(From BlogTV discussion) "hypocrisy" That's the word I was telling you about that feels out of place the way you do it. It just feels "forced" in there. While it loses a very necessary word in that verse, if you deleted that word it flows fine...with it, it just seems clumsy...or something. Don't know how to fix it though. Perhaps flowing it straight off the prior syllables instead of the break between...change the wording...don't know.
It's brill. Sung to key. Nice job. Now all you need is a harmonizing sound. Maybe a complimentary violin, or cello. A slight beat on percussion. A secondary voice harmonizing with your, and viola! We have a great, nicely produced song.
So it seems that everyone else used all the words I would like in order to opine about your song. What to do to express my enjoyment properly without sounding like a parrot? You have skill and tallent my friend, and I very much hope to hear more of it in the near future. Peace.
@wam145 Thank you! I'm recording turpentine tonight. My album will be out at the end of december. Look for it on ITUNES! Ha. Still sounds weird. The title of the album is going to be called "Pink Robot". Thanks again!
@youngn420 I recorded it at home. Wrote it and recorded in 8 hours. Used a toneport ux2, cad condenser, shure sm58, and of course my Martin DM. I mixed and mastered in Ableton live 8.1. Remastered in sony vegas 9. Yeah, I did all the mixing. I sent it to a friend who is a sound engineer, and he fucking ripped it to shreds. Ha! I'm going to render the vocal and the guitar separately and send it to him so he can work a little magic, get it to sound better. We shall see. Thanks for the compliment!
Respond to this video...Ahhh, thanks very much. I'm really proud of this song. It is the first piece of music I've written about my religious beliefs. I'm always amazed at what my subs look at on my channel. My music is not a popular feature here. Usually the video would be stuck on 300 views and counting 8 hours after I post. Not with my music though. That's how it always goes. The videos I like the most are the least viewed. Ha! Thanks very much. I'm glad you liked it.
@myjizzureye Yeah, I love the dims. And thanks for at least making an attempt at a compliment. Though it couldn't be you unless you called my song "karaoke esque" Thanks for trying though. Take care.
Awesome, I miss Nesserine!!
0lympia2008 5 months ago
Excellent!
discussislam 5 months ago
You are insanely inspirational in everything you do, and this song just tops it off. So beautiful.
njc281 9 months ago
like your voice
gladtobeno1 1 year ago
You sir, have just made a grown man cry. That was simply beautiful. Mega thumbs up.
Zed1967 1 year ago
Epic win! ^__^
gir908922 1 year ago
those chords are awesome. mind posting them? the third one in the progression before the sus chord is really awesome, but I'm not sure what it is.
mynameaborat993 1 year ago
you really did an awesome job here,
love the original music here,
the quality is awesome both technically, and the music you created by finger and voice.
liked, added to my music playlists, bests, james
TheJamesPope 1 year ago
Awesome! I hope you've enjoyed recording your music.
WhiskeyBentLiz 1 year ago
On a stage with a huge industrial fan blowing at you. Holding the mic stand wearing a silk shirt.
GodlessManitoban 1 year ago
that was utter shite.
hugeackman 1 year ago
(From BlogTV discussion) "hypocrisy" That's the word I was telling you about that feels out of place the way you do it. It just feels "forced" in there. While it loses a very necessary word in that verse, if you deleted that word it flows fine...with it, it just seems clumsy...or something. Don't know how to fix it though. Perhaps flowing it straight off the prior syllables instead of the break between...change the wording...don't know.
Outside of that, liked the rest of it.
KingHeathen 1 year ago
Post a video with Azzy in it so I can see his goofy ass face again.
Trollschool 1 year ago
Gave me shivers.
Ev3rFl0w 1 year ago
It's brill. Sung to key. Nice job. Now all you need is a harmonizing sound. Maybe a complimentary violin, or cello. A slight beat on percussion. A secondary voice harmonizing with your, and viola! We have a great, nicely produced song.
Good shtuff.
Domzdream 1 year ago
Too amazing for words! Your voice is gorgeous. :]
MikomiShizuka 1 year ago
Nice :)
It would be pretty cool if this would get picked by the Atheist Experience for their intro.
What type of mic did you use for this?
MakingTheMetalBand 1 year ago
So it seems that everyone else used all the words I would like in order to opine about your song. What to do to express my enjoyment properly without sounding like a parrot? You have skill and tallent my friend, and I very much hope to hear more of it in the near future. Peace.
rtottenc 1 year ago
Imagine with me a world where you're just an animal: no soul, no meaning, no purpose. Just imagine.
theDracoIX 1 year ago
Oh DUDE!!! :O !
Wow, man...
I´d never...
It´s hard to realise that this is sarcastic meridian, performing this. Very, very good. Very beautiful and true.
Wow, dude keep on if you feel like!
martialme84 1 year ago
could someone please add keyboard (synth) and drums to this song... i think we got a hit !
TheDivineCellphone 1 year ago
This is well simply amazing.
BradAltF4 1 year ago
nice man! :D
GeetarGuy505 1 year ago
I'm going to buy your album 10 times and your music with every one , this is wonderful.
InstantAsperity 1 year ago
I love your voice, Josh. This is a lovely song - lyrics and music.
AuntieDiluvian 1 year ago
I like it.
TheRichDarkEarth 1 year ago
This lad has heart, ... I bet a year or so from now if he keeps it up he will be turning out some darn fine material.
Keep it up mo fo!.
M0THERKN0WSBEST 1 year ago
This is absolutely fucking beautiful
can't wait for the album to come out
UnamericanWerewolf 1 year ago
Very impressive!
Intiom 1 year ago
Awesome!
CerexFlikex 1 year ago
you blew my mind
witchymama 1 year ago
Sounds kinda like Aeon Spoke.
UpTheIrons1994 1 year ago
Sometimes those periods of just working, just doing it, without too much time for considering and second guessing, can yield gold.
Seems yesterday was one of those times for you.
atthetopofmyvoice 1 year ago
That was a very pleasant way to start my day. Thank you.
ATCFDrummer 1 year ago
@caudillo85 Ahhh, thanks very much! You are too kind.
meridianfrost 1 year ago
Your music is really good man! turpentine is my favorite.
wam145 1 year ago
@wam145 Thank you! I'm recording turpentine tonight. My album will be out at the end of december. Look for it on ITUNES! Ha. Still sounds weird. The title of the album is going to be called "Pink Robot". Thanks again!
meridianfrost 1 year ago
@meridianfrost ooh pink robot. i like that. can't wait.
shoogernspyses 1 year ago
@meridianfrost Pink Robot...perhaps a bit pretentious? Just seems a bit over the top to me haha
zapo147 1 year ago
@meridianfrost I will surely look out for it!
wam145 1 year ago
WOW!
premed2 1 year ago
@premed2 Thanks!
meridianfrost 1 year ago
Very nice! =)
TheAtheistSwede 1 year ago
@TheAtheistSwede Thanks very much!
meridianfrost 1 year ago
Awesome! Thanks.
AThagoras 1 year ago
@AThagoras Thank you! And you are Welcome!
meridianfrost 1 year ago
wow!
Umbalafum 1 year ago
@Umbalafum Awww, thanks.
meridianfrost 1 year ago
Sounds really clean did you use a professional studio to record or did you record to pc and do the mastering yourself?
youngn420 1 year ago
@youngn420 I recorded it at home. Wrote it and recorded in 8 hours. Used a toneport ux2, cad condenser, shure sm58, and of course my Martin DM. I mixed and mastered in Ableton live 8.1. Remastered in sony vegas 9. Yeah, I did all the mixing. I sent it to a friend who is a sound engineer, and he fucking ripped it to shreds. Ha! I'm going to render the vocal and the guitar separately and send it to him so he can work a little magic, get it to sound better. We shall see. Thanks for the compliment!
meridianfrost 1 year ago
glad to see you have found nessrriinn and found her words to be beautiful and inspiring
ZombieSexmachine 1 year ago
@ZombieSexmachine She is indeed.
meridianfrost 1 year ago
Meridian, this is brilliant. And the lyrics are fantastic. You have a gift, my friend.
monkeywrench97 1 year ago 4
Respond to this video...Ahhh, thanks very much. I'm really proud of this song. It is the first piece of music I've written about my religious beliefs. I'm always amazed at what my subs look at on my channel. My music is not a popular feature here. Usually the video would be stuck on 300 views and counting 8 hours after I post. Not with my music though. That's how it always goes. The videos I like the most are the least viewed. Ha! Thanks very much. I'm glad you liked it.
meridianfrost 1 year ago
Thank christ somebody uses diminished chords instead of just open 3 chord gayness.
Might wanna back the verb off a bit there fella. Sort of gives it that bad karaoke feel....unless thats the effect you where after :)
myjizzureye 1 year ago
@myjizzureye Yeah, I love the dims. And thanks for at least making an attempt at a compliment. Though it couldn't be you unless you called my song "karaoke esque" Thanks for trying though. Take care.
meridianfrost 1 year ago
@meridianfrost You are a great man and a powerful and virulent lover. I never said the singing was bad just the setup was not doing you justice.
You take care also (^.o)
myjizzureye 1 year ago
I like your music :-)
Klingschor 1 year ago
@Klingschor This comment is awesome. I really appreciate it.
meridianfrost 1 year ago
:D
Was this the song you wrote today?
Or yesterday technically.
Shonem 1 year ago
@Shonem Yep, this is the one. =)
meridianfrost 1 year ago
@meridianfrost
Thank you then, I was all excited to listen to it when everyone was saying how good it was, and for good reason.
T'is awesome.
Shonem 1 year ago