this is a bit of constructive critisism for the future: leave the words on longer, it went away too quick so i couldnt read it. try stretch out the story longer, it was cut a bit too short. Dont put as much of the story in the writing because its better acting it out. Give more of an exciting ending. I hope I helped you. Keep up the good work and keep practising! :)
@xXDragscopezXx wats so bad about dis u are just nasty and horrid u were a noob once and i was but n one ever sees me calling noobs noob in front of there face unless they try to scam me. in fact i bet u are a silly noob who wants to call others noob cos u cant stand bein one. how sad
@sheena666777 awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww u poor thing i could not live with out my mum she nearly diedwen i was 13 but she dident she was verry close and i was at school wen she was at hospital all m other bros and sisters were of in half term but me. i am sooooo sorry to here that
I like it but the problem was that your slide show was too fast and I could not read it well, Hun. U have to work on that point ! But I would give it a 1001%!
@1161sam WATS so bad about cancer u are so nasty cancer is horrid and people die. i bet u dont care about any one else well 1 thing U ARE SOOOOO NASTY AND HORRID ITS UMBELIVEBLE. AND THERE IS NOTHING TO LAGH AT A KID LOSING HER MOTHER PROBEBLY BEING AFRADE AND LONLY
That was cute! But you need to work on some things...And that part that she said See? All my hair gone? That was bad..you should've said "Mommy all your hair is gone..."mom""It's so I can be with you forever hunny -hug-" and she should've been laying by her and her mom dies in the middle of the night..
ok well i get really MAD WHEN PEOPLE JOKE ABOUT CANCER SO SORRY
PINKYBUNNY7 1 day ago
@PINKBUNNY7 oh my gosh I'm so sorry for you. Hope u survive.
armadillogirl999 1 week ago
i have cancer and your making fun of it just kill the yobaby thats really 8575767465 years old
PINKYBUNNY7 1 week ago
I almost cried
chongchong14 1 week ago
OMG 4K VIEWS.ILY ALL ;D
~Alice
onlykittenlove 1 week ago
Its fast I have to pause it to read it
yovillelover1212 2 weeks ago
its good but your sort of making fun of ppl with cancer :(
fallulabell 2 weeks ago
@fallulabell Alice would never do that :O She has cancer herself :(
~Celeste
onlykittenlove 2 weeks ago
this is a bit of constructive critisism for the future: leave the words on longer, it went away too quick so i couldnt read it. try stretch out the story longer, it was cut a bit too short. Dont put as much of the story in the writing because its better acting it out. Give more of an exciting ending. I hope I helped you. Keep up the good work and keep practising! :)
XxPotterForLifexX 1 month ago
@onlykittenlove 3500 already XD
anuka2102 1 month ago
I think this is great! Don't listen to the haters. It wasn't a waste of time, it almost made me cry! :)
iYogirlMMM 1 month ago
@xXDragscopezXx wats so bad about dis u are just nasty and horrid u were a noob once and i was but n one ever sees me calling noobs noob in front of there face unless they try to scam me. in fact i bet u are a silly noob who wants to call others noob cos u cant stand bein one. how sad
LOSER
rosycoolmuffin 1 month ago
noooo that song is sooo sad could not stop cryin
rosycoolmuffin 1 month ago
aww..story is so like my story ... my mom left me :( she is an angel now !!
sheena666777 2 months ago
@sheena666777 awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww u poor thing i could not live with out my mum she nearly diedwen i was 13 but she dident she was verry close and i was at school wen she was at hospital all m other bros and sisters were of in half term but me. i am sooooo sorry to here that
rosycoolmuffin 1 month ago
this was a wast of my time
joeyrapingfool 2 months ago
this is alittle fast but good job :)
SkylarTailee 2 months ago
@cutebabyv70 my granma has lung cancer
ccgirl1993 2 months ago
wtf is this
luisito01234 2 months ago
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Way too fast
hendi2411 2 months ago
Way too fast :D
hendi2411 2 months ago
@onlykittenlove u r my idol! :) but plz can u make ur why not me videos more often?
MsDestiny2002 2 months ago
I like it but the problem was that your slide show was too fast and I could not read it well, Hun. U have to work on that point ! But I would give it a 1001%!
CelesteTay123 3 months ago
your slide shows r too fast to read sorry :L
MsDestiny2002 3 months ago
:( very good sad i would like to see more xx
moloo48 3 months ago
loool cancer
1161sam 3 months ago
@1161sam wats so funny???
onlykittenlove 3 months ago
@onlykittenlove please can you tell me what the music was i really like it and might use it when i start makin vids that will be very soon
rosycoolmuffin 1 month ago
@1161sam WATS so bad about cancer u are so nasty cancer is horrid and people die. i bet u dont care about any one else well 1 thing U ARE SOOOOO NASTY AND HORRID ITS UMBELIVEBLE. AND THERE IS NOTHING TO LAGH AT A KID LOSING HER MOTHER PROBEBLY BEING AFRADE AND LONLY
rosycoolmuffin 1 month ago
That was cute! But you need to work on some things...And that part that she said See? All my hair gone? That was bad..you should've said "Mommy all your hair is gone..."mom""It's so I can be with you forever hunny -hug-" and she should've been laying by her and her mom dies in the middle of the night..
TheXDLOL101 3 months ago
@TheXDLOL101 Oh PLEASE,I have my ways of animating/writing script,but thank you anyway
onlykittenlove 1 week ago
Love it but had to stop every 5seconds to see what they said lol annoying
oliviaangel1006 3 months ago
:'(
joselinetorbay 3 months ago
cute! its really very good!
anuka2102 3 months ago
thats was fast i couldnt read and guys u need to be respective they supporting cancer
mtndanielle 3 months ago
I was about to cry my eyes were watery
1216julieanne 3 months ago
@xXDragscopezXx well then why are you watching it if you dont have anything nice to say dont say it!
RomaLeoniex 3 months ago
cool if you did the "Remix this video...
lovestar281 4 months ago
@xXDragscopezXx says the one that uploaded some stupid game from his stupid webcam....
onlykittenlove 4 months ago
its make me cry... im sad too im my mom died :'(
rosavivien 5 months ago
1k views?Yay :D
onlykittenlove 5 months ago
Huh?????????????????????????????????/
loringreen06 5 months ago
@bunnyboo623 I Agree Too Fast Slow It Uppp Pleez
CuteMarley 5 months ago
@CuteMarley Erm.How do i do it when the vid is already made?
onlykittenlove 5 months ago
@onlykittenlove Im Just Saying That In Next Video You Go Slower Because I Can Barely Read 1 Word
CuteMarley 5 months ago
Loved it it almost made me cry
JBlover160 5 months ago
Can I Remix this onlykittenlove?
LPSLOVERANDICARLY 6 months ago
@LPSLOVERANDICARLY sure?
onlykittenlove 6 months ago
@onlykittenlove Thanks
LPSLOVERANDICARLY 6 months ago
what is the title of the song?
sweetcris15 6 months ago
@sweetcris15 ,,I'll take care of you''by Amy but im not sure which amy
onlykittenlove 6 months ago
Aww I cried...
MissIsabel24 6 months ago
That make me cry :')
beenda4840 6 months ago
it was sad but very nicely done
unicornrainbow17 6 months ago
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JordanzAwesome 6 months ago
AWWW :'(
dinosaurluver101 7 months ago
Can I re-make this?? Please?
HeyItsSicilee11 7 months ago
@HeyItsSicilee11 sure i dont mind
onlykittenlove 7 months ago
Im crying that was bueatiful :')
Imafreakengirl 7 months ago
Thats Kinda Sad.
crazieegurl101 7 months ago
the talking is do damn fast
blushingy 7 months ago
So sad !
shannonpinkflame 7 months ago
oh my gosh i loove sonya sky tv :D
jjmeikle1 7 months ago
is that sonya
yannahemralino 7 months ago
@yannahemralino yes?why?
onlykittenlove 7 months ago
AWWW!!!!
yoville4real 8 months ago
so sad i need a part 2
jassyali 9 months ago