The emotion sounded forced - especially at the end. The pitch in his voice is also too high. The dialogue sounds rushed as well. A close up shot would have saved this, or at minimum, a slow dolly-in from a medium shot to the close up.
its brave of you to put up a scene that was well written and well acted out because its already been done so greatly and people just have expectations of this being just as good or better than the scene
and you definitely did a great job because it wasnt how philip seymour hoffman did it
Thanks movieposterboy. I appreciate honest but respectful critique. We could only do one take on this scene and there was only one camera shot available throughout. Yet I understand your advice and perspective thanks.
talented? Oh yeah, Phil's got talent all right. He almost had that guy believin' him! Did you hear the desperation in his voice? His plams sweating? The tragic cancer stories? You the man rb.. hehe
i don't buy it. sorry man, but PSH's performance is hard to match
alittlemikeful 6 months ago
Question:Where is Philip Seymour Hoffman? Answer :Not in this video!
feck2112 11 months ago
The emotion sounded forced - especially at the end. The pitch in his voice is also too high. The dialogue sounds rushed as well. A close up shot would have saved this, or at minimum, a slow dolly-in from a medium shot to the close up.
CoffeeBeanBrown 2 years ago
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suckitmusic 2 years ago
Who thinks Philip Seymour Hoffman would make a great Sadistic Penguin in a Batman Movie?
LegallyMoi 2 years ago 4
Great Job!
CMHCChannel 2 years ago
this is great
its brave of you to put up a scene that was well written and well acted out because its already been done so greatly and people just have expectations of this being just as good or better than the scene
and you definitely did a great job because it wasnt how philip seymour hoffman did it
im just saying great job!
cameronjamesparker 2 years ago
haha this was fun, i just dont understand what the guy on the phone had to do with it ^^
123klaas123 3 years ago
close up..let the eyes act. like hoffman does.
valmont2525 3 years ago 2
thanks valmont. All constructive critiques welcome. :)
ronbarba 3 years ago
this is great! I am applying to LACC acting right now. i hope i make it!
kajslare4 3 years ago
Thanks movieposterboy. I appreciate honest but respectful critique. We could only do one take on this scene and there was only one camera shot available throughout. Yet I understand your advice and perspective thanks.
ronbarba 3 years ago
there wasn't evough worry in the actors voice. Not too natural. The camera should have had more close ups on the guys face too.
movieposterboy 3 years ago
I love this too!
slavchik 3 years ago
I love this!
dgivy 4 years ago
Hey Ron, Get your butt into film, Man!
You have a gift,dude! you know who I am...
deemoe7301 4 years ago
who, pray tell are you deemoe?
ronbarba 4 years ago
Someone who knows good talent, that who! lol.
deemoe7301 4 years ago
you really need to try out for a movie role
2BlakliteStudios2 4 years ago
2Blaklite. You are the best. I will soon. Paying off a terrible debt I accrued through a gambling habit. But thanks.
ronbarba 4 years ago
thats tough man... but i have a feeling youll beat it
2BlakliteStudios2 4 years ago
not as good as Philip Seymour Hoffman, but good
n0nameTAZ 4 years ago
Indeed...you are awesomely talented.
1angryartist 4 years ago
talented? Oh yeah, Phil's got talent all right. He almost had that guy believin' him! Did you hear the desperation in his voice? His plams sweating? The tragic cancer stories? You the man rb.. hehe
squidaudio 4 years ago
Exelent job ron! You are a very talented person.
illegalsmile64 4 years ago
Oh, I had to watch this one again and give you more props. Can you surprise me in New York by showing up in the scrubs? Hehe.
Gummy421 4 years ago
Wow, Mr Barba, you are the man... great scene, great acting.... wow....so proud of you man!
luisoffanclubx 4 years ago
passionate!
boopityba 4 years ago
not bad.. Would rather see you play the tom cruise part its funny as hell..
tabasco4706 4 years ago
Yay! I love this video... #3 behind Bob and Mr. ADD. Love the scrubs too. You're so money and don't even know it!
Gummy421 4 years ago