The singer seems better than average, but you have to pay attention to the lyrics (since you're not native English speakers, mind your grammar and make sure your verses make sense, both gramatically and in terms of content and meaning) and also mind your accent and how you pronounce words.
Also, the song itself isn't very interesting: it's a bit too repetitive at first, and then just messy when the back vocals come or the rythm changes.
and it is also true that in some parts of the song my pronunciation is not good as I wanted.
but...
my verses make sense, trust in me :)
the meaning of the song is (in terms of content and meaning) not easy to understand ... is what I want :)
anyway, thank you, I'll be more careful on accents and pronunciation and, thank you, the song is maybe more interesting for somebody else (no offense).
It's not as good as it could.
The singer seems better than average, but you have to pay attention to the lyrics (since you're not native English speakers, mind your grammar and make sure your verses make sense, both gramatically and in terms of content and meaning) and also mind your accent and how you pronounce words.
Also, the song itself isn't very interesting: it's a bit too repetitive at first, and then just messy when the back vocals come or the rythm changes.
Keep working hard, though!
lolatwaffles 8 months ago
@lolatwaffles
I'm not native English speaker, that's true...
and it is also true that in some parts of the song my pronunciation is not good as I wanted.
but...
my verses make sense, trust in me :)
the meaning of the song is (in terms of content and meaning) not easy to understand ... is what I want :)
anyway, thank you, I'll be more careful on accents and pronunciation and, thank you, the song is maybe more interesting for somebody else (no offense).
thanks for the advice! :D
SomeoneElse91 7 months ago
lo vrengio rocks
vulgarevenge 9 months ago