Industrial Goth Beatbox - Papa's Last Shot - C. J. Leon

[lilrocknrollfox]

Papa was a rolling stone... I could drink and for a moment my pain could be gone? papa you miserable muthafucka . . roll on . . . I don't need your suicidal tendencies. . . I am beautiful thanks for the seed but I am going to grow in the sun and live life I AM FREE. roll on dead beat dad. you think you're free. no I am free now of your misery. . . I liked your poem. PEACE MY BROTHA :)

[thesurrationalone]

@lilrocknrollfox Right on!

[thesurrationalone]

No, actually, he disappeared sometime while I was in kindergarten; hence the chicken nuggets. Nothing but a severed limb rotting into poetry.

"Canigger?"

Oh, I get it. You're a technocratic white-American supremacist. On behalf of society, I'm sorry. That's really such a terrible thing to be! You would do well to learn habits of peace, love, and to funnel your anger into non-violent forms of self-expression; but you'll probably just go breed in the dark like your parents before you.

[wienerwienerboobie]

did your alcoholic father send you to school to learn how to criticise me aboot my grammar? canigger?

you need a haircut. and a tan.

[wienerwienerboobie]

a good way to keep your misery current, is watching this.

[thesurrationalone]

Judging from your username and profile, you are obviously a young, creative, talented, and humorous individual with various accomplishments in the fields of musical and dramatic arts. Or maybe not. Forgive me if I take your criticisms with a grain of salt.

Because you constructed a noun phrase in the first part of your sentence, you don't need a comma.

For cheap laughs, listen to the "Anal Sex Icebreaker".

[lullabyescheme]

He is a writer. :)

[thesurrationalone]

Ha. That's pretty funny. This wasn't here when I made that comment.

[csybu]

Are you going to be a writer?

[thesurrationalone]

I am a writer. :)

I have written four book-length volumes of poetry, a novel, newspaper articles, research articles, two albums, art criticism, Slam poetry, all kinds of stuff.

I'm currently working on a concept album about the end of the world. It's pretty fun.

That gypsy finger-picking song you liked, "Cold Clay" about the cursed child raised by wolves, is the first song in the sequence.

Thanks for watching. I do so enjoy the passion of your guitar playing.

[csybu]

cool!

I like what you are doing, keep it up!

Take care,

Edina