Get rid of the samples!!!! not in key with the beat man...then in the beginning as an intro add some synth from the moog if you have it in your library...then bounce straight to the beat....leave out the synth while the beat is playing then when you get to the Hook/Chorus add the same synth as i told you to put the beginning and you should be good....just some constructive critisism!!!! not trying to down you in any way shape or form...just trying to bring out the best in your music!!!!
you need to work on using the different sounds..like all at the same time...it doesnt go together but its got potential man...i love it
godsmane10 11 months ago
I agree with Eturnal718 on the points he made,but you got alotta good ideas and with the feedback your getting you can really shine!
RedSkullthagreat 2 years ago
Get rid of the samples!!!! not in key with the beat man...then in the beginning as an intro add some synth from the moog if you have it in your library...then bounce straight to the beat....leave out the synth while the beat is playing then when you get to the Hook/Chorus add the same synth as i told you to put the beginning and you should be good....just some constructive critisism!!!! not trying to down you in any way shape or form...just trying to bring out the best in your music!!!!
Eturnal718 3 years ago
I appreciate the critic..the contructive critisism helps...thats the only way I'm gonna be able to get better.
mdub99 3 years ago
Amen hommie,I can hear where he can take it, you gave some on point advice.
RedSkullthagreat 2 years ago
what he said.
Kuro0ni 3 years ago
needs more
Bballer0905 3 years ago