classroom objects ESL (corrected and improved)

[simonfilm]

Hi, I am an English teacher and I also make videos like this, in my opinion the video is ok for second or third cycle of primary education, but... the music does not add anything to the learning, it distracts from the point. I miss the phonetic part which should be much more important than the written word. You can have a look at mine and tell me if you like it. Cheers!

[marinamc1983]

Honestly, I paid no attention to the meaning but to its tune. Is it so bad? If you think so, I can change it easily, please let me know.

[rabbitsareslow1]

@marinamc1983 Thanks for sharing and trying to improve the video. I think both your videos are good, but the music in the first one is more attrative (at least to me) :) , still the background music here is really nice.

[Kanbei85]

How did it not occur to you that a video for teaching students (probably kids) should NOT have a song in the background that contains profanity? Seriously... Otherwise this would have been a useful video.