Spartan League of Grifball Episode 1

[rrpntballer]

barrow... i hate you.

why cant sam talk?

it would be worth it then

[DeadEmporer]

Great opener! Horrible story! I could use you.....

[Atamisk39]

You didn't seem very enthused while making this video. But over all, not bad.

[GeneralKrunch]

lol 0:51 looks like he is trying to use the 'Force'

[dm1270]

nice HD

[halosparten08]

yea that was kinda good but he should have said he use to be in prison

[Doomsasukeuchiha211]

for such a short show to long of an opening

[JackedLimur]

i guess it was sorta funny but not so much i like the credit stuff and titles but not the talking.I'll try something.

[Guigsy14]

That was cool you should rally make a second part

[xduy93x]

is there a way to make a griffball map on forge?

[ITubeVII]

so uh. . . . good thing you made one episode. Proud of you for that one

[INSIDEZONE88]

what is your halo3 live name? mine is insanezman92. we could play.

[ShotBladeX3]

I got a question when is the next_____Episode coming out you______A holes

-Darliing

[Riokian]

5/5 favorited commented (duh) and subbed! Great job! me and my clan MIGHT be making a few series soon, we need to either fix my cam-corder or use my friend's

[OddYears]

hey what song is that??????? :)))))

[OddYears]

nvm i figuredit out just clicked download this song up there and it showed thename in the link lol

[hypnotizedpro]

its in the credits

[OddYears]

yeah i kinda replied to it...i figured it out...

[IEinnobI]

This is an interesting concept, however it wasn't executed ummmmm whats the words? "exactly good". The intro was a little long and the song annoying. As the other people said more comedy and a couple of the voices sounded robotic. But I give you props for taking your time out and producing this for others to see ;)

[hypnotizedpro]

thanks! i appreciate the comment. but do take notice that this is our clans first machinima. we WILL get better and more comed will come too. thank you for the comment and if you didn't already don't forget to rate! :D

[ferlion4]

wen whoever said this is there story you shouldve put the law and order DUN DUN sound in there

[hypnotizedpro]

lolz never thought of that. goo idea though. and if you didn't do so already don't forget to rate.

[ferlion4]

o i didnt forget 5/5 \m/

[hypnotizedpro]

ty :D machinima wouldn't take it :'(. there was something wrong with their site. Their loss eh?

[ferlion4]

sure is

[lasarack]

-good video quality

-OK sound quality

-pretty bad acting

-pretty bad story

-good concept

-no lowering weapons!

-way to few people

-It's spelled Grifball not Griffball

[hypnotizedpro]

I will tkae all of this into consideration. It's a first time video how ever so the acting WILL improve. I will change the title. And there isn't anyhting I can do about the story-line now, but I guarentee that it will get funnier and more actiony. :D

[spartansketch]

lol nice but it wud be better if u shot it with different camera angles instead of the shortcut way

[PlzzDominator]

Very good i did enjoy it. keep the series going and ill recommend you guys for a christmas gift (hint). CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISICM: needs more comedy

[hypnotizedpro]

alright will do. i'm not exactly the script writer but my friend s. and i guarentee there WILL be more comdey. :D

[slashMANlesp]

hey if u ever need an extra you know who to message. ps, im already bored of cod 5 lol. :)

[ydosgodhate]

ha ok

[ydosgodhate]

NOICE

[EffingFilms]

Nice

[jprsns12345]

Good job guys

-MR killjoy 01