that is soo lovly... thank you. i'm going to try to do tubewrite, you could help, by sending my vids around when there is time to vote. if you have any feed back i would love to here some. there is always room for improvement.
My Major at Universtiy was English Literature and conequently I've studied much Poetry. Your poetry to me is becoming more "concentrated"...words are loaded and images powerful...every line can be discussed and is packed with meanings.
i'm dyslexic and i have a fear of reading in public. so i started going to open mics in houston and i got many good responces from the other poets there, i only do a poem a week because i write many short ones, single concept poems, but i dont want anyone to get burned out. if you like i could do more, and visit some of my old stuff so that you may see the progression. thanks for this comment, the reconition means alot, and any more feed back would be welcomed
the poem was beautiful, read beautifully. You have the most wonderful voice.
thinkmorepink 4 years ago
that is soo lovly... thank you. i'm going to try to do tubewrite, you could help, by sending my vids around when there is time to vote. if you have any feed back i would love to here some. there is always room for improvement.
newcomposition 4 years ago
My Major at Universtiy was English Literature and conequently I've studied much Poetry. Your poetry to me is becoming more "concentrated"...words are loaded and images powerful...every line can be discussed and is packed with meanings.
ZITZON 4 years ago
i'm starting to like you.
i'm dyslexic and i have a fear of reading in public. so i started going to open mics in houston and i got many good responces from the other poets there, i only do a poem a week because i write many short ones, single concept poems, but i dont want anyone to get burned out. if you like i could do more, and visit some of my old stuff so that you may see the progression. thanks for this comment, the reconition means alot, and any more feed back would be welcomed
newcomposition 4 years ago
just played video through....in a rush will come back later...oh there is alot here.....
ZITZON 4 years ago
i´m from argentina, i love how english fit with poem, nice voice, you lookseem very emotional person, nice video
sjmalabo 4 years ago
thank you...
newcomposition 4 years ago