Thunder and Lightning - Original Song

[rhopen]

Now this is the real Thunder and Lightning :o) -Ron

[trev200808]

love it

[Sweetheart4mca]

This is a REALLY good song! I love it!!

[dancingwdeer]

nice.

[coolanddark]

Excellent original composition!!! I can hear this on the radio!!! I definitely think it should be. Great song!!!

[duckscli]

Thanks so much Dan

[dusstead]

Great Duncan, very interesting and very well done, you have a great voice too my friend *****

Brian

[duckscli]

Thanks a lot Brian

[2xVitamR]

It's great Duncan.

Have a nice week

Michael

[duckscli]

Thank you Michael

[sevenender]

great...great...great...this is so amazing...great!

[duckscli]

Thank you ; )

[CurtisMateer]

Your voice is so old, I find it hard to match with the guy in the picture. That alone is interesting. And there is so much more to find interesting too.

PS: Just been trying to mix a few songs...the thunder sounds remind me of crackly noise I had to work hard to remove as best I could. Darn it, one crackle can take up so much time!

[robby63]

I can totally hear this being played on the radio, Duncan. It has all the elements of a hit song.

faved

Robby

[duckscli]

Thank you so much Robby

[CharmedQuarkZ99]

Hey Duncan....Im hearing your EJ and JT influence here....I mean that in a good way....

[duckscli]

Thanks a lot Richard

[Ottawarocket]

I personally love this one Duncan *****

Rocket

[duckscli]

Thank you very much Rob

[knappydanny]

I thought it was a little predictable and cliche' compared to some of your other songs. I guess you can't please everyone ! sorry, just giving you my first response. I think most hit songs are predictable and cliche' too, so maybe it's a hit ?!

[duckscli]

Fair enough bro, I totally understand what you mean. Hope you're keeping well.

[TanteA]

What a song... I love the lyrics... and I love the chord changes you used, especially on 1:21. Great...

Nice greetings from Anette

[duckscli]

Thank you Anette ; )

[Oswlek]

Great verse lyric structure with the repetition on the 1st and 3rd lines. It brings the 4th line forward because the listener expects those to repeat as well. I also like how the 4th line spills over onto the 4th.

This could easily have added another chorus and a coda without any detrimental effects. Hell, you could probably have done a completely new verse, chorus and then tacked the first verse on as you did here and still not done too much.

[duckscli]

Thanks for the sound advice as always Justin

[rhopen]

This is one of your best Duncan, and I think the thing I like most is the chord structure in the chorus (or middle section). It is really great. Looking forward to hearing more mon fre :o) -Ron

[Cameragirl803]

Loved this Duncan! Very catchy tune and lyrics..one that will stick in my head...Really enjoyed it so much!! Fived and faved:))

[duckscli]

Thank you very much Jane

[Johnfern99]

Awesome original! Five stars!

[duckscli]

Thank you very much John

[KurzWeberProdigy]

Amazing!

Happy Halloween Duncan!

[duckscli]

Thank you ;)

[stufish4040]

You're such a natural lyricist, mate :] I love the sound- rhyme of 'road ' and 'sold'. You have real flair.

- Stu -

[duckscli]

Thank you very much Stu, hope we can catch up soon.

[mommarox2]

Duncan, this is absolutely beautiful hon.the words are very heartfelt. A great way to describe turmoil in a relationship... thunder and lightning

Happy Halloween hun

endless starz with lots of goodies too. LOL

[duckscli]

Thank you very much, so great to hear from you :)

[choro1981]

Hello Duncan,great job on this song. Happy Halloween. Peace

[duckscli]

Thanks for your support as always