Captivating storytelling! Thank you for sharing your work like this. While I agree that your writing is good enough to publish, I must admit I do quite prefer the special charm and delivery that you add in your videos.
Thank you for making these videos, i am a 16 year old boy in america and i agree with c0000lcat with him saying that i would rather watch your videos than any other stupid things!
My phone began ringing as you got into the story_ ignoring the phone's demanding ring tone was easy, so well did your story telling hold me. However much truth or the lack thereof, thank you for the drama. Excellent!
Having just finished a creative writing class and communications, I will be the first to attest to the difficulty of writing and editing a paper under time constraints. You did a wonderful job and your deliver was spot on. I look forward to more of your short stories.
You are such a cheeky devil. I thought "what the hell is the matter with him? Where is this story going to lead?" and then came the unveiling of the story. Beautiful. Peter, you are a lot of fun. I wish I could meet you some day.
Aw GrandDad, Thanks so much for sharing with us.. You are very talented and combined with your voice and demeanor, I always thoroughly enjoy your stories. I wish you would recite more of your stories on a regular basis or compile a book of stories. I for one would be very interested in purchasing it.
@Tessietots Im not saying this with flippancy but I do really love you and consider you a GrandDad. My online GrandDad and have been watching you for years. May God Bless you this new year and I hope to see and hear much more from you. x
@basicloner Elements of the story had some truth in that I did stay with the son of the Reeves family when they went out with my parents but the rest is imagination.
i just turned seventeen, and i swear i would rather sit down with you and have a cup of coffee and just listen to you tell stories about the past, or even ones like this, instead of going out and partying, or watching tv all day long. more teenagers should watch your videos.
@c0000lcat Thank you, it is nice to know that some young people like yourself look at my videos. I have written many more stories but they are too long to read and keep the attention of many.
Thank you, Peter. That was a great story. You reminded me that at that time, when I was just a toddler, and we lived in Gorse Rd. (you know it), my father was in the Home Guard. He was a reserved occupation engineer working at LSE. We had a ditch at the bottom of the garden, formerly a cesspit, and my mother made him keep his rifle in it. She would not allow a gun in the house. Those days were so long ago, but your stories always bring back those memories as if they were only yesterday.
What a fantastic story! If you don't mind me asking, what was your time limit, I'm wondering how long it took to write? lol.. I'm quite surprised that it was written within a limited time because it's extremely well-written and superbly narrated of course. And I loved the final sentence about *** (SPOILER: DON'T READ BEFORE WATCHING) *** repelling alone the German soldiers. Brilliant stuff.
@Gorguruga Our sessions were over a two hour period I think, some of which was discussing previous work so perhaps one and a half hours of work, scribbled down in long hand but we did do a little editing at home before presenting the piece for criticism the following week. I don't think that I edited this piece very much as it is a true story....apart from the ending.
Hi, Peter, It's been awhile since I've visited your site. I'm glad to see you are still enjoying social networking and sharing yourself with the world. You have a gift.
Oh what a nice story, Iremember my mom told me so many stories about the war from her childhood in Toronto during WW2, some sad, some funny, some unbelievable compared to how it was when I was young, and my dad telling me some stories about how it was in Quebec City during WW2, all memorable, take care and have a good day!
The Sweeney Todd reference worked for me, due to Tim Burton's movie (starring Johnny Depp). Praise be to mdern cinema!
And I know that, as a kid, I had my share of kinda distorted views on certain grown-ups + their ways, too. Looking back today, nothing much of that remains, of course, but back then, you could not have talked me out of it.
Unlike the subject of this story, though, I never had such an experience. The war had been over to long (thankfully), and I didn't live in the USA, either..
Addendum: "and I didn't live in the USA, either.." - in reference of weapons to be found there in way more households there than I will ever be able to understand.
Even in the 70s, Adults were always refered to as Mr or Mrs... And the best friends of Mum & Dad were refered to as Auntie or Uncle. My dads best friend was about 7ft tall, he went everwhere on a bicycle. A realy great guy, Always called him Uncle Harold, He would probably be in his late 90s, if he were still alive. But if he was he would still be Uncle Harold. Such a great guy he was. A bit like you being "Grandad" To so many.
Peter, you are such a blessing... Please do more video's like this one, I found myself sitting on the edge of my seat hanging on every word. Thank you so much for sharing.
Captivating storytelling! Thank you for sharing your work like this. While I agree that your writing is good enough to publish, I must admit I do quite prefer the special charm and delivery that you add in your videos.
ImpactoJonathan 2 weeks ago
you should wright books!
MandilarUR 1 month ago
Thank you for making these videos, i am a 16 year old boy in america and i agree with c0000lcat with him saying that i would rather watch your videos than any other stupid things!
MandilarUR 1 month ago
Like this if you think This man should be a Author/Writer
MegaTacos911 1 month ago
My phone began ringing as you got into the story_ ignoring the phone's demanding ring tone was easy, so well did your story telling hold me. However much truth or the lack thereof, thank you for the drama. Excellent!
CrampedGrampy 1 month ago
Having just finished a creative writing class and communications, I will be the first to attest to the difficulty of writing and editing a paper under time constraints. You did a wonderful job and your deliver was spot on. I look forward to more of your short stories.
bleemer420 1 month ago
Wow, your technique for telling a story changed--very good. Like the dramatic special effects.
Happy New Year!
ptbernard 1 month ago
Excellent story, masterfully presented Peter! There's been too many boys who have met an early demise in just such a situation.
downhill240 2 months ago
You are such a cheeky devil. I thought "what the hell is the matter with him? Where is this story going to lead?" and then came the unveiling of the story. Beautiful. Peter, you are a lot of fun. I wish I could meet you some day.
Bernie1927 2 months ago
good suspense and imagery! I enjoyed this :)
liwymi 2 months ago
Thank you for an interesting story again. I listen to you whenever I have time.
hhgygy 2 months ago
happy new years peter, and many more to come. <3
themaclover4ever 2 months ago
Great Peter!
daveyboyz 2 months ago
Great story and great reading Peter. Thank you. Have a splendid New Year, Ciao.
whataboutAlfie 2 months ago
Aw GrandDad, Thanks so much for sharing with us.. You are very talented and combined with your voice and demeanor, I always thoroughly enjoy your stories. I wish you would recite more of your stories on a regular basis or compile a book of stories. I for one would be very interested in purchasing it.
Tessietots 2 months ago
@Tessietots Im not saying this with flippancy but I do really love you and consider you a GrandDad. My online GrandDad and have been watching you for years. May God Bless you this new year and I hope to see and hear much more from you. x
Tessietots 2 months ago
is this a true story or are you making it up
basicloner 2 months ago
@basicloner Elements of the story had some truth in that I did stay with the son of the Reeves family when they went out with my parents but the rest is imagination.
geriatric1927 2 months ago
@geriatric1927 do you watch dr who.......theres 40 years of episodes you have to like some of it
basicloner 2 months ago
what a great story
hulkthefuror 2 months ago
i like this! is there more?
jeaniebaby001 2 months ago
This was so great, you are so cool.
hejmitnavnersarah 2 months ago
i just turned seventeen, and i swear i would rather sit down with you and have a cup of coffee and just listen to you tell stories about the past, or even ones like this, instead of going out and partying, or watching tv all day long. more teenagers should watch your videos.
c0000lcat 2 months ago
@c0000lcat Thank you, it is nice to know that some young people like yourself look at my videos. I have written many more stories but they are too long to read and keep the attention of many.
geriatric1927 2 months ago
Would love to hear more of the stories you have written :0)
ShrinkMi 2 months ago
Thank you Peter, and have a lovely New year celebrations :)
bebenut123 2 months ago
Excellent story! You should share more like this! Happy New Year to you!
ShakespearesChin 2 months ago
Thank you, Peter. That was a great story. You reminded me that at that time, when I was just a toddler, and we lived in Gorse Rd. (you know it), my father was in the Home Guard. He was a reserved occupation engineer working at LSE. We had a ditch at the bottom of the garden, formerly a cesspit, and my mother made him keep his rifle in it. She would not allow a gun in the house. Those days were so long ago, but your stories always bring back those memories as if they were only yesterday.
derekcolman 2 months ago
You had me hook, line and sinker waiting for what would be in that suitcase! To my relief I am pleased it wasn't a body...lol
A great story and well told. I did enjoy your pauses for refreshment, removal of your tie etc. So relaxed and homely...altogether lovely Peter.
whistonlass 2 months ago
You are a very talented man. Be proud.
xOnTheWayDownx 2 months ago
What a very interesting story Peter! I love the stories of your youth!
russtex 2 months ago
I love your stories!
jeffaroche 2 months ago
You are such a good story teller! I love how you did those dramatic pauses. I was hanging on every word!
Oh yes, Merry Christmas to you and a Happy New Year!
Love,
annie in NH USA
amjPeace 2 months ago
Bravo, nicely done...
O,
Opinionator52 2 months ago
Great story, I had no clue what he was pulling out of that case, Keep going I love to listen. Love ya Happy New Year!
oneiblind30 2 months ago
Dayaaam! You are such a good story teller!!
SSanf 2 months ago
BRILLIANT!!!!!!... Well Done!
hugglebear69 2 months ago
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What a fantastic story! If you don't mind me asking, what was your time limit, I'm wondering how long it took to write? lol.. I'm quite surprised that it was written within a limited time because it's extremely well-written and superbly narrated of course. And I loved the final sentence about *** (SPOILER: DON'T READ BEFORE WATCHING) *** repelling alone the German soldiers. Brilliant stuff.
Gorguruga 2 months ago
@Gorguruga Our sessions were over a two hour period I think, some of which was discussing previous work so perhaps one and a half hours of work, scribbled down in long hand but we did do a little editing at home before presenting the piece for criticism the following week. I don't think that I edited this piece very much as it is a true story....apart from the ending.
geriatric1927 2 months ago
Hi, Peter, It's been awhile since I've visited your site. I'm glad to see you are still enjoying social networking and sharing yourself with the world. You have a gift.
npeace 2 months ago
Oh what a nice story, Iremember my mom told me so many stories about the war from her childhood in Toronto during WW2, some sad, some funny, some unbelievable compared to how it was when I was young, and my dad telling me some stories about how it was in Quebec City during WW2, all memorable, take care and have a good day!
veolettina 2 months ago
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Gorguruga 2 months ago
The Sweeney Todd reference worked for me, due to Tim Burton's movie (starring Johnny Depp). Praise be to mdern cinema!
And I know that, as a kid, I had my share of kinda distorted views on certain grown-ups + their ways, too. Looking back today, nothing much of that remains, of course, but back then, you could not have talked me out of it.
Unlike the subject of this story, though, I never had such an experience. The war had been over to long (thankfully), and I didn't live in the USA, either..
Truedantalion 2 months ago
@Truedantalion
Addendum: "and I didn't live in the USA, either.." - in reference of weapons to be found there in way more households there than I will ever be able to understand.
Truedantalion 2 months ago
Even in the 70s, Adults were always refered to as Mr or Mrs... And the best friends of Mum & Dad were refered to as Auntie or Uncle. My dads best friend was about 7ft tall, he went everwhere on a bicycle. A realy great guy, Always called him Uncle Harold, He would probably be in his late 90s, if he were still alive. But if he was he would still be Uncle Harold. Such a great guy he was. A bit like you being "Grandad" To so many.
paul1967uk 2 months ago
Great story Peter!
bunnytrix 2 months ago
Awesome videos!
PSExposed 2 months ago
Great story and well told Peter!
ncautoman57 2 months ago
You're a fantastic storyteller!
SebAlva 2 months ago
God bless you!
dudefrombelgium 2 months ago
I love the way you build up about the 2thing" (dont want to ruin it for anyone) You really had me thinking you wanted to see something else.
Great story anyway.
FAB12UCB 2 months ago
Such a lovely story. Thank you so much for sharing this :)
Smokescreen1982 2 months ago
I can't wait...
daligoddess2006 2 months ago
I really liked this :)
RoxxyRiotT 2 months ago
Thanks for sharing this entertaining story...
fehquig 2 months ago
On the internet, you are immortal.
Pianoguy32 2 months ago
Brilliant, thank you for sharing.
Ir0nIsland 2 months ago
very inspiring, u remind me of my dad <3
theteacake 2 months ago
very interesting. Peter can tell a good story..
kdyken 2 months ago
Peter, you are such a blessing... Please do more video's like this one, I found myself sitting on the edge of my seat hanging on every word. Thank you so much for sharing.
"We all need each other." - Leo Buscaglia
DarkShadows791 2 months ago
WHAT 2 POOPS DISLIKED THIS!!
ImWellFunny 2 months ago
a lovely story, thank you for sharing
-Sarah
BellamyBlue 2 months ago
Keep your videos coming!
kylefer 2 months ago
You sure you wernt doing anything else in his mum bedroom sounds a dodgy story to me !
alan4391 2 months ago
Loved it. :)
TheThunderDragoon 2 months ago
that was awesome
link858 2 months ago
good story :)
devilboy744 2 months ago
Very intresting I love it. <3 ur awesome
moniii9 2 months ago
you are a wise man with wise words
1wagurl 2 months ago
ill be back to watch/comment, need to go to work though. But i'm sure i can say thank you before watching !
sk8er4ever0101 2 months ago