Short Film: Afternoon - New York Film Academy (NYFA)

[polaroidsky]

For some constructive criticism, you might want to work on adding just a few more close ups and switch up the camera angles. For example; you could add a close up on the girl's hands as she twiddles her fingers. This would help magnify emotion. Another thing you could do is add just a little bit of music to fill in the awkward silence, that or make the scenes a little shorter. Longer clips doesn't always create more emotion. I enjoyed watching the flick, I think you have potential. Keep it up.

[Jobs42]

omg the acting was amazing!! the girl is soo pretty

[emceezico]

SHES SO PRETTY .IM IN LOVE

[mjaytmann]

I rather enjoyed this film. Fantastic job. Acting was great, liked the cinematography, good sound & screen direction. I really liked the subtleness of the story. Well written. I found the handheld camera work worked well for me throughout the majority of the film. There was maybe a couple shots that I might have wanted to see more steady. Overall, great film, I give it two thumbs up.

[WeHeartKeyda]

I love it. I cant wait to start at NYFA

[matthewpalance]

this is a good film. beautiful cinematography, great job

[azir111]

the actors are great,the angles it is filmed and everything,just they could say some stuff more often i guess it would have been more interesting,great job 5 stars anyway

[funlog2]

Great film Unique. I especially liked the look of the sence when the light started to drop.