listening to music from mk (mortal combat ) lol
mohamedashrafsalem 1 year ago
@HrachStarMedia How many times?
SilverSalros 1 year ago
@HrachStarMedia ur cool u stabbed someone ooo ur fucking cool omg so hard so gangster omg haha joke.
stacks6969allday 10 months ago
@HrachStarMedia look we dont want to hear about how you sodomize man! just title this something else. we unwillingly give you views because we are mislead by damn titles!!
JuanOfaKind88 8 months ago
@HrachStarMedia
WTF LOL.
JudasGodga 5 months ago
@HrachStarMedia your a scary bitch than. @joserodriguezization love what u said!
Cokelover1365 5 months ago
this video sucks SO MUTCH BALLS! i was lookin for the 2008 mirrors movie not this lame piece of shit! this deserves no stars! b-cus it sucked so mutch ass go screw yourself in the butthole fuker!
joserodriguezization 1 year ago
@joserodriguezization thanks man!
i'm glad retards like you leave absolutely no constructive criticism. i mean i could care less if you liked it or not, but tell me why, not rambling bullshit that comes from your ass
HrachStarMedia 1 year ago 3
@joserodriguezization well if u werent just nother troller u can see in the descriptio 'a teenage boy' the real movie has an adult so give the kid a break
jmanx20 11 months ago
@joserodriguezization I AGREE! xD
invaderbones 11 months ago
PUTA
LUISMARLONJEFER 1 year ago
this is a pretty good story and obviously a lot of effort has gone into it but the the actors kinda let the whole thing down a bi... sorry only 3 stars from me but i still think it was an excelent idea :D
aileeiscool 1 year ago
This is really quite something. 5*!
Nayoko7 2 years ago
well thank you
HrachStarMedia 1 year ago
Did you create everything yourself? I love the character Calvin, his speech is an interesting twist nowadays and I kinda agree with his pessimistic views. To put it simple: Calvin rocks! Great video, man.
ClayMastah344 2 years ago
thanks!
HrachStarMedia 1 year ago
very good ! 5/5
i´m going to study actoring next year :)
FreestyleSkunk 2 years ago
awesome that's good to hear man
and i'm very pleased you enjoyed this
HrachStarMedia 2 years ago
Cool, I'm sure you'll do good (according to what I just saw). Good luck!
ClayMastah344 2 years ago
This is incredible! EXCELLENT job, man!
KyleSurette13 2 years ago
thank you Kyle sir! Glad you enjoyed it
HrachStarMedia 2 years ago
I liked it, it actually looked professional. Way to go man!
lolcakewut 2 years ago
thank you very much!!
HrachStarMedia 2 years ago
Is your goal to be in the professional movie directing business or is this just a hobby of yours?
lolcakewut 2 years ago
well next year I'm going to be at college studying and whatnot to pursue a career in film. I'm not sure what area I want to concentrate in, either Directing, Editing, Cinematography, or Screenwriting, but I really enjoy Directing!
HrachStarMedia 2 years ago
Nice! That's some really good stuff.
Averilli1 2 years ago
thank you!!
HrachStarMedia 2 years ago
Your welcome and it is good stuff so keep it up.
Averilli1 2 years ago
i'll try my best!
HrachStarMedia 2 years ago
meh acting is TOO FAKE
mupet3p 2 years ago
yeah i hear ya, thanks mupet!
HrachStarMedia 2 years ago
que estupides , lo mas grande tremendo cojudaso
Juliowasonx 3 years ago
tienes no le gusta la pelicula? que esta estupido por la pelicula?
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
Holy shit!
Since when did this have so many views! Haha, once again great job!
Aaronpowellfilms 3 years ago
haha wow.
everyone thinks it was that shitty horror movie that came out last year. I would easily choose this movie over that any day. Haha.
Aaronpowellfilms 3 years ago
haha yeah man I know, and I mean the movie is kinda boring but it took a lot of thought process to write this so I hope people weren't expecting like a huge violent epic film. I'm glad you appreciate it though!
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
ehm.. get a life!!!
kakabli31 3 years ago 15
got a life, been usin it to make videos!
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
@kakabli31 Get a life yourself. You were searching for mirrorS, the movie, right, well next time read the title and don't blame others for your own shitty mistakes.
Exzmo 4 months ago
wat the fuck is wrong wit you
menfeeler 3 years ago 2
absolutely nothing is wrong with me?
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
I mean if you wana watch the real Mirrors movie then dont click on Mirror. I mean the difference here is one being plural the other is singular. I mean I dont care that you didnt like the movie, I'll admit it's not for everyone, but obviously it isnt bullshit and time went into the writing and what not for this. So when I ask the question what kind of life do you have when your searchin youtube for a movie and I'm out making movies, how do I not have a life? Kindly go fuck yourself! =]
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
is this the real movie of Mirrors?
maximumxtreme18 3 years ago
yes T_T
teeku666 3 years ago
haha no this is Mirror
i mean unless you think the lead in it resembles Jack Bauer?
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
nope ! this is "Mirror" not the "MIRRORS" with kieffer sutherland.
garfieldUSA 3 years ago
1:31 hahahaha
jessyweird123 3 years ago
haha gotta love them squirrels
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
when you make a movie for your script, try to make sure your actors don't sound robotic or like they are doing a play for school...you don't want them to sound like they are reading something or are nervous sounding hyper. Make sure they are calm. Try to make your movie actor's voices natural down to earth almost.
MillietheBeast 3 years ago
continued...Also try to add a narrator for the movie, tell background info. add more personality to your characters. You don't want your viewers to get bored so spice it up. I hope my opinion helps you in some way.
MillietheBeast 3 years ago
This movie how long?
TanPengChuen 3 years ago
well this part and the second part combined about a good 15 mins
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
14:21 to be precise xD lol
freerunningrocks 2 years ago
???
HrachStarMedia 2 years ago
It's good. Did you write the scrpt for it? Or...
lovablelicilious 3 years ago
Thank you mucho!
And yes I did write the script for it!
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
is bad
chimiguary 3 years ago
welp a lil more info on why you dislike it will allow me to work on my upcoming projects.
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
amazing film thank you for posting it up Also good writing in more info
Yerza1001 3 years ago 2
thanks so much Yerza1001!
I'm glad you enjoyed it =]
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
JAJAJAJAJAJA FUCK
gotax666 3 years ago
die and go to hell!!
gotax666 3 years ago
hey gotax!
go shove a huge 6 foot pipe in your ass! then go jump off a cliff! this is the good part gotax you paying atttention?!?! make sure you land on your ass so that fucking pipe shoots right out your mouth! this is a more modern version of what ancient tribes use to do, its called piking!!! =]
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
jajaja xD fuck you
gotax666 3 years ago
f.u
fatmihh 3 years ago
right
good one
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
asdfghjqwerty
Nuzhat120 3 years ago
that good huh?
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
ooops i dint realise i sent a comment hehe myy bad lol:P
Nuzhat120 3 years ago
hah it's fine
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
nice idea, not great acting tho tbh, lol.
manuchamp99 3 years ago
haha i know man
i give them credit tho, i mean it is alot harder tryin to be serious than comedic
but thanks tho, your criticism is appreciated
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
haha, yeah i know, i've tried lol.
manuchamp99 3 years ago
well at least you are polite about it
you dont leave pointless shit like gotax666
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
ha, yeah :] have u thought of sending ur work into a production company or anything?
manuchamp99 3 years ago
no i havent yet
i would probably want to re-shoot this
but currently I am workin on a screenplay for a 70 minute film and another one for a 20 min. film
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
fuck you!
gotax666 3 years ago
if you are going to leave impotent and insignificant remarks towards my film that are not contructively criticizing my film, please dont fucking comment.
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
wut
FailYouDo 3 years ago
i like it!
outrayjess 3 years ago
thanks!
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
wtf is this garbage
W3B5TA 3 years ago
this is an attempt at writing a psychological thriller
apparently you dont like it
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
its like copyright and just fucking depressing i hate u
W3B5TA 3 years ago
haha copyright no, i made this before that or movie came out which is titled Mirrors, this is Mirror.
Also I mean the point of this movie was to be serious and by that depressing you and causing a random hatred towards me means i did my job
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
i reallly loved the camera angles esp the begging when da dude is on da bench
sweetdreamsabc123 3 years ago
thank you so much!!!
=]
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
that is fantactic
klasas12 3 years ago
thanks! glad you enjoyed it
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
is this the actual mooobie?
ylj9 3 years ago
yes it is
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
no its not
abc123luvi 3 years ago
um yes...it is?
i mean read the description if you are confused?
i really dont know what to say
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
i meant this is not the original mirrors movie that came out on theatres sweetheart
abc123luvi 3 years ago
ohhh my bad
well see due to the limited information implying this was the real Mirrors movie obviously I just assumed you were referring to my movie
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
lol...yeah, i meant the other one...your vid's good tho
abc123luvi 3 years ago
ah thanks, i mean i'm sure it's nothing compared to Kieth Sutherland's Mirrors but whatever haha
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
lol...was this supposed to be a school project or you just did it for fun?
abc123luvi 3 years ago
i just did this for fun haha
it was also to the first movie shot with my new camera
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
Great job so far. I liked how you ended part 1 hahah. Only thing I have to say is when you do an over the shoulder shot when you were having the conversation with grandfather, stick to the same side. Eg. If the camera is on the LEFT shoulder of yours , then the camera should be on the RIGHT shoulder of grandfathers. I must say that your writing abilities pwn.
RenderingGlintFilms 3 years ago
Alright thanks for the informative feedback, I'll make sure I do that next time I have a conversation.
Also thanks so much for the writing compliment, that was my main priority in this film and I am glad people are enjoying it!
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
awesome!!!!!!
skadoucheproductions 3 years ago
thanks!
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
good so far, the Little Miss Sunshine music fits well at the beginning.
kmattson118 3 years ago
thanks man! yeah i'm surprised how well the Little Miss Sunshine music fit this movie
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago