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The lyrics "期望救主賜下永生...會施憐憫" have certain sense of uncertainty which do not match the tone for the rest of the lyrics .
Anyway , it is a meaningful song and I'd rather use the lyric "祈望救主 引導我心 (x3)
祈望靠主 廣施憐憫" .
lkc38 2 years ago
I completely disagree, sorry!
greenpharoah 2 years ago
Thank you for your feedback .
Another song by Brothers CHUNG , namely "愛的經典" , does have similar questions left to the listener which may require elaborations by the author ,
that is "我一生奉獻出愛的經典" . Is that sung in 1st person?
I'd rather the lyric be changed to
"跟祢共並肩面對目前,
我一生效法主愛的經典"
I like these 2 songs of Brothers CHUNG mostly .
@lkc38 Doesn't really matter...to each his own when it comes to writing/creativity, as both are within the realm of the Bible.
worldspacechina 1 month ago
Excellent!
optionlaw 2 years ago 23
god bless u two.
Be strong in the entertainment industry.
clemens468 2 years ago 35
有D似許氏兄弟
Gilsohk 2 years ago 14
I love the feel.
SO special.
New in Cantonese
God bless you.
.
Gilsohk 2 years ago 13
This comment has received too many negative votes show
The lyrics "期望救主賜下永生...會施憐憫" have certain sense of uncertainty which do not match the tone for the rest of the lyrics .
Anyway , it is a meaningful song and I'd rather use the lyric "祈望救主 引導我心 (x3)
祈望靠主 廣施憐憫" .
lkc38 2 years ago
I completely disagree, sorry!
greenpharoah 2 years ago
Thank you for your feedback .
Another song by Brothers CHUNG , namely "愛的經典" , does have similar questions left to the listener which may require elaborations by the author ,
that is "我一生奉獻出愛的經典" . Is that sung in 1st person?
I'd rather the lyric be changed to
"跟祢共並肩面對目前,
我一生效法主愛的經典"
I like these 2 songs of Brothers CHUNG mostly .
lkc38 2 years ago
@lkc38 Doesn't really matter...to each his own when it comes to writing/creativity, as both are within the realm of the Bible.
worldspacechina 1 month ago
Excellent!
optionlaw 2 years ago 23
god bless u two.
Be strong in the entertainment industry.
clemens468 2 years ago 35
有D似許氏兄弟
Gilsohk 2 years ago 14
I love the feel.
SO special.
New in Cantonese
God bless you.
.
Gilsohk 2 years ago 13